You can choose your own form of persuasive writing for this lesson, but it must be set in the future. Maybe you can convince some robot overlords to hire you in a letter, or make a speech to a group of dogs who have learned to speak and understand English. Have fun with it, and make sure to use lots of brilliant persuasive techniques!
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Have you mourned over one of your lost dogs, robots? If so, do not panic, UploadForDogs is here. Look no further! It allows a simple upload of anyone’s data and so they will never be forgotten! About 90% of dogs in a recent survey have said that they want to upload another friend’s data into a computer so they can be together forever. This is a mind-blowing change, so come and get yours before it’s too late!
Firstly, this upload is incredibly cheap, only £200 for 2MB of data. Plus, this amazing technology will allow you to survive infinitely, as long as the computer database survives. Even more so, we have even better fun views, and amazing clothes and styles for just £4.99 each! Our faithful customer, Awk, has already uploaded two of his best friend dogs and described this service as, “The best to have ever existed.”
Moreover, we have a talk explaining the life of one of the UploadForDogs members. Here is Chuck Norris telling the story of life in this super company. “Life in this virtual world has been amazing! I have the tastiest dog food every day, delicious old sausages. And there is so much to explore – there are nooks and crannies everywhere! I even got to play with another dog, who became my friend. His name is Charlie, and we played hide and seek, running up and down the house. Also, I even get a bedtime story and a lovely cozy bed, just as if my old master Zoraz IV was here, just to comfort me every night.”
Want to learn how this amazing technology works? Look at the following.
1. Firstly, when your dog is almost dying, then we can upload its data and image onto a computer, which you can interact with.
2. To create special images of your dog, we have produced a VR rope, squishy ball and even a small coat which you can wear!
– The VR rope works like this. There is a real rope, but we have constructed one which mimics a dog’s pull. If you put on 3-D glasses, then we can actually be inside the VR world!
– Our squishy ball works like this. You can throw the ball, which will then, depending on the angle of your throw, appear on the VR screen, which your dog can bring back to you which will copy a ball rolling to you.
– Then, we have a special type of clothing just for you robots. It impersonates a movement from dogs, so it is just as if your favourite dog was touching you.
– Finally, just for a last touch, we can also generate a robotic version of your dog for just £300! This means that your dog can have all the previous features of your dog, as long as we have videos, actions and habits of your dog. Then we can parody a robot dog, just like your previous, precious dog.
Aren’t you impressed by this amazing technology? If you are impressed then go to UploadForDogs.com/home or UploadForDogs@gmail.com for more info. Teleport here for these Uploads now!
Hello Xiaobai,
I adored reading your work: it was so imaginative!
Well done 😀
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Here is the link to my writing:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1e1DRalVysrLZ0Ie3IKUak_WpLHNyWQJXZK1bCdtpOqo/edit?usp=sharing
Thank you 😀
Hello Thea,
I loved reading your persuasive writing: it was fabulous!
Very well done 😀
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