Imagine you are in charge of a travel company; write a leaflet to convince people to take part in a trip to your newest holiday destination. This can be any place you choose, just make sure that you use lots of persuasive language!
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Hello,
Here is the link to my writing:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1moxL-Tq8mq2J8oes2Yz305mf4lB2H9zWyBbSBtJc0AI/edit?usp=sharing
Thank you 😀
Hello Thea,
I really loved reading this travel advertisement: it was so vibrant!
Very well done 😀
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Thea feedback 12- holiday leaflet
Hello and this is the link to my writing. I have no idea about how to write this and so I researched a bit about the advertising campaign and so many of the things I covered is probably based on my research.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c8ZmSV_tLXL9CJq9ajDOvRYuKg_4GGdYO0UqLOXDHTg/edit?usp=sharing
Thank you!
Hello Xiaorui,
I absolutely adored reading your advertisement; it was captivating!
Very, very well done 😀
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Xiaorui feedback 7- travel leaflet
Thank you for your feedback! Here is my revised work:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1c8ZmSV_tLXL9CJq9ajDOvRYuKg_4GGdYO0UqLOXDHTg/edit?usp=sharing
Hello Xiaorui,
Thank you so much for uploading a revised piece!
I loved reading it: it was lovely!
Very well done 😀
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Xiaorui feedback 8- revised leaflet
https://docs.google.com/document/d/18BeYiWJRfeWdV5ztNHIB7cDTD37MD2d0B3eP-xCXkqc/edit?usp=sharing
Hello Nonny,
This is the link for my writing.
Thanks,
Dudu
Hi Dudulin,
I adored reading your travel brochure: it was fascinating!
Well done 😀
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Dudulin feedback 2- travel brochure