Persuasive Speech: Why should a group aged 65+ buy your new iPhone?(Senior Writing8)

by on Dec 17, 2020

Imagine you are pitching a new iPhone to a group of a people aged 65+.Your task is to write a persuasive speech that convinces these elderly people to buy your iPhone, telling them all they need to know and using persuasive language.This lesson focuses on the idea of audience , and how to appeal to an unconventional demographic.

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9 Comments

  1. Anonymous says:
    at 13:51 /

    Hello,

    Seasons greetings
    Here is the link to my writing

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1m1aMI0f8D_hH90SFr_5kuRpPEIFkFWjHYEzlrD9MiYM/edit?usp=sharing

    Thank you 😀

  3. Jonathan says:
    at 06:25 /

    If you are aged 65+, let me introduce you to the new powerful, astonishing, revolutionary iPhone 12. Why do elders need to buy it? Elders should buy iPhone 12 because they will enjoy its entertainment, communication, and speed.

    You need to entertain and relax your self a bit, especially during COVID-19. There is no need for board games, television, or radio. Instead, you only need an iPhone 12 to play games, watch shows or movies, listen to music, and more. iPhone 12 is a splendid way to have fun, especially when during quarantine, and you can’t go outside.

    It is easier for you to communicate if you buy an iPhone 12. A landline is not enough nowadays. iPhone 12 is a wise choice. You only need to press a button to answer the call. There are other ways to communicate too. You can use Whatsapp or other applications on your iPhone. Sending a message is not so hard. You type it on the keyboard, and if you think you have trouble typing, use the dictation function to talk instead of type.

    Another reason why you should buy the iPhone 12 is the speed of it. This new iPhone is compatible with 5G. 5G is the fastest mobile network so far. If you are using a smartphone, you are likely using a 4G phone, but why should you buy a 5G phone? The speed is about a hundred times faster than 4G! That means you won’t be plagued by the loading or downloading speed. You probably can’t even see the loading or downloading page! That is how fast iPhone 12 is, and that’s why I said this is a revolutionary iPhone. You can still browse or watch things as fast as lightning when you don’t have an internet connection. Isn’t it great to use the most advanced network?

    iPhone 12 is one of the best smartphones so far. Its entertainment, communication, and speed is an experience you will never forget. It is a smartphone that you won’t have any regrets about once you buy it. iPhone 12 worth its price. Don’t you want to try the best, fastest, and most advanced smartphone? Buy iPhone 12, and it will be the wisest decision you ever make!

  4. Sisley says:
    at 16:19 /

    If you are reading this and your age is over sixty-five, I suggest you buy the newest high-tech, compatible, controllable i-phone available. Normally, when you’re over sixty, you would have retired so you might not be as flexible as before. If you want a more easily controlled phone, you should buy the new i-phone thirteen.

    This phone has twice more choices for you to customise to your desire and age reference and you wouldn’t need to worry so much about someone stealing it. If you thought a simple i-phone that could do normal stencils was just fine for people over 65, you are wrong. People who are over the age of 65 are usually forgetful and this phone thought of that! It is a vibration system and will ring once it is set somewhere for too long. At night, you could easily turn it off like blowing out a candle.

    The i-phone thirteen is without doubt the newest and most advanced smartphone in this decade so far, so it’s ability shall not be questioned; for young or old. Of course there is still the same usage as the past phones available but who would want old useless and broken phones? I wouldn’t. Even for people over 65, the phone has thought about it. Whatever age you are, it is suited for you personally and also you wouldn’t need to worry about worsening your eyesight. It has a new lens and screen that would barely hurt your eyesight. Perfect for people who have glasses and are over the age of 65.
    -Sisley

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