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The writer sets the scene on an autumn day in Venice when Victor first hears about Prosper and Bo. The canals,gleaming in the sun,dapped the ancient brickwork with gold.But the wind was blowing ice,cold air from the salty sea,reminding the venetians that winter was sneaking upon them.Even the air in the alleyways tasted the paper,white snow and only the carved,wooden statues on the rooftops of houses could feel the warmth from the pale sun.
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My favourite part of the book is when Buck had defeated Spitz in the fight because Spitz was known for his strength but Buck had surprisingly defeated him and proved that Spitz was to not win plus Buck was also graduated to replace Spitz and become the head dog of the pack.(Spitz also ran away defenceless into the forest).
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Dear diary,
Today was my first day in the wild with the other dogs.After being captured by the man in the red sweater,I was finally informed that I had to be in the outstanding group.I had meet a lot of other strong-looking dogs and found out that Spitz was the head dog.Even though I was new to the camp that didn’t mean that Spitz couldn’t show of his razor sharp teeth that were as sharp as shiny knives.As Spitz walked up to me I knew that he especially hated me and I felt the same way but before we could even fight,the man in the red sweater called out our names as it was time to pull the sledge.When we finished pulling the sledge we had lunch,raw chicken,then after lunch I realised that if I stayed away from Spitz he wouldn’t bother me that much but I was very wrong every time I stayed away from him he would come closer which I thought he was jump and attack me but the man in the red sweater was always watching us like a hawk .At dinner we ate raw lamb chops and our masters ate cooked beef , when dinner was over we had to go to sleep but I didn’t want to sleep with Spitz so I made my own bed.
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The writer sets the scene when good old Buck was having the time of his life in a colossal house that he ruled and did as he pleased.He could swim all he liked,he could run all day in garden that was as big as a living room or he could be inside and eat all the meat he ever wanted while watching TV.
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Today was a peculiar day. I walked along the pavement and for the first time I found a houseless, grotty boy sitting down on his own.As I got closer to the boy,I could see that the boy had one or two pimples on the his face then I asked the boy “what is your name?” As the boy trembled to speak he eventually got leon out of his mouth.Just at that moment I had a phone call……I HAD WON THE LOTTERY FOR SOME REASON!!!!The man at the phone told me that I had won one hundred billion pounds and then I was so fortunate.As i hung up the phone,I had an idea that I could help Leon.Then I rented a house with furniture in it for Leon to live in.
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Today was a very chilly morning Tommy the policeman was taking a stroll in the town park wearing his favourite ermine when he suddenly caught sight of a suspicious guy running from the government who was running towards the man.Tommy then caught the thief and asked the criminal to give back the thing he stole but the thief said that he had ought to know were it was so Tommy arrested him and finally found the item . After that incident he gave the pearl to the government and the government had an authority to ban all crimes committed and that military soldiers were to protect people’s home so after that all the criminals who had heard the government then started to feel dejected so that was the end of all crimes.
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22/03/2021 Monday
Dear diary,
Today was a very bad day as nobody believed my information about a tiny planet.The reason why nobody believed me was that I was dressed a lot differently so they started teasing me like calling me a weirdo or calling me a jerk and that made me feel very dejected.As I was trying to explain the planet the people who were listening to me just went of and called me a weird turkish scientist as I was from Turkey .Some also told me that I should quit becoming a scientist as it was no good for me and that made me very upset,when I was little I had always wanted to be a scientist and I studied a lot of science so that was why I was so upset but now I need to rest .
Speak to you soon
Astronomor XX
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I feel quite confused at the narrator’s picture as I also thought it was a hat like what the text said.What makes me think of that is that the text had shown a broa digesting an elephant but the picture didn’t show the elephant in the broa’s stomach so that was why I thought that it was a hat and it also looks like a one too.
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Today was a blustery day and Ethan was going to be a volcanologist so that is what he settled with,after a few days later Ethan was sent to examine an active volcano so that’s what he did.As he was examining the volcano he came across flaring lava he knew not to go too close or he might suddenly fall in so he took two big steps back.As he took his first step back he saw another volcanologist but this person was very close to the boiling lava, so Ethan called out to him that he might fall in the lava but the other volcanologist took no notice from him, now Ethan was getting enraged.Ethan kept calling out to the other volcanologist but it was always the same progress the other volcanologist was not listing,so eventually Ethan went home.When Ethan was home he was starving and thirsty but he had plentiful of food and drinks so after eating lots of veggies and a little bit of chicken he was no longer starving.After eating all of his food he got some water out of the fridge and gulped it all down it was time for bed so he went to his cozy,warm bed and slept.Ethan’s day had gone by.
THE END
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Today was a blustery day and Mason was minding his own business walking on the stone path when he suddenly came across a stranger.His mum told him to never talk to them so he kept walking.As he did that the stranger followed him and he had a cunning smile but Mason was courageous so he wasn’t scared.After a few minutes he started to feel very nervous so he started to scurry on the path but he never got away from that stranger so now he started to feel very scared.As fast as a cheetah Mason was running back to his house and before he knew it he was home but he saw the stranger running after him so he opened the front door and he was at home “Finally I got protection!” he said.After a few days he knew why the stranger was following him he was trying to KIDNAP Mason so now Mason would go with his mum everywhere she went so he wouldn’t get followed by a stranger ever again.
THE END
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Today was the semi-finals of the Olympic race and Max was feeling demoralise. His very rude brother (Sam) knew that he was feeling like this so he started teasing him. At the race Max started to fidget but when the race started,a runner named Bob had bamboozle him.Now Max was in last place and he was very intrepid but then the first place runner did something weird to Max and he was very perplexed. Suddenly Max pushed himself and surprisingly he was in second place!!!!! After that exhausting day Max went home and relaxed .
THE END
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