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1. The elephant
2.The elephant has caught the man and stomped on the man’s back
3. An elephant rifle
4a. A thing that is essential
b. strange
c. Dirty and unpleasant
d. Tyrannical
e. A threat or intimidation
5. Can’t find the second paragraph
6. The weather was wet because it says the mud and you get mud when the weather is moist and damp.
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The door creaked open. Swish, I turned. Nothing. Entering the house the floor boards moaned. Bam! The door behind me slammed shut. A low deep humming sound was coming from the basement. Curiously I went down the stairs. Crash! The boards gave way and I found myself in a dark and gloomy room. Whoosh! A candle lit up by its as if by magic. I woke up. It was all a dream.
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The man is described as a fearful and poor man. Perhaps he doesn’t have a home so he is threatening Pip to show him where his house is. The author also uses the repetition of the word ‘and’ which emphasises that he has lots of damaged belongings. The man might be deaf because after Pip say his name, the man says,“Give it mouth.” Telling us that he might not have heard it clearly the first time.
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One day Jim and Joanna were at their honeymoon in the Maldives 🇲🇻 having a beautiful time at the hotel, until they heard the news that huge missiles were aiming at there area.In a flash, they changed into their secret spy gear with the world’s most powerful weapons. Now they had a country to save! Using their precise tracker they tracked the leader of the operation and to their surprise it was Fia (their best friend). They knew something wasn’t right when a few months ago Fia couldn’t help laughing when she saw them. Apparently she was hiding underneath the lands of Hawaii. Then a splendid plan came to their minds, what if they sit back and relax and let the smart bullets do the job. So that’s how the plan went. They ordered a huge of the bullets and sent them flying towards Fia. The next day, the news was reported that two unknown heroes sent smart bullets and left the leader of the operation dead. As Jim and Joanna huddled together in their bedroom, they winked at each other and smiled.
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Now reader, our story started when a man named John decided to marry Julie. They told all their friends and family about it. After a long time of preparations, it was finally time. As they were walking down the aisle, a gunshot pierced through the hall missing them by centimetres, they then saw their best friend fleeing the scene with a gun in his hand. Everyone was baffled, their friend tried to betray them! In revenge they decided to hunt him down. So they bought fancy gadgets and high-tech computers. The hunt had begun! Days turned to weeks, weeks turned to months, nothing was found, however when they thought all the hope was lost, they noticed a private jet ticket going to Japan with their friend’s name on it. So of they went to Japan. It was surprisingly easy to find him as he was sitting down on right next to the exit. “Why did you try to murder us?”
” I tried to lead you here so that you won’t suffer the bombs.” Had they misjudged him or was this another trick?
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Bob was a Japanese spy. It was world war 2 and Bob’s job was to spy on the Americans to find out what weapons they would use and how they would use them. However it was not as easy as he thought. He has a very strong Japanese accent so he had to hide that. He decided that he would act like a tramp and pretend to walk around the city listening to the news. All was going well, he reporting secretly to his country whilst acting like a tramp. Then one day he was reporting the news when he accidentally said it too loud and an adult overheard it. Bob knew that he had to go back to Japan or else he would die, so one silent night he crept to his hidden jet and zoomed away from America.,
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One early morning, Bob’s Mum and Dad died in a car crash. There is only one way to get his parents life back. It is to get the chaos diamond and revive them, however it is not that easy. First you have to find where it is hidden, then you have to fight a mythical beast called Groudon. Bob took years preparing for this day where he would find the diamond and defeat the beast. As he was leaving, the house he found a slip of paper hanging on the side of the door. He yanked it out and it was a map to the diamond! He then thought to himself, what a lucky day it is! After a long time, he reached a huge gate and he decided to have a nap. After a hours, he was woken up by a roar. Was it the roar of the beast? He slid his sword out of its case and went through the gates. As soon as he saw the beast, he started fighting it. The battle was intense. At the end he place the final blow and the monster died. The only thing left was the diamond. He rubbed the diamond in his hand and POOF! His parent appeared in front of him. For the rest of their lives, his parents never drove the car ever again.
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One early morning, Jim woke up as fresh as an apple. He did his daily routine, eating breakfast, doing homework and other stuff, when he heard his parents whispering to each other. So he decided to take a look. As he enters his parents’ room, his findings left him spellbound. His parents are spies! He quickly returned to his room hoping his parents did not see him enter.
All day long he thought about his parents. How did he not know about this until now. The next day at school his friends were all crowding around the Daily News was an unknown spy saving a family on a yacht which capsized. They ran across houses and dived for the endangered people and are now known as hero’s. On the way home he wondered who was this spy? After a few days, he finally plucked up courage to ask his parents about the spy. They had a long talk and at the end they concluded that his parents were the unknown spy. After a few decades Jim was taught to be a spy like his parents.
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The author describes Crabby as a small person in size however she is also described as a terror. It also says that she had a bunched little body with has a bad connotation instead of saying small which has a better connotation. She is also described to have a sour look, floppy hair and skin and voice like a turkey which has a bad connotation. It makes us feel like she is rude and her parent don’t care about her. If the author wants to make Crabby feel like a good student he/she could say, she had loose hair not floppy hair.
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