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at 02:47 #5777TonyJParticipant
Tony’s homework of Lesson 12
Introduction:I have 2 butterfly that could join in the gang,they’re called Max and Melody Max and Melody are identical twins.Max is a boy he’s strong and likes to communicate with Melody and help her in a big mission.He alwsys like to help Melody when she’s in trouble/if she has a problem.Melody is a girl insect so she’s more shy than Max,Melody is a nice,gentle insect,her abdomen can glow very brightly if she sees someone that might eat him in real life.
Appearance:Max has antennae to sense his surrounding,he also has wing that are plain blue with patterned orange and green colour,so mostly boy butterfly will like to attract him.So maybe he doesn’t want to be left,and like most insect,they have 3 body part:a head,a thorax and the abdomen.On the other hand,Melody also has the same appearance,but her wings are more fancier than Max’s wing.Her wing is rainbow coloured and boy and girl butterfly like to attract her.
Behaviour:Max likes to be joyful and busy,so he likes study nature instead oflying around to eat animal/prey.Melody
likes to be calm and- peaceful,so she likes to collect nectar from flowers than studying them.So they do have some difference between them.
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at 13:35 #5530TonyJParticipant
Tony homework of Lesson 12
The witches might cast more spells,hopefully the boy or maybe even Bruno Jenkins haven’t turned to a mouse yet.If the boy is very smart he might even solve the problem with Bruno Jeckins,maybe the boy is really an engineer.Bruno Jenkins will also think a idea for the Boy to solve the problem of the witches prank,I think the witches will be pretty evil and disagreeable.Maybe the boy will lock his door head into his room with Bruno Jenkins so the witches won’t get inside the room.The Grand High might also teach their sons how to become a witch and maybe they will become a witch and do pranks and fatal spell like the spell in Harry Potter.So after that,the boy and Bruno Jenkins run to the room 454 or 545 and lock the door from the room.That adventure hasn’t come to an end,the boy and Bruno Jenkins might see Mr and Mrs Jenkins on their way out.They might get punishment which make the boy and Bruno Jenkins feel pity.The boy is very smart so he may use a wand to cast spells like in Harry Potter Movies.The Grand High Witch may be clumsy even though she’s a boss of the other witches.Bruno Jenkins and the boy will think of a plan to solve the problem,The Boy and also Bruno Jenkins plan will be using a remote that can make the witches move in slow motion making them paused by using the remote.Another plan is that they’ll have a remote that makes them go faster so the witches won’t get close to them,if they fly on their brooms the remote that makes the boy and Bruno Jenkins run faster,the speed will never end.
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at 14:58 #5329TonyJParticipant
Tony’s homework of Lesson 11
Introduction:The first potion is very magical and it’s also a mixed up potion,it makes people’s brain mixed up(doesn’t know or confused)and it also makes people easy to faint and get dizzy when someone drinks it,so maybe I see that kind of strange,awkward potion,I’ll ignore it and just continue on my day.The second potion is a very wicked and casual kind of a potion when people drink it,people either become a continent in the world like Oceania and Europe or a place in somewhere like Sydney in Australia,Toronto in Canada,so maybe I see that kind of potion,I’ll be curious but still think it’s dangerous so I’ll leave it alone and continue my day.
Appearance:The potions appearance are very big and it also has very clear glass so it’s easier to see the colours of the potions,it also has labels so the witches know what they can use to prank people secretly.It also has a plug on top of the potion’s neck so the witches cannot open it and choose the wrong one for pranking.The colour let peoples know which one is the worst and the best just by looking at the colours,when people think it’s the spookiest they will never drink or touch it and if it’s not spooky at all,people may stare at them,but they’ll not drink it,so the witches must be very smart to prank those shy,tame people.
Personality:The first potion will make people ignorant and it will also make all the bodies go to sleep like nerves and bones,so people wouldn’t know the answer in a Math test or Spelling test and you’ll feel tiny pokes on your bodies except there’s nothing poking you and you’ll also feel cold and get goosebumps on your body as you have pokes on your body.The second potion will make you into a continent or a ocean like the world like The Pacific Ocean near the Southeastern Asia and the Southwest of North America,so if I saw those 2 potions at the side,I’ll not get close to them because I’m scared.
Ingredients:The ingredients for the first potion are no kindnesses,mixing liquids,high level of greediness,low level of gentleness,those objects are all small beads with different colour depending on the level of evilness,so that will be pretty wicked if we think about that.The ingredients for the second potion are lots of things that that make people funny,place changing,shapes bending and changing lives,so that’ll be very wicked,unkind and a casual way to prank and scare people.
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at 02:54 #5150TonyJParticipant
Tony’s homework of lesson 10
Introduction:My interesting and wicked witch is very gentle and casual,but she also likes to turn people into frogs if they’re very like to make people into animals.My witches is called Winni,she likes to make people into animals and foods like the American Witches and also she doesn’t like people to attract her,so she use and write:don’t follow me in blood(red paint but a darker colour)to make Winni easier to prank people.Maybe if Winni is trying to trick me,I will be ignorant and not wise.
Appearance:Winni has a green face that makes people feel creepy if they get close to her,see has a pointy,triangle and black hat on his head,she also has a dark,black dress robe and a golden wand,some witches have silver and bronze wand depending how good are the witches skills.Winni has a riddle(a type of a book)that tells Winni what kind of spells she can cast,like when Hermione Granger(in Harry Potter)need to read a riddle to make different types of potions,like a potion that people never die for example.
Personality:Winni likes to cast fatal spells and non-fatal spells like in Harry Potter Movies.Winni is the leader of the witches,she is the only one with thickest riddle because she studies how to be witches about 5,000 years ago,others studies about 4,200-4,500 years ago.She also likes to copy people’s spells when she’s ignorant like Wingardium Leviosa(a spell of levitation)and Lumos Maxima(a spell of light)from Harry Potter.She’s also a famous botanist(the scientist who study plants)that loves plants part like the stamen,petal and pistil for example.
Habitat:Winni and all of the other witches live in a big,steep meadow with a windmill for electricity and it normally has good weather,that means it’s good for the witches to start pranking people,but they sometimes can’t prank people because of the weather like in Teletubbies on YouTube.
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at 14:14 #5060TonyJParticipant
Tony’s homework of lesson 9
Introduction:My interesting and friendly giants’ nickname will be called the twining brothers and their names are called Danny and Jerry and they always like to help people instead of leaving people behind(that would be the opposite of being kind).He would also like to play with people if someone is lonely.
Appearances:Danny has a bright skin colour with golden,shining hair with beautiful and spotless clothes(shirts,shirts with long sleeves,shorts and pants)In cold weathers he will wear warm gloves to build a snowman in the snow.He normally wears fluffy hats with fluffy ball on top,long pants with a pair of orange gloves.Jerry also has long legs with white,short and long socks in his wardrobe.Jerry has also bright skin colour and he has with brownish golden hair with clean clothes,but he likes to wear plain coloured clothes(so Jerry and Danny do have some from comparing those personality).
Personality:Jerry and Danny are both mechanics,they become mechanics because they learn it from a school from primary school(Year 1-6)secondary school(Year 7-13)university and college and they read books about how to become a mechanic.
Habitat:Danny and Jerry live in a beautiful house with a living room that has 2 beautiful,multicoloured sofa,television and a remote to turn the television on and off.They also have bedrooms that are really wide,even big enough to fit 2 grownups.Danny and Jerry have 2 bathrooms,they have a toilet,a rubbish bin,a sink and tap with hot and cold tank on either side and a bath for showering.In the dining room with chairs and tables,lights on top of the ceiling,so as the living room,a massaging chair(if their parents are 42 or above),a helpers room(if they have a helper in their whole family.
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at 04:59 #4846TonyJParticipant
Tony’s homework of Lesson 8
I’ll be scared of BFG because it is my first time seeing I’m not adapted to you,but maybe if I spend a little time with you I’ll be adapted to you.I’ll also not so scared if I know if your a gentle and friendly giant by reading the colourful and interesting book about the BFG,and I’ll know your not so scary after all,and maybe we’ll have so much fun looking animals at the zoo and rainforest like Amazon Rainforest in the center of South,maybe we can also see the yapok in Central and South America.I’ll also be nervous because the big giants always likes to attack us so I’ll definitely be scared at that point.
Maybe me(Tony)and you(BFG)can go to see the most cheerful town in Canada:Saint-Louis-Du-Ha! Ha!We can also see a Cownose Ray and a Blue Spotted Stingray in an aquarium.We can also have a lovely adventure with Sophie/Sofie to go to a place in North America to see a humpback whale swimming in the Pacific Ocean over 5,000 kilometres(km)towards the South.Me(Tony),you(BFG)and your friend(Sophie/Sofie)to go to Venice in Italy and Jiang Nan Province in China,we can go to Venice to eat pizza near the river and go to Guangdong Province and go to Hong Kong railway station:Mong Kok East Station to stay in a Hotel:a Royal Plaza Hotel.
Me(Tony)and you(BFG)and your friend(Sophie/Sofie) to go to a place near the Atlantic Ocean to see a terrifying fish:Anglerfish.Me(Tony)you(BFG)and your friend(Sophie/Sofie)can go to my house(Palazzo)in Fo Tan and my address:Tower 2,Level 30 B,and see a restaurant ship hanging near the coast,that was as marvellous adventure.
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at 02:28 #4685TonyJParticipant
Dear BFG,
I’m very pleased to meet you,but I’m also very nervous because it is my first time seeing you, but very excited to have a wonderful time with you.
I think we will have a lovely time,maybe we can go to the zoo to see lots of animals.We may also see the Amazon Rainforest in South America or we can also go to cool rainforests and warm rainforests to see parrots and other animals.Maybe when we’re together we may can go to a city full of river(Venice)in Italy and we can also see the shard in London United Kingdom(UK),
If I’m with you,maybe we’ll see humpback
whales wagging their tails underwater swimming almost 5,000 kilometre(km)or maybe we can go to other countries to see marsupials,like the kangaroo in Australia,the bilby in North America or a yapok that lives in Central and South America.Maybe if I’m with you BFG,we may see narwhals in the Arctic Ocean of Canada,Greenland,Norway and Russia,but we have to wear several layers of coats to be warm at narwhals habitat(where narwhal lives).
Wow,we just took a trip all over the world in just a few minutes,I’m very glad to see you there,see you next time.
Your sincerely
Sophia
From: Tony
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at 10:07 #4554TonyJParticipant
Roald Dahl interesting story
Roald Dahl’s story that I think is quite unique is that there are make up words like scrumdiddlyumptious,and also the part that makes me feel quite strange is that the bloodbottler in BFG,it’s like a person has blood on his skin.Another that make me feel interesting is that the front of the cover has a colour that looks like sunset on Charlie and the chocolate factory.Maybe if Roald Dahl book is the best compare to the other books like chinese book maybe he will be the champion storyteller,maybe that’s why there’s a splash at the corner that said the world’s number one storyteller.Another thing I like about is chapter 19,in the text there’s a word private,it really sounds like aeroplane seats (business,first class and private).
The thing that I like is that Roald Dahl’s story is that the text in the story has different sizes,most of them are thick but some of them are thin and also in cursive because most of them are the same writing.The thing that I also like is that the night cool air up and up it went,it looks like the air is climbing a ladder except in real life air cannot climb ladders.Another thing I like in Roald Dahl’s compare to the other normal book is that there’s another story at the end of the story like in the book Danny the champion of the world,Charlie and the chocolate factory and Going Solo for example.So that’s why I like Roald Dahl’s story.
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at 13:01 #4413TonyJParticipant
My shooting party(bad way)
Hello,wicked people.Welcome to my shooting party,only the person who is as tall as me can join the party,there’s no reason and don’t tell me why.Even though I know that you very cross,I don’t care about you guys for no reason,and only the person that has the same personality as me,don’t tell me why,just try your best.The people who doesn’t like to stand out are disqualified/illegal.Besides,you have lots of delicious food for me and don’t give disgusting food like smoothie with ketchup for example.Don’t say that you have a frown on your face follow my rules.In addition give me some objects for the party like balloon to decorate the whole party and maybe some for the pillow fighting.You can also bring your own race car so we can have lots of fun.By the way,we will play for ages,so,if your tired sleepy head don’t complain.We will need lots of accessories for the shooting and tell me why again,with a dull face,and thank you for reading my invitation.Be happy and enjoy.
My shooting Party (good way)
Hello,everyone.I’m so happy you’re here,welcome to my shooting party.If you’re happy,you can join in my shooting any time and I’ll be pleased to see you.You can bring all kinds of yummy food like pizza and french fries.I will be pleased if you bring some accessories for the shooting party like a long table for plenty of foods.You can also bring bring accessories for the shooting party for playing like pillow for pillow fighting for example.I don’t care about your appearance because I know it’ll be good.By the way,you bring lots of chairs for the movie time,I’ll get the huge television at my house.You can also get a cape for a theater show and also bring some fascinating clothes for the party too.If your and a girl you can bring your own toy like slime for example,thanks for reading my invitation.Be excited and I’ll be glad to see you there.
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at 02:35 #4320TonyJParticipant
Why I like Danny’s father
1.I like Danny’s father because he always likes to help Danny when flying a kite.They’re very friendly.
2.I like Danny’s father because he is helping Danny by working.Maybe if he likes working a lot,he will do a lot of jobs like selling(if they have good luck/money).
3.I like Danny’s father because he may be the only person with a job to save Danny’s(by no money).
4.I like Danny’s father because he always works hard to save Danny’s from having less money,maybe he will be “The Working God”.
5.I like Danny’s father because he likes to help Danny for the kite flying with team work,maybe if they were team working they kite will be flying.
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at 01:48 #4207TonyJParticipant
Nasty Child
Name:Jerry
Appearance:Jerry is a boy with a very smooth light face because he always light cream on.He always likes to wear colorful clothes because he wants to make himself really stand out.
Introduction:Jerry is a very mischievous,lazy and naughty girl.He always likes to prank people because he always wants to prank because he always laughs every time he feels bored.
Reason:He always likes to play games all the time because he’s so keen on the types of games he plays.Maybe if he’s very keen on games he could be ‘The God of The Game’ because he always plays every time.
Reason:Jerry is always good at playing games for a long time,maybe if he always plays games his dad will keep staring at him and Jerry doesn’t care.If dad keeps telling him to eat food,Jerry will just keep playing.Maybe if he plays that much his will hurt.
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at 05:34 #3997TonyJParticipant
Is Mr Willy Wonka a good or bad man
1.I think Mr Willy Wonka is a good man because he always let people taste his chocolate(chocolate fudge,creamy chocolate).Hopefully Mr Willy Wonka can make more interesting chocolate.
2.I think Mr Willy Wonka is a good man because he always makes
things,maybe if he’s smart enough,he can make all kinds of things using chocolate.
3.I think Mr Willy Wonka is a good man because people like Charlie Bucket haven’t been to his enormous chocolate factory before.He can make all kinds including chocolate.
4.I think Mr Willy Wonka is a good man because he likes to use things,in one day he can make a room out of chocolate.He could also use chocolate to make real things if he’s intelligent.
5.I think Mr Wonka is a good man because he always enjoy making chocolate like chocolate fudge for example.
6.I think Mr Willy Wonka is a good man because he always let people in his chocolate factory from his golden ticket.I think people like Augustus Gloop will definitely like Mr Wonka’s chocolate factory.
7.I think Mr Wonka is a good man because he always makes chocolates and he’s very creative and I hope he could make chocolate even in the winter.
8.I think Mr Willy Wonka is a smart looking man because he enjoys doing things like making chocolate,I think everyone will like his chocolate,maybe one day he’ll make a bonus chocolate.
9.I think Mr Wonka is a intelligent,creative man because he always use chocolate to make things like bedrooms,one time he can to make all kinds of model.
10.He always make things using chocolate and it looks he’s a good chocolate engineer.He can use chocolate to make a model of a town or tsunami,so that’s why I think Willy Wonka is a smart,creative man.
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at 14:23 #3926TonyJParticipant
Charlie and the chocolate factory
It introduces Charlie and his parents,Mr Bucket and Ms Bucket etc.
Mr Willy Wonka’s Factory is the next.Maybe people really want to go to Mr Wonk’s chocolate factory.Grandparents should really want to go to the factory.
Prince Pondicherry is Mr Wonka’s Indian Prince.If I was Mr
Wonka’s Indian Prince I would write a letter to him.
The Secret Worker,I think the Grandparents will be talking about them.Spies are secret.If I saw them I will feel ghastly.
Charlie’s Golden Ticket could be received right now.The Grandparents should really want to win a golden ticket just
like Charlie.
From:Tony
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