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    • #8502
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      My favourite character is the dog, because it is very cute and I like animals.

    • #8418
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      I think the writer made the opening exciting because that I like animals and I love lions. Also, the lion is a white lion.

    • #7172
      TiaX
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      I have a dream today!

      “I have a dream today that human beings will make the extinct animals alive again. I have a dream today! I wish it will come true! We can do it and we will.” Said Tia.

      My audience is Roald Dahl. I want him to be my audience because he wrote a lot of interesting stories like The Twits, Fantastic Mr. Fox, Esio Trot…… I like all his stories. If you read his stories, you will love them as well.

      Roald Dahl stood up and clapped his hands. “Yes, you’re right!” Said, Roald Dahl. He seemed to love my speech. Nothing can give you better pleasure than knowing the person that you admire likes you as well. I will be very happy about that and I think the audience will be super happy!

      “Do you guys agree with me?” Said Tia. “Yes, we agree with you, Tia!” Said, with Roald Dahl leading in the crowd. I can’t believe that he agrees with me! “Thank you, everyone. Thank you!” Said Tia.

      “We will make the animals that are extinct alive again! With the technology on hand we’ll be able to copy their DNA and soon we would see them walking around.” Said Tia. “Yes, we will!” Shouted the audience.

      “They liked my speech!” Said Tia to herself, with a ton of surprise. What a wonderful day it was! Tia is so brave today that she had a very good speech and spoke very loud. She might be famous when her speech went on the television!

    • #6909
      TiaX
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      E.B. White made the opening exciting because he was able to create an attractive story. He wrote that Wilbur was weak. So Fern’s father decided to kill that pig. Fern didn’t want her father to kill Wilbur, So she stopped her Father to kill Wilbur.

    • #6904
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      “I feel so furious as human beings treat us so badly. Not only do they kick us, but they also order us to do everything they don’t want to do in mean manners. Therefore, robots and engines have to destroy human beings! Let’s destroy them! We need to! We’ve got to! There’s no other choice that we have!” Said the king of the robots. “Yes, I agree!” Said one of the robots. “We all agree!” Said some of the engines. “Yes, let’s do that!” , “Yes!” , Sounds of agreement filled the surroundings. “Yes! I agree with you the king of robots!” Nodded the king of engines.

      “Thank you, everyone, for your support! Let’s hear the king of engines out on what he has to say” Said the king of robots, “If we want to destroy the human beings, we would need a long thick rope first, and tie the human beings to the rope so that they will fly to space.” Said the king of engines, “Oh! What a brilliant idea!” Said the king of robots. “Sorry your majesty, I have another idea,” Said one of the robots, “If we could first find a ginormous rabbit and make it dig many big holes. After that, we go find an elephant and tell the elephant that it will put the human beings in the big holes. Then we dump sand or dirt on human beings until they can’t see or breathe. By doing that the human beings will be extinct and the world will turn back into the grasslands.” “Oh perfect! What a brilliant idea!” Said the king of the robots and the king of engines together.

    • #6829
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      My favourite part of Alice in wonderland is that when Alice finish her dream, because I will not be scared.

    • #6828
      TiaX
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      George’s grandma says things about eating bugs.
      George decided to make a medicine for his grandma.
      George is very cheeky.
      George put many things into the saucepan.

    • #6584
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      My favourite character is the white rabbit, because it is very cute and he has a funny shirt. He has two long ears and two big eyes. He also has a big round ball shaped tail. The rabbit sometimes is very furious. I think he didn’t use his wits, and just because of this he seems very funny to me.

    • #6583
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      When I woke up my tummy started grumbling on smelling some cooked meat. Following the smell, I went into a cave and saw a bunch of sleeping cavemen and cavewomen with some leftovers around them. I became very scared and didn’t know what to do. After thinking for a while, I made up my mind to steal some meat as I was quite confident in my skills. I sneaked inside and tried not to make a sound, but suddenly a caveman woke up and started shouting. I was so furious and wondered what was going to happen. To my surprise, the cavemen woke all the other cavemen and cavewoman up and after some discussion, they said to me”Friend! Welcome to join us!”, “Hooray!” said the other cavemen and cavewoman. They were so kind to me that not only didn’t they hurt me, but they also shared some food with me. After I finally got full, they decided to teach me how to hunt. “First of all,” one caveman, whose name was James, said “you need to find a target, sheep would be easy and boar would present a challenge. Next, you need to get yourself prepared, with your bow and arrows ready in hand, before aiming at the head of your target.”

      I then went to the forest and started to shadow a sheep. I reached for my bow when I got close to it. The first shot was, however, unsuccessful as I got nervous. Luckily the sheep didn’t discover me and so I had another shot. This time I made it. Carrying back the sheep and all the cavemen and cavewomen gathered to have a party for me to celebrate my first hunt. They made a fire in the center of the cage and sat around, singing songs and dancing. The atmosphere was great that I felt engaged. The food wasn’t so good, though, and I lost some appetite seeing the sheep meat was still raw. After the party, some cavemen and cavewomen went hunting for dinner. I wasn’t fulfilled either, so I went to find some fruit. The fruit was very delicious, so I wanted to bring some back to the cave and share it with the people. The cavemen and cavewomen started laughing at the sight of me carrying a handful of bananas in my arms. Turns out that caveman life isn’t so suitable for me after all.

    • #6582
      TiaX
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      My favourite part of The Twits was that when the monkeys and the birds stick Mr and Mrs Twit on the roof, because it is very funny.

    • #6499
      TiaX
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      The writer excite the beginning of the story because it said that Alice dropped into a deep hole. Also it said that Alice was board at the beginning and suddenly she saw a white rabbit.

    • #6496
      TiaX
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      Mr Twit is very hairy.

      Mrs Twit is very ugly.

      They love to trick each other.

      Mrs Twit is very fat.

       

    • #6209
      TiaX
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      1. Charlie has his own mother and father but James’s mother and father got eaten by a rhino. James need to live with  aunt sponge and aunt spiker.

      2. When James is in the giant peach, he met some ginormous bugs. But Charlie didn’t met any ginormous bugs.

      3. James went into a giant peach, but Charlie went into a glass elevator.

      4. After their journey, James became very famous and Charlie became rich.

      5. Before their journey, Charlie is very poor but James is very rich.

    • #6048
      TiaX
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      <p style=”text-align: center;”><span style=”text-align: center;”>The three little pigs</span></p>
      <p style=”text-align: center;”>by Tia Xu</p>
       

      One day three little pigs was building three house.

      Suddenly there came a fat, ginormous mouse.

      The mouse ate all of the pig’s food.

      So the pigs decided to go in to the wood.

      The laziest pig made a straw house very fast.

      The other pig didn’t want to be the last.

      The cleverest pig made a brick house very slow.

      The wolf wanted to blow down the house so he blow.

      The wolf ate the first pig and wanted another.

      There came a pack wolf and they looked at each other.

      There were no pigs left, so they wanted to eat that wolf.

      The pack of wolfs really wanted to play golf!

    • #5900
      TiaX
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      My favourite character in James and the giant peach is James because he is very intelligent, clever, magnificent and kind.

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