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It isn’t always wrong because Lord Areisel lies and if it is very important and
secretive and someone asks Lyra, if she told the truth, she would get grounded
or something. Like when the person told Lyra that he was the one who actually
the one who took Ratter and fed it to his dogs, if she told anyone, the man would
blame her for everything even he actually did the fault. I think lying is not always
wrong and sometimes you have to to do it or our outcome is even worse like
getting hit every two seconds. Sometimes people tell you what the outcome is
and if you don’t keep a secret, they do it. Sometimes it is not very harsh, like
giving a hug or very harsh like paying real money. Lying is mainly because you
need to keep it safe and sound, not letting them know anything about the secret.
People say it is not a good habit to keep lying but sometimes you have to lie to
get the reward even if it is wrong -
My fantasy world is that there is a girl who travels on adventures like what Lyra did in northern lights. She would look for her parents
as they were expecting her to come every year at Christmas to celebrate. The little girl had miraculous journeys on the way but lots of
ups and downs. When she was in England, a bunch of burglars came to her and flattered her so they could steal her daemon and they
could take the wonderful feathers off the peacock and make it look like they had daemons themselves. If they had a daemon, it would
show that they aren’t a burglar. The plot is going to be when she goes on the airplane checkout, a burglar comes and flatter her and
takes the wing of the peacock and runs away to the checkout. She needs her daemon back before anyone sees her without one.
Eventually she finds it with the bandit laying flat on the floor and takes her daemon’s feathers and place it on the peacock and it
becomes alive again. When she goes on the airplane however, the burglar comes in front of her. She falls asleep and the burglar cups
the peacock in his hands and the peacock wakes her up in her mid and she flies back to the little girl. When she goes off the plane,
she realises the burglar was actually her mother’s sister who was jealous of the girl. -
The moral in the Christmas Carol is that Charles Dickens
wants the reader to think about how Marley’s personality
and when he is dead. he has a chain round his waist and
has to be forced to walk around with it. This shows you
can’t escape and die if you have been mean in your life so
in the dead, you still have to suffer it in death. Scrooge
doesn’t want to have a chain when he dies so he tries to
change and comes to Fred’s Christmas dinner and
celebrates with him and gives him a Christmas present.
Then when he dies, his chain would not be as long as
Marley’s and can live a happier life when he dies, instead
walking with an extremely long chain, he would walk freely
and has no fears. -
The most interesting character is Simon Legree because at
the end of the book. Tom meets him and tries to tell him at the
end that if he kills Tom, when he dies he will be sent to hell
because of what he has done to Tom and Tom would be going
to heaven because he helps people as for Simon, he has
killed a man and keep so many servants. If he didn’t keep the
servants, then they would not run and hide, they would have a
happy life and Simon would not have to kill someone for the
sake of hiding.
Also, he is interesting because he thinks and consider what
Tom just said but then he suddenly kills Tom and after all what
her told Simon, if a whole lot of rubbish and still, he dies. He
tries to persuade Simon Legree to give up and say “I can’t
take it anymore because I am tired of being stupid and I feel
that I am going to change.
Tom is like an angel to Simon for a millisecond and the sense
of evil just comes back and fights back. Tom wouldn’t tell
Simon where the servants were hiding because he respect
God and believes that his soul would go to heaven. Simon
doesn’t believe in god, he is a cruel, wicked man. So, he
would go to hell and his servants can flee and he would have
a really hard time in hell, doing the chores that the servants
did when he was alive and doing extra. -
Dear reader,
I wrote this book and it inspired me to write it
because I am trying to make the white people feel
disappointed in what they have done because they
treat the black people as slaves. I try to persuade
the white people to stop treating the black like this.
So, I make a story about when the black are
escaping from the white. I try to tell you that black
people have thoughts, fears, minds, dreams and
other things that all the white have so they also are
humans. I try to make the white people think what it
would be like, losing you dear child and they have to
leave them and give their child to the white. Or if
you were the child and then you had to work for the
white. If you would want to be like this, carry on with
your job, well done but if you want to not be
scrubbing the floors or going on the roof to switch
the tiles, then try to change and stop taking black
people as servants. -
Dear HG Wells,
your story is interesting to read and I really like it. One problem is there is no such thing as a Time Machine or whatever it is called. Maybe write it based on a different scheme like the clocks not on a “Time Machine,” and work on the things you like to do like drawing or making picture books, I would give you 4/5 stars and try and make it more realistic. I hope you understand the thoughts and opinions of mine.
From Theresa
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Dear Diary,
It all started when I had an argument with my family. I didn’t like it so that night I creeped away, out of my house. I saw an ebony black sky, emerald green grass and worst of all I was glistening cold. I was scared, frightened, terrified and nervous. My teeth was chattering and I was shivering. I saw rabbits, foxes, owls, rats, squirrels, badgers and deer’s in the park. Suddenly I saw a canary yellow boat with cherry red oars. I hopped on it and paddled away. In a corner of my eye I saw an island. I paddled towards it. I recognised it but I didn’t know what it was. I saw my family and they let me inside. I cooked dinner for them. Then we were a family once more.
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The writer build tensions at the start of the book by saying it is a fabulous school just for girls. That makes the reader go into the rich citizens world. It says big classroom so it grabs the readers attention because you want to be in the richness. Then it tells the reader about the teaches, nice teaches and good teaches. It also gives the reader the question in the lesson their at to see how good the lessons are. It makes me go strait into the book and I can express myself.
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I am Colin and my back have an issue so I have to lie in bed all day.
when my cousin, Mary came and told me about it. After a couple of days, I went to the garden in a wheelchair with Mary and Dickon, I felt much better and slowly, with Dickon’s help I got up and walking with a slow pace. Mary was trying to restore the garden to it’s former of glory and asked me to help. At first I couldn’t but I kept persevering and finally I could!
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My first impressions about Mary is that she is the kind of girl who wouldn’t listen. She wants to do whatever she wants. She’s a disobedient little girl and she doesn’t care about anyone. She doesn’t know how to dress up herself because her Anya did it for her. I think she need to be more independent.
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