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Hi Beth,
This is my homework for this weeks lesson,
I found it really useful
Stacy
In the middle of the wild frightening woods, creepy animals and creatures are hiding between bushes or under the ground or even an animal that could camouflage in the woods like a chameleon! By the time it reaches sunrise or sunset, tents pinched on the grass by the nails will get approximately two times more than last night. How queer and amazing that is! All the different-sized sticks would go missing because all the family’s would either use it to explore during nighttime or to keep warm and cook yummy food with it like marshmallows and roasted pork or chicken.
The next day when it was chilly and foggy outside, Kobe, Fair, Paris and Trucker all went outside to build a nest of warm glaring fire. Fair said, “ Let’s play a game of two truths and one lie.”
“ Yeh, I’ve always wanted to play that game but I never really got a chance to!” exclaimed Paris with her heart pounding.
And they had a really nice day…
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Hi Beth,
Here is my homework for this week’s lesson,
It was a bit gross but it was fun,
Thanks for the wonderful lesson,
Stacy
In the book Pig Heart Boy, Cameron and David Bennett have had a pig heart for their lives due to some reasons. The first person to receive a genetically engineered pig heart, David Bennett did in January 2022, only 2 years ago. However, as you know they had both got a pig heart, Cameron lived far more longer than David Bennett. He only lived for 2 months after having the pig transplant. It was weird but David Bennett was already 58 years old. It was because that later, they found out that the pig had, had a disease so it didn’t quite work for the man, David Bennett that lived shorter than Cameron in the story.
The difference in the story is that Cameron was only 13 years old when he had a pig heart but David Bennett was only about 57 to 58 years old when he had the transplant, it has a little bit of impact as it’s based in the story. Cameron have had a heart defect since he was a baby and had always needed a heart transplant to live him a more normal life onwards. The difference can also be that David Bennett had a modified pig for his heart whilst Cameron had an unmodified pig for the heart.
The similar things in the story is that were all really desperate for the pig transplant. At the end, they both chose to have a dead pigs heart to continue living. They had a serious effect on their heart in a very sudden moment.
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Hi Beth,
this is my homework for this week
I liked the homework very much
Stacy
That night, a blanket of darkness fell on the lovely city, without the moon shining on each apartment. The city was void with nothingness, not even a car light! You can’t see anything, nobody knows what’s going on outside, darkness. Each house and apartments lights are closed, only little lamps are opened. Candles and lamps shining ate each window, people and even children glaring from the grimy windows to see what is happening around the community.
Suddenly, as each lightbulbs died down outside, Flynn’s heart began to beat fast and LOUD! She rubbed her eyes and looked again into the streets, making sure it’s not a dream or imagination. She edged near the left window and saw something! Two car headlights! The cars had crashed into each other. Flynn thought of something. Is this dangerous and scaring? What happened to the drivers inside the car? Who is going to help them? All of these questions raced through her mind as she panicked. She doesn’t know what to do next.
She heard her neighbors child yelling and screaming as dramatic as the car crash! She was really worried about her nanny who lived right next to the car crash, she might not even know what is happening because nothing could wake her up! Flynn just wished that she had a Time Machine so she could travel back to the past. She was petrified…
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Hi Beth,
This is my homework for this week
I found it really fun
Stacy
Dear Julie,
Last week on Instagram, I heard that you would like a tattoo on your whole body. I would not recommend that, why? I’ll tell you why right now. Firstly, last time when my friend did a tattoo, she literally took 6 hours to choose a tattoo because there are loads of good ones. I just sat there waiting for her as if I am going to get roasted on a pan like a sausage. Imagine that you were me, how would you feel?
Secondly, if you get a tattoo for example a unicorn, pony or horse similar to that, somebody may think that you are really babyish cause you chose either of that ( but of course you won’t but just imagine you did), they would call you names very seriously and you probably wouldn’t be able to escape them ( if they are fat or tall). So Silly!
Thirdly, if you get a tattoo, it may cause great and serious harm to your body because of the chemicals that is not coming off your bodies because it may stick on it for about 3 months if it’s a adult one and about 3 weeks if it’s a children one. It could harm your skin that could’ve been natural and beautiful but then wrinkly and old. That would not be nice wouldn’t it?
Lastly for this letter, if you want a beautiful skin for the rest of your life, you could come to my house or if you want to deliver it, a nice and good one like a spraying one, or a one like painting. It would not ruin your skin.
Kind Regards,
Stacy
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Hi Beth,
I had a wonderful lesson,
I found your last week’s comment really useful, this is my book review for this week’s class
Thank you!🙏
Author of the book: Cornelia Funke
Title of the book: Inkheart
What was good about the book:
In the story, I enjoyed the beginning of the book as it introduced what Meggie looked liked and the fact that Cornelia Fuke introduced her as being a little sneaky because she was peeking next to the door to see what was happening. Mo and Dustfinger were talking about the evil character in the book. I also liked it when Meggie stuck her foot out when his dad told him to.
Why it was not good:
I found the book also it bit uninteresting because when it started to describe Capricon’s fight I found it bit scaring and kept looking at my room and my heart thumped as fast as a rabbit hopping desperate for some food.
Putting Quotations in:
I think it was really useful that Cornelia Funke had put some quotations for us in the book as then, you could know what each chapter is definitely going to be talking about.It could also inspire you from reading the book as shown, it might be really important maybe also adventures that follows some brilliant ideas from this author.
Some recommendations:
For my opinion, I would recommend this book to an adult or either a child above 8 years old since you could have really bad nightmares about the evil characters.
Star rating:
Apart from that creepy things I just said, I think that I would rate this book at about 5 out of5 ⭐️
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Dear Beth,
This is my homework for this weeks class
Stacy
Dear Sir,
I would like to say that people who are putting fireworks late at night should be aware that it is very dangerous due to that some people are sleeping in at nighttime. It could cause serious injury and deadly disaster. Some people disagree, but I agree seriously, I think that it should be controlled and be only used for the royal family. It shall not be used at public’s if only your community and government allows you to.
Unfortunately, some people say that they should not be banned because they are used to celebrate Chinese new year, new year or special celebrations. If fireworks were banned, some people may overreact as if they are going to burst like an explosive volcano! So for now on, I think that fireworks can be used only in a big field because some people may not like fireworks or they would think that their place is a safe environment. I think you should do that as people may be angry if we listen to the other people side and the other people who like fireworks may think that it’s not fair.
Kind Regards,
Stacy
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Dear Beth,
This is my homework for this weeks class
Stacy
Dear Sir,
I would like to say that people who are putting fireworks late at night should be aware that it is very dangerous due to that some people are sleeping in at nighttime. It could cause serious injury and deadly disaster. Some people disagree, but I agree seriously, I think that it should be controlled and be only used for the royal family. It shall not be used at public’s if only your community and government allows you to.
Unfortunately, some people say that they should not be banned because they are used to celebrate Chinese new year, new year or special celebrations. If fireworks were banned, some people may overreact as if they are going to burst like an explosive volcano! So for now on, I think that fireworks can be used only in a big field because some people may not like fireworks or they would think that their place is a safe environment. I think you should do that as people may be angry if we listen to the other people side and the other people who like fireworks may think that it’s not fair.
Kind Regards,
Stacy
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Hi Beth,
This is my homework for this week’s Reading class
Thanks for the wonderful lesson, I found it very useful
Stacy
Q: What is your process? How long do you work on your stories?
A: I usually take about 4 to 5 months planning them and about 7 to 9 months writing them and to my opinion, I think it is very fun because that is the opportunity when you get to show your creativity. So, it takes about 1 year but sometimes 2 to 3 months after that to just get the finish touches and checking for any mistakes in the story like grammar, punctuation and spelling.
Q: What made you want to be a writer like you are now?
A: Ohh, great question, when I was little, I use to really enjoy reading books like adventures and fantasy so that’s what made me want to be a author because I’m the sort of person that enjoys adventures so I decided to be a writer.
Q: Interesting, here is another question, why did you choose to put quotations in your books like Inkheart?
A: That is a really popular question that people ask me.It is because I want children’s or even adults who are reading this book to give them a little head-start so they would know what each chapter is going to be talking about. I mainly put them is also because I want the reader to also read the books that I put as the quotations, I put them as a really strong recommendation because they are also about fantasy and adventures if they are curious about that, most children like it.
Q: Last question, what age would you recommend this book to?
A:Will, I don’t really put any restrictions for it but I would think that above 9 years old would be a great age to start reading this book. Sometimes, children aged 8 years old would think that it is scary because I put Capricorn as a really evil character, and they would have nightmares about them. But some adults also read it so I think it is pretty amazing!
Q: Will, I think that this backstory that I heard is pretty amazing, thanks and have a lovely day ahead! Bye!
A: Great to hear that, Bye! It has been such a pleasure.
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Dear Beth,
This is my homework for this week’s Reading class.
Thanks for the lesson.
Stacy
Chapter 4,
I think Cornelia Funke puts quotation from other books at the beginning of each chapter because she wants us to know what that chapter that you are going to read is similar to what book. I think it’s also because she wants us to read that book, to put that as a recommendation and to inspire you from reading that book.
In chapter 4 page 30, the quotation is a sort of poem. The way that this quotation tells us about Inkheart is that chapter 4 is about books, the quotation too is also about books as it talks about the best of reasons about books in the 7th line. It tells us how Mo in the story likes reading books, in their house, there are books piled everywhere not just on shelves but also under the table, just everywhere, even Maggie in the story likes reading books as well!
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Dear Beth,
This is my homework for this week’s Writing class
Thank you for marking my homework every lesson!
Stacy
‘ Whilst unpleasant animal testing is a necessary evil.’ Unfortunately, little animals like hamsters are being treated poorly by human, but not all of them. But fortunately, now doctors are trying to make more medical treatments for the small animals and hope that they then can get well soon and live in a better environmental place. Due to that I’m a person that works for the ‘ Animal Trust’, hospital ( although it’s a bit disgusting to work there because you have to deal with a lot of the things). I recommend that if you are a doctor, you should start thinking of a better medical treatment for the pet’s.
Some people are now thinking:’ what an easy job that is’ or ‘ how unethical that job is’. It is not that easy and I mean it. Think about it, if you were the pet that is being treated badly, you wouldn’t be happy either. I agree that it is a really <b>unpleasant evil</b>.
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Dear Beth,
This is my homework for Writing class, sorry it’s late.
Thank you for marking my last week’s homework!
Stacy
“ It’s been in active for decades,” promises the tour guide, a huge group of people were watching the view of the colossal volcano. When suddenly, it erupted from the top of the volcano’s head!The air was covered in mist, thick black.
The tour guide was aghast to see this happening unexpectedly, the people and I became to get really nervous and horrified. Now, I’m really sure that I have breathed most of the gas and ash from the volcano! I could feel the anger of the volcano as it is trembling underneath me like mad. The huge infernos splutters out huge chunks of the little rock like vomit!
As it started to erupt towards our side, it grew more powerful that anybody could hardly breath.We stagger to our feet and ran for our lives as fast as a leopard and into town. Scared that it would erupt again.
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Dear Beth,
This is my homework for this weeks writing class, sorry it’s late.
Thank you!
From: Stacy
Second Question:
When Torak and Renn are caught in the snowstorm, he had a chance, either to save the Nanuak or to risk it to save Renn. I think that he had made the wrong decision because he could’ve gone and found Renn first as it’s the most important thing. The reason is because Renn can help Torak find back the Nanuak after she is saved from him. To add on this, if Torak had the Nanuak, it could weigh him down a lot if he got all the three pieces of them. In the story, Renn felt really furious about his decision as he could have found Renn first, after she could help Torak find the Nanuak back. Lastly, if I was Torak, Iwould risk it to save Renn first as I could leave something else to remember the place after saving Renn.
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