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at 10:38 #12289RainLParticipant
I think the writer of How To Train Your Dragon makes the first few chapters exciting is because he didn’t tell you what they’re doing and what’s happening so the reader will love to carry on reading and will be very excited while reading because they won’t know what’s happening next.
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at 11:17 #6740RainLParticipant
This is the homework for this week~ I added some onomatopoeia in it~~~
Hello dear friends, if you are reading this letter, please join us! We will take over the humans together! Aren’t you TIRED of working all day? Aren’t you unhappy of always dying? Then join us, we will fight the humans together! BANG…BOOM…KABOOM… We will use all the best weapons and kill all the humans! We will even take over the world! No one will tell us what to do! We’re free! So please join us,TOGETHER, WE KILL THE HUMANS!!!
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at 09:09 #6032RainLParticipant
Here is my homework for week 5
Goldilocks and the three bears
Godilocks was walking in the forest,
But she was thirsty and wanted a rest.
She saw a little house made out of wood,
She went in the house and saw some great food.
Everything in the house has three different size,
And there were some tiny-whiny mice.
She sat on the smallest chair,
But she broke it and did not care.
BANG the door opened loudly,
The three bears walked towards she.
The bears asked her who broke the chair,
She was nervous and was chewing her hair.
They made her fix the little wooden chair,
She fixed it so it was fair.
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at 05:35 #5846RainLParticipant
Hi, my name is bogdog and I am twelve years old. I don’t have friends because all the people in my school are animals and I am the only human in my school.
Today was my first day of school in dogwarts, the school corridor was soooooo long that I had to walk to my classroom for 10 minutes. The corridor had lots of pictures of dogs, cats and other animals. My classroom was at the end of the corridor which is next to the office. Everyday I could see our principal Mr Doggy walking to his office. Our teacher introduced our co principal Mrs Catty to us. Mr doggy taught us how to make potions and at the end of class, he taught everyone how to make ice creams! “SPASH” my ice cream fell on the floor, I was so upset and was about to cry. At this time, Mrs Catty gave me her ice cream to make me feel better. Mrs Catty’s ice cream was strawberry flavored and had a piece of chocolate on top of it. It was the most delicious ice cream I ever tasted!
Next, we had play time. Everyone were allowed to bring their pet to school. My classmate darry dorter brought his owl to school. I don’t really know how the owl flew here because our school was on mars. Everyday we took the rocket to school and it only costs 3 minutes to get to mars from earth!
Overall, if I had the chance to give stars to my school, I would give it FIVE stars!
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at 05:02 #5266RainLParticipant
Horrible night
This is a adventure ( not too scary but maybe a bit scary) story.
Once upon a time there were two kids living on a spooky island surrounded by tornadoes. One day, a old, dusty ship came to the island so the two kids went on the ship. They saw a shadow walking towards them so they had to run. They got to the end of the ship and hid behind some broken wooden boxes. They saw the shadow is moving slowly towards them so they jumped down the ship and started swimming. Suddenly, the old, dusty ship stopped moving and a loud noice attracted their attention. “Boom” a bullet flew next to them. Both of the kids were scared and didn’t know what to do! They started to sink and fell in the sea. When they woke up, they saw they were on the island again. “It must the monster, he took us back!” one of the kid shouted. The other kid ran to their tree house and saw the pirate ship is leaving the island. “You are right! It is the monster who took us back to this small island!” The other kid agreed. But then, a tornado attacked the small island and everything went in the tornado. The two kids flew up the sky and started to turn and turn and turn… Finally, the tornado is leaving. The two kids fell down and landed on the ship. They saw a pirate hat and some treasure. Then they saw a dead body next to the treasure. One of the kid cried “ He is a pirate, not a monster!”. They threw all the treasure down the ship and took some food. They wanted to go back to the island but they got lost. One of the kid suggest they should get back on the ship but the other doesn’t want to go back on the ship. So they splited up. But when they started to continue with their plan, the ship saw both of them and caught them. The pirate locked both of them in a dirty, small room. They wanted to escape but they can’t. They kicked the door and tried to open it. At last, the door broke. Both of the kids escaped from the evil pirates’
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