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    • #15239
      RachelM
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      Lesson 30 Report

      Great work this week! Thank you for all of your hard work and energy – and congratulations to Joy for scoring a double win on this week’s Vocab Bingo. The students engaged well with the extract. Although we didn’t have much time this week to discuss the extract, I hope the students will be inspired to read the book, as well as some of the others that we’ve studied over the course of these lessons.

      Vocabulary

      –       Define each word, put it into one of four categories (noun, adjective, verb or adverb) and, where applicable, note down a synonym or antonym.

       

      1.          Devise

      2.          Scope

      3.          Annals

      4.          Melodrama

      5.          Vast

      6.          Republican

      7.          Contemporary

      8.          Barricade

      9.          Deteriorate

      10.       Constitutional

      11.       Bourgeois

      12.       Preside

      13.       Propertied

      14.       Enrich

      15.       Capitalism

      16.       Rival

      17.       Obscurity

      18.       Penury

      19.       Vice

      20.       Intrigue

      21.       Connive

      22.       Fidelity

      23.       Plagiarism

      24.       Memoir

      25.       Machination

      26.       Magnanimous

      27.       Mythic

      28.       Trait

      29.       Instinctive

      30.       Drone

       

      Homework

      –       Revise the vocabulary we have learned today.

      –       Now we’ve read the introduction to the Three Musketeers, have a go at writing the opening. How do you think this story would start?

       

    • #14989
      RachelM
      Keymaster

      Lesson 29 Report

      Fantastic work from everyone this Sunday! Well done Joy for winning Vocab Bingo! Again, I’m very happy with the progress everyone is making and the excellent engagement with the extract this week. Keep up the lovely work!

      Vocabulary

      –       Define each word, put it into one of four categories (noun, adjective, verb or adverb) and, where applicable, note down a synonym or antonym.

       

      1.          Immense

      2.          Profusion

      3.          Crevice

      4.          Dahlia

      5.          Confounded

      6.          Ramshackle

      7.          Venture

      8.          Musing

      9.          Ally

      10.       Endure

      11.       Perish

      12.       Steadfast

      13.       Persistent

      14.       Blanche

      15.       Desisting

      16.       Lament

      17.       Indefatigable

      18.       Aloft

      19.       Kindle

      20.       Gleam

      21.       Mellow

      22.       Penitence

      23.       Alas

      24.       Respite

      25.       Helter Skelter

      26.       Semblance

      27.       Promptitude

      28.       Dwindle

      29.       Bellow

       

      Homework

      –       Revise the vocabulary we have learned today.

      –       You are wondering through a derelict house, thinking about its past inhabitants. Describe what you can see using ten of the words from the vocab list above.

       

    • #14633
      RachelM
      Keymaster

      Lesson 28

      Excellent lesson today! Congratulations to Candice for winning this week’s vocab bingo, particularly when the words were so tricky this week. Thank you for everyone’s stories today as well! Today we looked at an extract from Nathaniel Hawthorne’s Scarlet Letter, and discussed a little bit of the context of the novel as well as its modern day implications.

       

      Vocabulary

      –       Define each word, put it into one of four categories (noun, adjective, verb or adverb) and, where applicable, note down a synonym or antonym.

       

       

      1.          Throng

      2.          Garments

      3.          Edifice

      4.          Colony

      5.          Utopia

      6.          Invariable

      7.          Allot

      8.          Vicinity

      9.          Seasonable

      10.       Nucleus

      11.       Congregate

      12.       Sepulchre

      13.       Ponderous

      14.       Pertain

      15.       Unsightly

      16.       Congenial

      17.       Condemn

      18.       Token

      19.       Narrative

      20.       Inauspicious

      21.       Frailty

      22.       Century

      23.       Petrify

      24.       Physiognomy

      25.       Augur

      26.       Betoken

      27.       Culprit

      28.       Tribunal

      29.       Verdict

      30.       Inference

      31.       Indubitable

      32.       Scourge

      33.       Vagrant

      34.       Solemn

      35.       Demeanour

      36.       Meagre

      37.       Transgress

      38.       Penalty

       

      Homework

      –       Revise the vocabulary we have learned today.

      –       You are a judge, and it is your responsibility to decide whether or not the people brought before you are guilty. Write a report on a particularly difficult case that you have seen that day.

    • #14548
      RachelM
      Keymaster

      Lesson 27 Report

      Great work on Sunday! We worked through quite a tricky extract this week, but the students engaged with the text and its themes and vocabulary very well. I continue to be confident that all of the students are picking up the vocabulary very quickly, which is a great sign! Keep up the good work!

      Vocabulary

      –       Define each word, put it into one of four categories (noun, adjective, verb or adverb) and, where applicable, note down a synonym or antonym.

       

      1.          Garret

      2.          Oblige

      3.          Invariable

      4.          Scowl

      5.          Abject

      6.          Contrary

      7.          Verging

      8.          Hypochondria

      9.          Trivial

      10.       Pestering

      11.       Prevaricate

      12.       Axiom

      13.       Bustle

      14.       Scaffolding

      15.       Overwrought

      16.       Profound

      17.       Refined

      18.       Accustomed

      19.       Shabbiness

      20.       Proximity

      21.       Preponderance

      22.       Accumulate

      23.       Fastidious

      24.       Former

      25.       Clutch

      26.       Bespatter

      27.       Unseemly

      28.       Akin

       

      Homework

      –       Revise the vocabulary we have learned today.

      –       Write a letter from the protagonist to a friend explaining the situation that he’s in and asking for help. Use ten of the words from the vocab list in your response.

    • #14022
      RachelM
      Keymaster

      Lesson 26 Report

      Fantastic work today! Congrats to Candice for winning Vocab Bingo in what must have been record time, and well done to Luis for coming a close second! Today we looked at an extract from Leo Tolstoy’s War and Peace. This was a particularly tricky extract, both in terms of vocab and general readability, but the students engaged with it really well. I’m very happy with the progress the students are making with the vocabulary. Everyone is able to define and use the majority of the vocabulary with confidence. Keep up the good work!

      Vocabulary

      –       Define each word, put it into one of four categories (noun, adjective, verb or adverb) and, where applicable, note down a synonym or antonym.

       

      1.          Estate

      2.          Palliate

      3.          Infamy

      4.          Atrocity

      5.          Distinguished

      6.          Confidential

      7.          Soiree

      8.          Livery

      9.          Indiscriminate

      10.       Invalid (n)

      11.       Disconcerted

      12.       Reception

      13.       Forefathers

      14.       Patronising

      15.       Intonation

      16.       Peculiar

      17.       Complacent

      18.       Indifference

      19.       Courtesy

      20.       Fete

      21.       Pall

      22.       Listless

      23.       Pose

      24.       Inclination

      25.       Affected

      26.       Consciousness

       

      Homework

      –       Revise the vocabulary we have learned today.

      –       Write a response from the Prince to Anna Pavlovna’s invitation using ten words from the list above.

    • #13388
      RachelM
      Keymaster

      Lesson 25 Report

      Great work for today! Congratulations to Sissie for winning this week’s Vocab Bingo – a lot of tough words in there today as well. Thanks to Luis for suggesting this week’s extract from John Buchan’s Thirty Nine Steps. Everyone engaged well with the extract and the new vocabulary introduced today. The stories everyone created using the new vocab were unique and very entertaining to read – thank you to everyone who shared theirs!

      Vocabulary

      –       Define each word, put it into one of four categories (noun, adjective, verb or adverb) and, where applicable, note down a synonym or antonym.

       

      1.          Loft

      2.          Nausea

      3.          Palsy

      4.          Lade

      5.          Dovecot

      6.          Moor

      7.          Chaff

      8.          Threshold

      9.          Cobbled

      10.       Merciful

      11.       Prospect (v)

      12.       Ascent

      13.       Giddy

      14.       Masonry

      15.       Parapet

      16.       Swoon

      17.       Fumes

      18.       Prospect (n)

      19.       Wisp

      20.       Rotund

      21.       Captor

      22.       Lisp

      23.       Ransack

      24.       Blistering

      25.       Glen

      26.       Fringed

      27.       Plateau

       

      Homework

      –       Revise the vocabulary we have learned today.

      –       How did Richard Hannay get into this situation? Write a diary entry exploring how Hannay ended up where he is in this extract. Use ten words from the vocab list in your writing.

    • #15240
      RachelM
      Keymaster

      Fantastic work, Joy! This is an excellent piece of writing, and you’ve used all of the vocab beautifully. This is a very sophisticated piece of work, and I’m very impressed with how you’ve handled some very difficult words here. You write very eloquently, clearly and concisely. Keep up the very good work!

    • #14634
      RachelM
      Keymaster

      Really lovely work here, Joy. This is an excellent response. You have used all of the words from the vocab list perfectly here and with flare and imagination too. You have managed to capture the voice of the protagonist very accurately while also making it your own.

      Just be careful with ‘hypochondrial’ which should be ‘hypochondria’ in this context, and it should be ‘on the verge of committing suicide’ not ‘to commit’. But otherwise, thorough and fantastic work! Keep it up!

    • #14028
      RachelM
      Keymaster

      Excellent work, Linxi. This is a very tense and impressive story. Really great use of the vocab here, although one or two of the words don’t quite fit, such as ‘prospected’ – a synonym might work here instead? Great description of action here, I especially like the way you have used varied sentence structures to increase tension and impact. I also like how you’ve finished on a cliffhanger – makes me want to read on!

      Just be careful with your grammar and punctuation. If you read back through you’ll notice that some of the commas should be full stops. Also the phrase is ‘the stakes were high’, as ‘stakes’ is always plural. Otherwise, really fantastic work!

    • #13389
      RachelM
      Keymaster

      Beautiful work, Joy! I can tell how much care, attention, time and effort you’ve put into this piece. You’ve achieved the tone and register of a newspaper article perfectly, as well as the language of the time too. You’ve used all of the vocab perfectly as well, and well done for using many more than ten! This is a very concise and well-written piece of writing, and lovely to read! Well done!

    • #13380
      RachelM
      Keymaster

      Really great work, Luis! Very effective tone here – you’ve managed to get a sense of the age of this really well. You’ve adapted your register perfectly for audience and purpose. You also use a nice range of vocab. This is a very convincing piece of writing!

      However, next time you might try and include some of the words from the vocab list. Otherwise, great work!

    • #12831
      RachelM
      Keymaster

      Really lovely work here, Linxi! I really enjoyed reading this, in particular your use of voice and character. You’ve created a very vivid voice for Emma here, I get a great sense of the kind of person she is. I can tell you’ve really put some thought into it – I especially like the moments when she’s a little bit rude to Miss Taylor, such as when she says ‘I am rich and you aren’t’ – this is very in character for Emma!

      There are one or two misuses of words – such as ‘nominally’ and ‘right’ instead of ‘write’. I’m also not sure if Emma would call herself a valetudinarian? Maybe have a look back at the definition.

      Otherwise, really fantastic work, Linxi. I really enjoyed reading this!

    • #12830
      RachelM
      Keymaster

      Really lovely work, Joy! This is a very impressive piece of writing, and you’ve used all of the words from the vocab list with flare and confidence. I especially like the description of the future as ‘indistinct’ – I feel like this really captures her position perfectly. You also adopt the perfect tone of voice for the era that the book was written – great work!

      Just be careful with the use of the word ‘through’ – I think what you’re looking for here is ‘threw’. Otherwise, fab work! Keep it up!

    • #12829
      RachelM
      Keymaster

      Really lovely work, Joy! This is a very impressive piece of writing, and you’ve used all of the words from the vocab list with flare and confidence. I especially like the description of the future as ‘indistinct’ – I feel like this really captures her position perfectly. You also adopt the perfect tone of voice for the era that the book was written – great work!

      Just be careful with the use of the word ‘through’ – I think what you’re looking for here is ‘threw’. Otherwise, fab work! Keep it up!

    • #12828
      RachelM
      Keymaster

      Lesson 21

      This is really quite beautiful, Luis! I genuinely felt moved while reading this. You describe the scene with great care, precision and detail, and you use the vocabulary in surprising but very effective ways. The detail of the ‘matrix of colour’ is particularly impactful. Fantastic work!

      Lesson 22

      Great work, Luis! You adopt the voice of Sissy very well here. Just be careful with the use of ‘underscore’ – just double check the meaning of that word. Otherwise, great use of voice and tone!

      Lesson 23

      Nice work, Luis. Nice tone and voice here, very similar to the way in which the author writes in the extract which is good! Just be careful with the use of the word ‘valetudinarian’ – just double check what it means. Otherwise, lovely work! And I’ll check out The Thirty Nine Steps for next week, thanks for the suggestion!

       

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