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Hi Beth, this is my homework for Lesson 5.
The Endless Dream
Fiona had a very painful life. She sat by the street, willingly to fly up to the sky and meet the God of happiness in order to plead for him and set her free. Fiona’s face was hard and pale, with dusty ash. People walking by even laughed at her ashy black jacket with ripped holes.
Little did Fiona know, the God of sadness had been controlling her the moment she was born. That is the main reason why she is an orphan that lives by the street. There was a myth going around the country that the God of happiness is having a coma these days, technically nobody is having a very good life. Although there are a few people that have an okay life now, these people have the best luck of all, because the God of Sadness doesn’t care about them unlike Fiona.
Everyday, Fiona sat by the street, hearing everyone beside her talking about how utterly disgusting she was. Until one day, she fell into a deep, magical sleep. It was like another life, or just a new self. Fiona was born, she had parents and money. It felt like the God of happiness woke up!
Not long after, Fiona felt like somebody pushed her, a big powerful, and strong person. They pushed her crib up into the sky, but it didn’t drop, the crib just floated above the gentle, marshmallow-like clouds, and stayed there. Just one hour later, the crib stayed there, but Fiona flied up high into the sky, and became a god.
Sadly the God of Happiness died from the coma, so the Heavenly Lord did an arrangement and decided to let Fiona be the brand new God of Happiness. And everything became more peaceful and perfect than ever.
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Hi Beth, sorry I didn’t successfully post this homework, but this is the homework for Lesson 4.
(When my Private self finally became friends with my public self).
Pri: private self.
Pub: public self.
Pri: I’m getting very tired, my eyelids are getting heavy.
Pub:(talking to my friend) Let’s go surf!
Pri: what the heck bro, I can’t even move…
Pub: RUN!
Pri: Am I just lazy or what?!?! I feel like I’m a ghost and can’t do anything!
Pub: I guess I can hear you but shut up.
Pri: excuse me, I don’t know what I did wrong and you’re just patronizing me!
Pub: Ugh fine geez.
Pri: THANK YOU.
Pub: (talking to the friend) I think we can rest for a bit because I’m tired.
The friend: Yeah sure, I’m a bit hungry let’s go eat!
Pri: Ok at least I can rest in the restaurant.
Pub: Yeah you should be grateful.
Pri: …yeah thanks.
Pub: fine I’ll be friends with you as long as you agree.
Pri: fine.
Since then, they became best friends, collaborating together and getting what each of them wishes for. If my private self wants something, my public self would try my best to do it. It’s the same with the public self! Overall, now they will be together for my whole life, even if I get to become a ghost! They will never be a step away from me. And they will never be a step away from eachother.
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Hi Beth,
Sorry for this extremely late homework from Lesson 10.
I chose the choose your own path story.
Choose your own path (story)
Linda spoke
Linda’s mum and dad are very lively and were class clowns every year when they were younger, still now, they’re already 50 years old and still, they bounce, shout, and throw airplanes to the neighbors everyday. So everybody predicted that their child, Linda, was going to be incredibly competitive and lively as well. But nobody would’ve ever imagined that Linda would be a quiet, short, well-behaved little 16 year old that looks like a 5 year old. Everybody couldn’t believe their eyes, not even her mum and dad! The people in her tiny little town looked stunned. Linda goes to The Hallon’s high school right next to her house. Linda doesn’t have a single friend there, everyday, it was just her alone, sitting there in the middle of the cafeteria. The worst thing is that nobody even felt bad for her. The popular girls even pranked her, which was rude. Until one day everything changed. Go to line 13 for Linda to have a friend. Go to line 17 for Linda to become a scientist. Go to Line 22 For Linda to become a singer.
L13. Linda made a friend! It was a kind-hearted girl called Ellen. She let Linda join her friend group and allowed Linda to enjoy her life. After this successful friendship, Linda became braver and braver, until she managed to get everyone’s attention, and became friends with everyone.
L17. Linda has changed her mind, she wanted to do something, something meaningful to the world, and something that will actually help her develop. Linda studied very hard, she reviewed her noted from school everyday and found a job to work at a supermarket as a 17 year old to earn some money for the family. Soon, she managed to get an invitation from Harvard. Linda then went to study there for 3 years and became a very successful scientist.
L22. Linda wanted to be a better version of herself, and motivated herself to earn lots of money for her poor family. The best thing she thought was to be a famous singer. So she developed her singing skills and dancing skills. They unintentionally, she got invited to a K-pop training school to learn K-pop. Linda loved it there, although she was not used to singing so loudly on stage. After the first tine she performed in front of a big audience, everyone was so impressed that they immediately decided to give up on their old favorite, and change it into Linda. She became a celebrity, and earn more than 100 million dollars per year!
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Hi Beth,
Sorry for not doing my homework for a long time,
Here is my homework.
Amanda’s dream
Amanda had Broken her legs, the tibia and the fibula bones on each leg. The doctors and her family are debating whether she would live until 40 years old. It was certain that her legs won’t recover anymore, her toes are always pale, and hard as a rock. More surprisingly, she said herself, that she would never give up living.
Not long after, her mother gave birth to a baby girl, her name was Claire. Her mother and father thought that if Amanda has Claire, Claire can help Amanda put on her clothes for her. Claire is an expert at helping Amanda, she washed the clothes, played games with Amanda to get her entertained, and even helped her shower!
After a year, Claire was seven years old and Amanda was nine. Every day, all Amanda prayed for is to stand up on two legs. Her dream was to become a gymnast. That night, she went to bed, she slept instantly, and fell into a dream.
Amanda was born, and not like before with soft bones that break instantly when you fall, this time her bones were stronger than ever! She felt like she could jump off a super high cliff without breaking her bones! But this time, she was not only strong, she was smarter than Albert Einstein. She was able to go to The University Of Cambridge at the age of 4!
Because her biggest dream was to be a gymnast that will receive a gold medal in The Olympic Games. She started practicing gymnastics at the age of 5, and was able do different kinds of flips at the age of 7. She started competing at the national championships at the age of 12. And went to the Olympics at the age of 18. She got second place, and we all know who got first place (Simone Biles). But in Amanda’s heart, she got gold because she knew she would not be able to compete with Simone Biles.
And just like that, Amanda lived her life in her wonderful dream, and never woke up, and will never wake up.
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Hi Beth,
This is my homework for lesson 6.
Plot twist
In a beautiful cave, there was a young girl, she was born to be a drummer, but her parents want her to be a doctor. Since she was little, her parents have been forcing her to learn biology, she didn’t like it, nobody actually thought she was in this situation. This cave is this little girls house, it’s big, creative, modern and overall pretty. Her parents always made the house smell like a hospital with all the medicine and stuff, but this is pure evil since this is nothing good it’s a chemical that they spray and is bad for your skin and lungs, although in hospitals it smells like this but it’s more natural, and people don’t often live in that smell, for the people who is really poorly, they mostly get transferred into normal non-medication smelling room.
EVERY SINGLE DAY these evil parent have been treating the girl like this until one day, a letter arrived, it had a red sticky material on it, and had a H, the parents thought it was a letter that said something about the hospital or something, but when they opened it, it said she was hired to be a magician in Hogwarts!
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Hi Beth, this is my homework.
My favourite genre is adventure and my least favourite genre is romance.
Wilder and Clara’s unexpected marriage
Beneath the crooked sky, prince Wilder and princess Clara are talking about how their going to plan their marriage, they were in deep love then, and it was their dreams to marry each other, but the king had a strict rule that his son Wilder can only marry someone until he is at least 29 years old, even though the whole city knows about this, he still can’t hold it in. One step forward, and everything would go up in flames—he knew it, but he still seized his chance to ask his father to marry her right now. Well he didn’t expect much, but everyone seemed to know he wanted this to happen but… guess what, he said no, everyone knew that except for Wilder. Clara came too as she predicted that Wilder would be here. They discussed and discussed about whether they should break the rules or not.
A few days past, they decided how they would marry, they decided their going to go on a mission, and go from their side of the world to another, right now they are in the UK, and their on a mission to go to Indonesia, it’s very random but they chose Indonesia. They made a unbelievably stupid excuse to get an awful lot of money from the king the excuse was “I need the money to cover urgent medical bills for a man that was kind to me on the street!.”
They got the money and the next day, they realised there was a plane to Pakistan and Indonesia which their planning to go on. The royalties where really excited because their dreams are finally coming true!
They arrived in Pakistan and only has 10 minutes to board the next plane! They made it in 9 minutes which is just in time. After they just had a normal wedding with nobody celebrating with them since it’s ‘illegal’ for them to do this and nobody knew them in Indonesia so they didn’t have anyone, overall the couple loved is and they couldn’t expect it to be more perfect.
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Hi Beth sorry for the late homework,
This is from lesson 2,
Thank you!
The incident
David was in a place where the streets buzzed with life, every corner filled with voices, footsteps, and the constant hum of a crowd, it was Italy at its busiest time, the summer holidays. For some reason EVERYONE chose to go there! He instantly regretted coming.
Everyone was about half a metre far apart! Lot’s of people already died from not getting enough oxygen. David was absolutely freaked out! No way people can die like this! So he was being extra extra careful not to fall, and try to breathe properly, the city as already getting really stinky and smelly.
He quickly booked a hotel as quick as he could! He was really lucky, he literally bought the last room! The next day, he woke up at 8 am to get ready to eat breakfast, he eventually ate breakfast at 9am. He then decided to go to a theme park! The theme park was 10 minutes away by car from his hotel. He arrived at 10am, just in time for the theme park to open, his first ride was a tall bungee jump! He’s for sure a very brave man! Then he went on a high roller coaster that took him 2 hours to wait in line! Once he got on, something unexpected happened, the lap bars were not working! He shouted as loud as her can! But no matter how loud he was, he could never beat 200 people talking at the same time. The workers didn’t check and just started the ride, at the top of the first loop, David fell, the workers all called 911, but they didn’t realise he was already dead.
Overall, be careful when roller coasters are crowded, and care for your safety.
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Hi Beth!
Sorry for the late response, this is from lesson 1,
Thank you for the lesson!
Finish the story
Everyone, especially the workers, were shocked! They were staring at the wallet so hard, but not realising that it was FAKE. This young sassy girl on the street was paying fake money to the workers, they looked just like pounds! But they weren’t. the workers just asked for 9 pounds, but the spoiled girl payed her 500 fake pounds! every day and night this girl would repeat the same routine, she knew she was going to get in real gruesome trouble, but she still decided to do it.
On one specific day, this spoiled girl thought that she would buy more stuff than usual, she wanted to buy the magic rainbow pen where it can see which colour your thinking and it would write out whatever you think. This store is her absolute favourite store! she wanted to do this routine for her whole life…But today, this crashed her dreams, she was walking in the street and to the store, once she got to her favourite store, something unexpected happened…EVERYONE was shouting at her! even the polices! One police snatched the wallet from the girls hand and instantly threw it in the bin as fast as he could! Then, he locked her hands up with a handcuff and sent her to jail.
When she got there, one of the polices asked her address and whatever she could and has to explain, she could never ever lie about money ever again. And she was never trusted by no one…
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Hi Beth!
Sorry for the late homework but this is from lesson 1,
Thanks for the lesson
Finish the story
Everyone, especially the workers, were shocked! They were staring at the wallet so hard, but not realising that it was FAKE. This young sassy girl on the street was paying fake money to the workers, they looked just like pounds! But they weren’t. the workers just asked for 9 pounds, but the spoiled girl payed her 500 fake pounds! every day and night this girl would repeat the same routine, she knew she was going to get in real gruesome trouble, but she still decided to do it.
On one specific day, this spoiled girl thought that she would buy more stuff than usual, she wanted to buy the magic rainbow pen where it can see which colour your thinking and it would write out whatever you think. This store is her absolute favourite store! she wanted to do this routine for her whole life…But today, this crashed her dreams, she was walking in the street and to the store, once she got to her favourite store, something unexpected happened…EVERYONE was shouting at her! even the polices! One police snatched the wallet from the girls hand and instantly threw it in the bin as fast as he could! Then, he locked her hands up with a handcuff and sent her to jail.
When she got there, one of the polices asked her address and whatever she could and has to explain, she could never ever lie about money ever again. And she was never trusted by no one…
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Hi Beth,
This is my writing from the mock exam!
have a nice time!
The unexpected adventure
One morning, Klara was getting ready for her flight, she was going to Italy! She has always wanted to go to Italy since she has heard such good things about going there. Additionally, she also has a friend there that she always wanted to meet, Paulina, they have been chatting online since they started work! That was three years ago!
Klara boarded the flight (which took like 3 hours in the queue) that was 2 hours to get to Italy.
She arrived! She was jumping with excitement. The second she got to the hotel and put her luggages in the room, she sprinted outside and went in the first interesting place.
Place 1: The Madonnina statue.
The Madonnina statue was absolutely amazing, the weather was also really suitable for eating an ice cream or having a walk around the forests next to the statue.
Place 2: Paulina’s house.
Klara was chatting to Paulina earlier and told her that she just got to Italy and maybe she could go to her house? And Paulina said yes, so Klara went to Paulina’s house and drank tea, they were just chatting (because that’s what adults do) and enjoying their time.
Klara loved this visit and would like to be here again in the future, sadly she has to go to work so she can’t stay.😢
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Hi Beth,
This is my homework from lesson 8,
sorry for the late homework!
An interesting street
This street is unbelievably creative and fashionable, and it is nothing like anything I’ve seen before! There are lots of cartoon drawings with perfectly clean tall buildings. out of everything, this is why I picked this street because it is very interesting since lots of cars are really fancy and it’s more like a super expensive street that only rich people go to. There’s also lots of famous shops like Chanel, Dior and Louis Vuitton. Every pupil there where’s in total around like 2,000 euros! I can’t afford to wear all that!!!
There were pink buildings, blue buildings, whatever colour you can imagine! I love that place and I really want to go visit.
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