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Hi Beth,
This is my mock exam writing.
Bye Bye have a lovely time
Tragedy story (mini mock)
Helena lived suspiciously happy with her grandparents. Her grandparents gave her food and welcomed her to be in this family and have fun and have manners. But what Helena doesn’t know is that she is adopted and her “grandparents” actually hate her and is trying to have a plan to kill her because they hate her and also for fun. the “grandparents” were actually secretly trained to be killers, VERY skilful killers. They thought while Helena is sleeping, they made a potion that looks exactly like water to make Helena feel absolutely nothing while asleep and will leave her paralysed for at least one hour and a half. Al they plan to do is to buy the sharpest knife in the whole world on the internet. Helena slept until 10:34, which gives them plenty of time to get ready. After Helena woke up, the breakfast was ready and she drank it in a second, she got paralysed and the “grandparents” used the sharp knife and without thinking just stabbed it into Helena’s heart and just like that, she sadly died with no one thinking about her.
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Hi Beth, this is my homework rom lesson4.
There’s a word tattoo in the text and another hidden can you find it?
have a nice week. It’s quite short by the way.
Ode poem
There once were two turkeys,
And they wanted to eat cheese.
The cheese smelled pungent and delicate.
They started to eat it and asked if they could date.
Oh, said the girl. Please said the boy.
OMG we should cried the girl.
Just like that they went together.
The only turkeys that were in their country,
Went to eat dinner.
After they went to a tattoo shop.
And had half a heart on a different elbow each.
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Hi Beth,
this is my homewwork for lesson 3.
Epic Poem (seasons)
The wind, the snow, the sky and the rain.
Are you gonna stay?
The trees are dancing in the strangest way.
The leaves, the trees, the acorns, the wind.
Ready to seek the acorns little squirrel!
The leaves like claws, moving in the sky.
don’t get catched by the scary claws!
The rain, the bees, the bloom and the sky.
The nice fresh air pulls itself through rain.
A boy comes through the waterfall.
PSHHHH he got nice and wet.
“I love it” said the boy.
The beach, the sunshine, the ice cream and the vacation.
boy has an ice cream and melted in his hands.
He got thirsty but there was no water.
He was dehydrated so he died.
Poor him, he should have another chance.
I guess he will remain hating summer.
Have a lovely week!
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Hi Beth this is my homework for the second lesson.
The king’s final day.
Bedoris (the king): Ahh is such a loverly summer da…..SPLASH! Hey watch it boy!
Avalina (the kings daughter) : Put a nice big blue towel on Bedoris’s body.
Bedoris :thank you Avalina, I appreciate it very much.
Avalina: It’s fine dad.
Bedoris: AAAAACCCHHHUUUUUUUUUU!
Avalina: DAD ARE U OK?!
Bedoris: *coughs* no not really.
Avalina: Dad, quickly, you must be sick! Let’s go back and you can stay on your bed and rest a bit.
Bedoris: ok *goes on the carriage*.
Avalina: Quick soldiers, help me carry him up to his golden bed!
Bedoris: I can’t thank you enough my Avalina.
Avalina: Don’t think about it.
Bedoris: Whatever you say.
Avalina: *laughs*.
Bedoris: I’ll be waiting for you to send me food my love.
Avalina: Of course, I’ve actually just learnt a new delicious recipe for you to try!
Bedoris Amazing I’ll be rating it after I try it!
Avalina: I’m sure you’ll give it a 10\10!
Avalina: *finished cooking*.
Bedoris: mmmmm…It’s definitely a ten.
bedoris: *clears his throat* And suddenly faints!
Avalina: OMG! Are you ok?!
Bedoris: …*no response* HE WAS DEAD!!!
Avalina: fell to her knees and stabbed herself with a knife in the royal kitchen and killed herself. This Kingdom has no more hope, all the royal people are gone, the kingdom had no money and people was starved to death, Bedoris and Avalina remains in Heaven.
THE
ENDHave a lovely day!
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Hi Beth,
this is my homework for the first lesson.
The tragic hero
Emilio, ran up to the 13th floor toilet, and barfed. Little did he know the toilet was bewitched, he only had a short time of life. Magically, what the toilet did to him was not painful at all, instead, it made him cozy and well. He became kinder and gave his girlfriend a pink rose 🌷.
One day, he even planned to one day marry his girlfriend and give her the best thing in the world, after that thought, he went to school and asked his girlfriend with his face red and looking at the floor. “Umm…Hi……would you m..m…m..marry me? Sorry if this is very weird.”
“OMG really of course I will marry you! This was the sentence I was waiting for you to say ages ago!”
“Really? I thought you didn’t want to marry me at all!”
“Nonsense, anyway, let’s now try and invite people to our wedding hopefully this week!”
“great idea let’s go!”
So just like that Emilio is going to have a wedding party with I think they invited 18 people to.
It is finally the day! People got dressed up beautifully to come to this special party where there’s a GINORMOUS cake with a statue of a men and a women ball dancing on top and a crystal kind of waterfall on the side of the cake and realistic 2D trees on the side. The girl was in a long white gown with flowers on top. On the other hand, Emilio was wearing a black and white tuxedo with a black bow on it. After a while when they wanted to kiss each other, they standed face to face one meter away from each other, and then they walked at the same time two steps, and then kis… Before there lips even touched! Emilio got entirely out of breath and fell to the floor. He was dying! The woman checked if he was breathing and was not, and she also asked him other thing and he was completely unresponsive! after the check, the woman started to do the chest compressions on Emilio while the other people called 999. Unfortunately, before 999 even came, Emilio died. The woman fell on her knees and cried. Her tears weren’t just drops, they were pouring down, she cried for exactly 9 hours straight, nonstop! And just like that the woman was left alone with no family and zero friends left 💔.
I hope you have a nice week. See you next Monday!
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Little amy’s special day!
Little Amy loved skiing, she is also SUPER rich, she literally has her own GIGANTIC indoors ski facility! That costed around 987,028,648,798,655,798,675!!!!!!!! It was CRAZY!!!!! She goes there every day AND night with the hole of her family to ski, (there for SURE very good at skiing) Amy’s mom AND dad are both skiing coaches and they are both skiing world champions! And guess what happened! They came up with a plan! They want to tell Amy that she is gonna swop with her mom snd dad so she’s now the coach ( the only reason they came up with this is because there WAYYYYY too tired to teach those kids that THEY DON’T EVEN LIKE!!!!!) so they rushed downstairs like they never even went on such clean stirs like this! Her mom held her left hand and her dad held her right hand , they both shouted at the EXACT same time “guess what!”
“What?!?!?!?!”
“ OMG WE CAME UP WITH A PLAN!”
“What plan!”
“That since your VERY good at skiing and you can take over our job to get an experience?”
“OMG YESS SURE THIS IS THE BEST THING EVER!!!!”
So Amy took over her mom and dad’s job so she has to teach little annoying children, BUT she doesn’t know that those kids are very annoying! Good luck Amy with those kids!
this is the mock exam writing have a nice holiday!
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Hi Beth,
This is homework for lesson 6,
thanks for the wonderful lesson,
see you tomorrow for reading!
going to a restaurant (inspired by
the unfortunate events (dinner time))
“Go get the mail and DO WHAT IT SAYS YOU HAVE TO DO!!” shouted the master strictly. “If you don’t listen I would fire you!”
“okay 😭 …” sighed the twins.
They had to put on there rotten, dirty and old shoes and their ugly green coat just to get out to get a mail!!! BUT to get the mail it literally take 2 hours to walk there!!! They had to swim in the muddy river walk through a low mountain ( the mountain might seem VERY low but it’s actually incredibly hard AND tiring to walk through) then they finally reach a teeny tiny little red mail box full of mails to collect they ONLY have to collect one mail so they did and then walked on the same journey back.
They tried to hand the mail to their mean master, the master said “no the mail is for you guys. Open it and see what you must do.” We opened it and it said that we have to cook dinner for the master!!! We asked “ do we HAVE to make the dinner? We’ve never seen people cook or cook before, what if we messed up?”
“I don’t care if you mess up as long as you make something that I can eat before 8 o’clock ok?”
“Ok sir.”
The twins searched the cupboards, the fridge that didn’t work anymore, the shelfs and where they actually found it was in the jug by the dirty window. They found bread and cheese, they decided to make cheese bread!!! It was feta cheese with baguette, they wanted to make the master as happy as possible because the master can kill them! after they made the cheese bread they served it for the master, the master didn’t even want to try it because he didn’t see the pepper on it for the taste!!! he pushed the food away and knocked the tabled over!!! He was FURIOUS!!!! He urged the twins out of his mansion and screamed “GET OUT!!!!!.” But weirdly after he started to laugh and welcomed the twins in again !. The frightened twins thanked him like as if he was the King and they were the guards the master said “no problem 😉.” The girls were confused they thought why would our master be sooo kind to us??? maybe he thought again and thought he was wrong ‘which he is’. He then nicely asked “do you two madams wish to get out?”
“sure if you say so master.”
“ok thank you so much then.”
“I would go out and get back tomorrow ok?”
“ok 👌.”
So they finished dinner and went back to their real home 🏡.
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H Beth,
This is homework for lesson 4,
Keep it up with the amazing lessons 👍
have a gothic read. Maybe it’s not really gothic, it’s gothic at the start and happy at the end ok?
the romantic horror story 😧
A wonderful time has passed, suddenly there was a strong flood that flashed away Europe!!! So it washed away everybody’s houses. My house was washed away!!! Years after, water went away and people started to build there own houses, I started to build mine (and my families of course), it was a challenge cause our money has also been carried away by the UNBELIEVABLE FLOOD, so we had to build the house by hand with pieces that has been flown here. A young handsome man kindly asked me if he could help build my house and live with us after? My family said yes so I had to of course. we used a poor broken tree to create the roof of the mini house, and since it was winter we put water on a board and left it outside for a full 24 hrs to create a window, we also used a lucky metal piece we found in the woods for the sides of the mini house. After we finished the mini house it looked wonderful 👍! I thanked the man for helping and being so kind and he said “ no problem at all it’s not a scary thing like how people say it is to help someone.” I thought that makes sense so I replied “ OMG thank you so much again!”
“no problem.” he said smiling at me.
I thought he was a very nice guy s I decided to marry him, he said he has to ask his parents first so he did sadly his parents said only at July and that’s 2 months away from now. “ ugh 😣😩!” I sighed annoyingly but for some reason was still grateful that his parents didn’t completely say no though. We were in love for the rest of our live and the world got better and better 🥳!!!
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Hi Beth,
Sorry for the late homework,
This is homework from lesson 3 written below,
Have a wonderful week 😃, I hope it’s 🤩 fun!!!
Gothic story
One mysterious day, there stood a princess outside in the foggy storm, she was looking up to the sky like she was begging the rain gods to stop the rain, but the the princess also look like she didn’t care that it was raining because she was wearing a light purple skirt and a short sleeved shirt with cat picture on it 🥰.
Emily (the princess) ran back to the castle and her parent called her to sleep right now!!! Emily kept on running, fell on the bed on purpose. She slap soundly in her king sized bed (even if she only a tiny bit more than a meter). In her dream, she thought of a misty witch looking at her in the storm. The witch laughed at Emily rudely and shouted “Your such a baby, why would u look SOOOO tiny with such tall parents little girl?”
“Why do you care then if your SOOO big?”
“At least being big is better than being small baby ye know.”
“If I don’t know that why do you care, I more precious that you ugly witch.”
“Hahaha you dummy, you really think your precious? You know your just a piece of trash.”
The girl started to cry in her dream, she ran back to the castle again and told her parents, her parents were shocked, they ran out with Emily and screamed to the witch “WHY ARE YOU SOOO ANNOYING? I HATE YOU I’LL FRY YOU IN MY HUGE PAN!!! If you do this again I will fry you but if you want to be alive, promise me you would be nice to my daughter.”
Guess what she said no, because she promised her boss fillet( a wizard) to murder people and be mean to them and rude. The witch actually is already nervous but she definitely didn’t look like she was but she actually looked like she was super ready to be killed. If she actually gets killed, she would form into a ghost but even if she’s already a ghost her boss can still turn her alive and kill the royal family. The witches boss is the strongest of them all and can kill the royal family in 1 second with his weapon that cost 9,9876987698769876!!! Did the princess survive? The answer to that is that she NEARLY died but the monster got scared and ran away. She got back as weak as dead, her mom (the queen) called the royal doctor to help. Emily survived!!! everyone was grateful because if Emily there would be no queen since she’s the crown princess. Then the royal family lived very healthy and never had big health problem ever again.
THE END!!!
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