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Hi Beth this is my homework for lesson 1.
In a dark forest, came out a girl with beautiful ocean blue hair and glowy eyes that are torches to guide her. She walks with soaked boots on while the stormy rain continues. Her body trembles each time a lightning bolt makes a sound. She grips her little hands that are numb and red. She quickly found a boat nearby to steer when the flood starts, the tall trees starts to fall and the little girl didn’t know what to do…
This was inspired by Zoe’s escape from “Floodland”.
Have the best weekend!
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Hi Beth this is my homework for lesson 1.
In a dark forest, came out a girl with beautiful ocean blue hair and glowy eyes that are torches to guide her. She walks with soaked boots on while the stormy rain continues. Her body trembles each time a lightning bolt makes a sound. She grips her little hands that are numb and red. She quickly found a boat nearby to steer when the flood starts, the tall trees starts to fall and the little girl didn’t know what to do…
This was inspired by Zoe’s escape from “Floodland”.
Have a nice weekend.
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Hi Beth,
This is my mock exam writing.
Bye Bye have a lovely time
Tragedy story (mini mock)
Helena lived suspiciously happy with her grandparents. Her grandparents gave her food and welcomed her to be in this family and have fun and have manners. But what Helena doesn’t know is that she is adopted and her “grandparents” actually hate her and is trying to have a plan to kill her because they hate her and also for fun. the “grandparents” were actually secretly trained to be killers, VERY skilful killers. They thought while Helena is sleeping, they made a potion that looks exactly like water to make Helena feel absolutely nothing while asleep and will leave her paralysed for at least one hour and a half. Al they plan to do is to buy the sharpest knife in the whole world on the internet. Helena slept until 10:34, which gives them plenty of time to get ready. After Helena woke up, the breakfast was ready and she drank it in a second, she got paralysed and the “grandparents” used the sharp knife and without thinking just stabbed it into Helena’s heart and just like that, she sadly died with no one thinking about her.
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Hi Beth, this is my homework rom lesson4.
There’s a word tattoo in the text and another hidden can you find it?
have a nice week. It’s quite short by the way.
Ode poem
There once were two turkeys,
And they wanted to eat cheese.
The cheese smelled pungent and delicate.
They started to eat it and asked if they could date.
Oh, said the girl. Please said the boy.
OMG we should cried the girl.
Just like that they went together.
The only turkeys that were in their country,
Went to eat dinner.
After they went to a tattoo shop.
And had half a heart on a different elbow each.
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Hi Beth,
this is my homewwork for lesson 3.
Epic Poem (seasons)
The wind, the snow, the sky and the rain.
Are you gonna stay?
The trees are dancing in the strangest way.
The leaves, the trees, the acorns, the wind.
Ready to seek the acorns little squirrel!
The leaves like claws, moving in the sky.
don’t get catched by the scary claws!
The rain, the bees, the bloom and the sky.
The nice fresh air pulls itself through rain.
A boy comes through the waterfall.
PSHHHH he got nice and wet.
“I love it” said the boy.
The beach, the sunshine, the ice cream and the vacation.
boy has an ice cream and melted in his hands.
He got thirsty but there was no water.
He was dehydrated so he died.
Poor him, he should have another chance.
I guess he will remain hating summer.
Have a lovely week!
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