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Ms. Marnie the homework from the last class:
The paragraph:
The deadly missile attack shortly to be launched by an ancient automatic defence system will result merely in the breakage of three coffee cups and a mousecage, the bruising of somebody’s upper arm, and the untimely creation and sudden demise of a bowl of petunias and an innocent sperm whale.
My thought:
What makes this paragraph frightening is that it said that the deadly missile gave the reader a feeling that it is really going to be a problem because the author uses the word “deadly” which make the problem bigger, but what makes the reader’s feeling turn more funny is that the result here the author make the difference between the two of the character in the paragraph have bigger differences. What result does the reader have must be bigger than just the breakage of three coffee cups and a mouse cage because at first, the author uses the word deadly.
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Dear, Beth this is the previous class homework I didn’t find the website
Today’s story is about an orphan girl that was sad about her mother and father’s death, so she forever lives on that day when her father and mother died, and she is helping to let her mother and father die. So once upon a time a girl name Nanci her father and mother died when she was 4 years old, she cannot run out of the sadness of her mother’s and father’s death. Her father and mother died because of a traffic accident. One day when Nanci is sleeping, she began to have a bad dream about her mother and father’s death. But she does not know why she cannot get out of this dream by hitting herself thinking that it will let this dream end, but it did not. She began to explore where she is and why is she here. Then she heard a beep then she sees her father and mother wake up in their bed where Nanci is staying in a house. Nanci looks at the calendar it says 1996 year and June 6. Nanci was shocked because she is on the day that her mother and father died, then she finds that her father and mother discover her “hey, who are you may I ask?” Nanci’s father said. Nanci said, “I am your daughter from the future.” Nanci’s father said, “interesting how can we know? Our baby now is just 1 year old”. Nanci knows that they won’t believe her. But she is sure that this is the day they died. “I am going to keep them from all the dangerous things to let them die.” Nanci thought to herself. When her mother and father go to work, she began to follow. They first go to the building site and work there for hours they lift heavy wood and brick that help to make a house and they climb up to the up of the metal stick that was holding up the building they sit there with no things that can protect them from falling. When there is a lunch break for them to at lunch, I thought they are going to eat lunch but no they go to a delivery work where they delivery foods, when they didn’t get right on time they have be scolded by the customer for lateness. They at the right time when the lunch break finish, they go back to the building site to work when I see this there are tears that was in my eyes, I use my hand and wipe them out. At the end of the day they go to delivery customers to there home with cars. I began to cry but I have nothing to do with this I cannot help anything……
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The mock Exam:
Today’s story is about an orphan girl that was sad about her mother and father’s death, so she forever lives on that day when her father and mother died, and she is helping to let her mother and father die. So once upon a time a girl name Nanci her father and mother died when she was 4 years old, she cannot run out of the sadness of her mother’s and father’s death. Her father and mother died because of a traffic accident. One day when Nanci is sleeping, she began to have a bad dream about her mother and father’s death. But she does not know why she cannot get out of this dream by hitting herself thinking that it will let this dream end, but it did not. She began to explore where she is and why is she here. Then she heard a beep then she sees her father and mother wake up in their bed where Nanci is staying in a house. Nanci looks at the calendar it says 1996 year and June 6. Nanci was shocked because she is on the day that her mother and father died, then she finds that her father and mother discover her “hey, who are you may I ask?” Nanci’s father said. Nanci said, “I am your daughter from the future.” Nanci’s father said, “interesting how can we know? Our baby now is just 1 year old”. Nanci knows that they won’t believe her. But she is sure that this is the day they died. “I am going to keep them from all the dangerous things to let them die.” Nanci thought to herself. When her mother and father go to work, she began to follow. They first go to the building site and work there for hours they lift heavy wood and brick that help to make a house and they climb up to the up of the metal stick that was holding up the building they sit there with no things that can protect them from falling. When there is a lunch break for them to at lunch, I thought they are going to eat lunch but no they go to a delivery work where they delivery foods, when they didn’t get right on time they have be scolded by the customer for lateness. They at the right time when the lunch break finish, they go back to the building site to work when I see this there are tears that was in my eyes, I use my hand and wipe them out. At the end of the day they go to delivery customers to there home with cars. I began to cry but I have nothing to do with this I cannot help anything……
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Miss.Beth the homework for the lesson! if you have time check it, please.
when he said that to me my heart broke like a diamond I found myself began crying for some reason he said that I throw so badly in the handball game my heart began to hurt. My friend was there helping me. I suddenly laugh a bit quietly I want to say that who can throw so beautifully when you first learn to touch a sport. You didn’t throw on the competition well too why dare you to talk to me like that we are a team we are each other’s teammates I know that maybe I am trash in this sport, and I might be trash forever on this sport but that doesn’t mean I can’t improve to you that I can change that thing. You might be a big tree in this sport I might just be a little grass on this topic, but you need to know that grass still can stand up when we are being stepped by people or tress like you laugh at me.
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