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at 09:17 #37349
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at 21:32 #37211kluoParticipant
Hi Beth,
I would like to note that on page 5 line 8 there is a spelling mistake.
Instead of ‘it’ there was t
Katherine
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at 21:24 #37210kluoParticipant
Hi Beth,
I chose my favourite short story to do the homework on, The Lamb to the Slaughter
I think this book is amazing because it teaches you one way not to kill someone. It was a little bit creepy as it gives you a bad influence on murder, but overall I think the book is great. The book creates tension and still is a good one.
I would recommend the book to people who like murder-mystery stories as Roald Dahl throws the story into action and he knows how to make these stories short as well as action-packed. I feel it is weird for someone to be able to kill someone else with a leg of lamb. I think this story is for kids that are over 10 so they won’t feel so scared about this story and they will be sensible about what they do to their husband in the future. Roald Dahl writes stories for children although if I were writing this book I would recommend it for children above 10 years old.
I feel that Roald Dahl has really ”squeezed the juice out ” of this book and got the main events in as well as explained them well. He is really good at writing short stories which I wouldn’t be able to myself. This book is quite mysterious as well as gothic because it has romance and can be scary.
Thank you,
Katherine
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at 21:08 #35859kluoParticipant
Sorry I posted on the wrong page. please ignore my last post.
James
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at 20:35 #35173kluoParticipant
Hi Beth,
Here is my work for week three.
Yours sincerely,
James Luo
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<p style=”text-align: right;”>James Luo</p>
<p style=”text-align: right;”>Kidmore Road,</p>
<p style=”text-align: right;”>Reading</p>
Dear Professor Molly,I am writing to you because there is a huge problem in my town that we need you to come and fix.
First, I need you to come and undo this unhygienic problem. Everybody is not washing their hands, not cleaning up, and eating rotten food!!!
It’s a horrible, disgusting, and yucky situation. It’s horrible, can’t you agree? Of course, it’s horrible because only one illness can spread over the whole world. Remember the last time it got a quarter of the people became ill and we don’t want it happening again! It must make you feel cross.
Maybe you can use some magic to see what’s going on. If you can make those who are not following hygiene have a carrot for their nose that would be perfect.
Please be here as soon as you can.
Yours sincerely,
James Luo
P.S. Rattle the mailbox 5 times, knock on the door twice, and ring the doorbell 10 times.
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