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    • #18594
      Kimberley
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      Dear Beth,

      Sorry I sent this newspaper homework late.

      Kind regards,

      Kimberley

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    • #18162
      Kimberley
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      Hi Beth,

      Please find my homework for week 3,

      Kind regards,

      Kimberley

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    • #17890
      Kimberley
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      Dear Beth,

      Please find Kimberley’s homework for week 2.

      Thanks xx

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      Kimberley
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      Dear Beth,

      Please find Kimberley’s homework.

      Thanks xx

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    • #16051
      Kimberley
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      My favorite part of the story is when Harry gets sorted into his house. The reason I like this part is because that it’s the first time Harry’s ever been to Hogwarts and at the start, he thought he had to do a test or something but he was relieved that they just had to put on the sorting hat.

      There are about a million reasons why I liked this part but I’ll only tell you one reason for now. When the sorting happens there’s so much detail and I love it when the time Harry mutters ‘Not Slytherine, Not Slytherine’ so he’s been put in Griffindor by the hat, so he also can stay with his best friend, Ron Weasley, the ginger hair and freckled boy Harry met on the train to Hogwarts.

      The part where I was really excited was when Harry’s name was called and people started muttering and whispering about things about him and it proves that Harry is actually the ‘famous boy who lived against Voldemort’.

      When the sorting hat said ‘you would do good in Slytherine, no?’ I thought that Harry was going to be put in Slytherine but actually when the sorting hat said ‘ If your sure then you must be put in…GRIFFINDOR!!!!!!!!!!!!’ Then I was happy for Harry because he wouldn’t be put in Slytherine (his least favorite house because of Malfoy).And I also think its important because this is where Harry takes place for all his adventures and in the hats song it said Grinffindors are brave.

       

      Written by Kimberley J

    • #15870
      Kimberley
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      Harry and the other first years were waiting for the sorting to begin, some of the first years were trembling. Harry could feel himself shaking as they stepped into a magnificent hall with four long tables filled with older Hogwarts pupils, as they reached to the other end of the hall, there was an old filthy hat laying on a stool. For a moment, everyone was silence but then the hat broke by the edge and started to sing a poem song. After about five minutes, the hat finished its song and there was a loud applause from everyone, Professor McGonagall unrolled a piece of parchment and declared ‘‘when I call your name you will come and put the hat on your head,’’ “Ronald Weasley!” Ron walked slowly to the sorting hat and putted on his head, for a moment there was silence but then the hat shouted “GRIFFINDOR!!!” One of the long tables at the edge roared with happiness and welcomed Ron to the house table. “Draco Malfoy!” shouted Professor McGonagall and Malfoy did the same thing, the sorting hat barely touched his head and yelled “SLYTHERINE!!!” the green table screeched as the boy went to join the others. “Harry Potter!!!!” exclaimed Professor McGonagall suddenly there was some muttering all around the hall as Harry went to the hat, he jammed it on his head and the hat started to speak, “hmm… a very interesting brain, ahh yes, lots of courage I see,” “not Slytherin, not Slytherin,” muttered Harry, “not Slytherin? Well, you would do good in there I suppose, no? well if your sure then it must be GRIFFINDOR!!!” screeched the sorting hat. Relieved and calm, he went to join the other beaming Gryffindors.

      Written by Kimberley

    • #18098
      Kimberley
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      Dear Beth,

      Thank you for your feedback.

      I have extended the final part, can you have a look please?

      Thanks,

      Kimberley

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