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Dear Beth,
I have written my homework underneath. Sorry that its late i have been doing a lot of traveling.
Thank you,
Jingyan English writing 3
I was sitting nervously in the front seat of a rollercoaster with my shaking hands on the bar in front of me then all of a sudden whoosh! The rollercoaster rocketed forward like a plane taking off the ground. All the people behind me were swaying there arms that looked like they would just break off when I was holding onto the bar as tightly as I could. Everyone else were also screaming and shouting until the rickety seats came to a halt. I felt like i had been sucked up into a washing machine and so nauseous i could hardly stand up. I never wanted to go on it again even though I like them now.
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Jingyan’s english writing 2
Liam was enjoying the early morning sunshine in his garden and went to get a cup of water. As he was going up the glistening marble stairs he found a small mossy wooden door. He immediately teleported inside not knowing what was in there. He looked around with a disappointed frown on his face. Liam thought it was just a normal dingy little attic but in reality it was a magical room.
The small room was quite creepy. There was a rocking chair sitting in the lifeless room creeking from side to side with the a single square of light shining on it from the slanted ceiling of the attic. There were prehistoric paintings in the corner of room. Liam went back to the door to try and open it but it just won’t budge. He was trapped. He started running around the room and accidentally pushed a key hidden in the painting and gears started to move. Lights flashed endlessly but then something came out of…
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