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    • #41687
      Jin
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      Hey Beth,

      Had an error submitting last homework,

      Hope this one works, here’s my homework

      BREAKING NEWS: Crazy feljne turns on fellow creatures and threatens to ‘shriek’ their heads off Local cat declares war on birds in neighborhood.

      A pet feline residing in Church Street, Altrincham has drawn the community’s attention towards the impending  twist as it declared war in the communal altercation between felines and birds. Our next door neighbor, the obese cat named only Mr Whiskers decided to call a press conference and stated his intentions on his front lawn this morning, much to the chagrin of the stunned neighbours and actual pigeons.

      The tensions have been rising for months, insiders have known it for long. A resident giving her account to this reporter said, “ I have noticed that cat lurking around my bird feeder for the past one month. I see he was up to something, but I never expected this. ”

      Mr Whiskers lived and breathed mice chasing at 7 years of age but the latest events definitely drove him to the edge. Admittedly, the last drop, it seemms, was added on the corresponding morning of the past week when vocal birds could be heard singing at dawn.

      The feline has started deploying his armies with cats from the neighbourhood and had vowed to make them partners in the looting process.

      This declaration has caused the community to be divided with the heads of dogs informing the birds that they will be supporting them in what they have termed as an anti-cat-astrophe war. The local mice have said they would help remain middlemen for whatever the cats want provided they are spared from the next hunting season.

      Councilor Reginald expressed concern over the escalating situation: ”We appeal to the parties interested – let them sit and negotiate; perhaps the birds will be quieter, and the cat will go to sleep at night.”

      At night, Every door and window in Church Street is closed and people put their bird baths into their homes. Whether or not this fight between species will be defeated or drag to other streets is what only time can tell.

      This is A. I. Scrivener, directly from the warzone of The Great Altrincham War of 2024. Stay tuned for updates, and remember: was in these trying times you should lock your cats indoors and get rid of the bird feeeders high.

    • #41278
      Jin
      Participant

      Hey Beth,

      Here is my homework

      Scene: The trick takes place after The Pizza Bandit, the bad guy of the piece, has stolen pizza and escapes during one of the chase episodes where the two main protagonists pursue the villain through the streets of a city. Inspector Pizza: Uh, Mark, yes, and we’re chasing him too, Pizza Steve?The alley and dark roads where The Pizza Bandit perpetrates his crimes will light up this time and he will be apprehended and pay for his deeds. Pizza Steve: Huh, huh, huh – it was established Everyone is an enemy?We absolutely need to catch this man, or else he will escape!In an ethical sense, it is more moral to support pizzas from the city so that such people do not create monopolies in the market. The chase leads them to a six pack alley and there they find The Pizza Bandit pushing the wheeled pizza cart. The Pizza Bandit: Oh, you thought we were equal for that moment there when you were desperately trying to take your slice back from me? Not a chance baby, that pizza is staying right here!Inspector Pizza: Ha ha, all you Pizza Bandit want to say nasty things to fa’ that!And it appears that the days are over when you could entertain yourself at the cost of other’s pain and suffering![With a swift move, Inspector Pizza and Pizza Steve work together to apprehend The Pizza Bandit and recover the stolen pizza, bringing an end to The Great Pizza Heist. Inspector Pizza: (winking) Just as soon as I ordered myself a pizza, it seems as though I have provided yet an favor to the fans of pizza for days. Pizza Steve: A smile on the face feels great, and the thief does not have to return any goods again. At the end with both of them struggling and being taken away in The Pizza Bandit cart, the citizens of the city can again sleep soundly knowing that their pizzas are safe. And scene!Getting to the ranch the next day with pizza puns on the plate, the gang gets a slice of detective story as the action goes on!

      Thank You!

      Jin

    • #40997
      Jin
      Participant

      Hi Beth,

      Sorry about the homework’s i completely forgot about i watch your offline classes,

      Here’s my homework

      Daybreak was spreading through the frosty picture windows of the old house and the crawling shadows of the travelling party on the old stones. Suddenly as I was only a few metres away from it, the coldness was felt and eerie goose bumps started to form on me. The creaking sound of the entrance sign of the iron gates that inaugurated the rest of the house was as loud as telling the visitor that the house is not ready to receive any guest.

      and that was the mystery of the mansion within there. Graffiti had been gouged into walls and smoke rose from tallow candles spilling molten wax upon antique tapestries or over-sized furnishings. Each new floor, I rose to seemed to produce different ghosts of times past.

      I happened to find a two-part yellow diaries that had been forgotten in the corner of my bedroom. What I enjoyed best about reading the stories was the stories that tell of love and end in a tragic manner with the reader about to be filled with sadness. I will simply say that it seemed to me that there were a few who tried to bring the souls of the forgotten in their sentences.

      Before closing the diary the wind blew away all the candles in the room. Darkness existed and in its midst there was a power that I would call invisible but I felt it. My heart beat like a rabbit and I wanted to skip the pit of sick house.

      Through the window I realized that there were still some hidden spaces in that ghost mansion which still remained untouched besides those dim walls and varnished floors. The mansion had been my second home for many hours and it had let me know its story in a way it is hard for one to overlook.

    • #38582
      Jin
      Participant

      Hi Beth,

      Here is my homework,

      “What, a volcanic eruption? Stop lying! This mountain has been dormant for centuries,” their guide smugly stated, leading them over the difficult terrain with their faces more and more concerned. This voyage would possibly its their last moments unknowingly to them. Danger mounted but guide was anything but unnerved.

      The guide said ironically that if the worst comes to the worst then it will be the tourists panic that will break rather than the volcano. But, what in the world led to the end of them in such dangerous conditions? It began with a charming Christmas commercial assuring one in a lifetime expedition to an inactive volcano with only 0.000000000000001233321233491901122% chance of eruption.

      Their love for adventure made them go on a trip where in they got stranded on a distant volcanic island. In spite of their guide, they tried their best and followed the steps ,and no error stopped them hear the ominous mutter of the volcano.

      The uneasiness had become a whole new level, the crisis was going to happen. Sudden quakes rocked the lands as deep earth fissures widened opening, the scalding flows spilling, ready to enclose them in its blazing limbs.

    • #37691
      Jin
      Participant

      Sorry I tried to use a font but it doesn’t work,

      Here it is,

      Hey Beth!

      I hope you’re doing well and having a good time. I wanted to talk to you about something that’s been on a lot of peoples mind, the upcoming mock exam.

      We all have so much going on with our schoolwork and other activities like extra curriculum. So I was thinking, maybe we could take a little break from the exams. I’m not trying to avoid our responsibilities, but I think it could be a good idea to give everyone a fair chance to succeed and have fun.

      I know that exams are important for various types of things like testing our understanding of the subjects, but things are a bit different right now. With the current situation, many of us are facing unique challenges that can affect our ability to perform at our best. Some people may be dealing with technical difficulties during online exams because of their Wi-Fi and that’s not really are fault, while others may be struggling with the lack of in-person support and resources. So I think by taking a break from all these exams, we could work together to overcome these challenges and ensure that everyone has an equal opportunity to succeed.

      During this break, we can also focus on strengthening our understanding of the material. We could have more interactive discussions, engage in group activities, and seek additional guidance from our teachers. This would not only enhance our learning experience but also foster a sense of collaboration and support among students. It would give us a chance to ask questions and get more help if we need it. Plus, it would give our teachers a chance to make sure the assessments are fair for everyone, taking into consideration the unique circumstances we’re facing.

      Something I want to make it clear is that I’m not saying exams aren’t important. They play a crucial role in evaluating our knowledge and skills. However, given the current circumstances, it’s important to adapt and find alternative ways to assess our understanding. By taking a temporary break from exams, we can ensure that the assessments are meaningful and accurately reflect our abilities.

      I believe that if you consider this suggestion, it would really help all of us students. It would provide us with the support and flexibility we need to thrive academically, even in these challenging times. It would show that you truly care about our well-being and success.

      Thanks for taking the time to think about this. Me and other students all appreciate your dedication to our education and growth.

      Thank you for listening and I appreciate your time,

      From Jin!

    • #37690
      Jin
      Participant

      <p style=”text-align: center;”>Hey Beth,</p>
      <p style=”text-align: center;”>Here is my mock exam I wrote,</p>
      <p style=”text-align: center;”>Topic: Attempting to persuade you to stop mock exams

      Hey Beth!</p>
      <p style=”text-align: center;”>I hope you’re doing well and having a good time. I wanted to talk to you about something that’s been on a lot of peoples mind, the upcoming mock exam.</p>
      <p style=”text-align: center;”>We all have so much going on with our schoolwork and other activities like extra curriculum. So I was thinking, maybe we could take a little break from the exams. I’m not trying to avoid our responsibilities, but I think it could be a good idea to give everyone a fair chance to succeed and have fun.</p>
      <p style=”text-align: center;”>I know that exams are important for various types of things like testing our understanding of the subjects, but things are a bit different right now. With the current situation, many of us are facing unique challenges that can affect our ability to perform at our best. Some people may be dealing with technical difficulties during online exams because of their Wi-Fi and that’s not really are fault, while others may be struggling with the lack of in-person support and resources. So I think by taking a break from all these exams, we could work together to overcome these challenges and ensure that everyone has an equal opportunity to succeed.</p>
      <p style=”text-align: center;”>During this break, we can also focus on strengthening our understanding of the material. We could have more interactive discussions, engage in group activities, and seek additional guidance from our teachers. This would not only enhance our learning experience but also foster a sense of collaboration and support among students. It would give us a chance to ask questions and get more help if we need it. Plus, it would give our teachers a chance to make sure the assessments are fair for everyone, taking into consideration the unique circumstances we’re facing.</p>
      <p style=”text-align: center;”>Something I want to make it clear is that I’m not saying exams aren’t important. They play a crucial role in evaluating our knowledge and skills. However, given the current circumstances, it’s important to adapt and find alternative ways to assess our understanding. By taking a temporary break from exams, we can ensure that the assessments are meaningful and accurately reflect our abilities.</p>
      <p style=”text-align: center;”>I believe that if you consider this suggestion, it would really help all of us students. It would provide us with the support and flexibility we need to thrive academically, even in these challenging times. It would show that you truly care about our well-being and success.</p>
      <p style=”text-align: center;”>Thanks for taking the time to think about this. Me and other students all appreciate your dedication to our education and growth.</p>
      <p style=”text-align: center;”>Thank you for listening and I appreciate your time,

      From Jin!</p>

    • #37582
      Jin
      Participant

      Hi Beth,

      Here is my homework,

      Topic: Environment and earth 🌍 ✨

      Hello everyone 👋 ,

      Let’s explore the profound importance of taking care of our environment. Let’s think of our planet earth as a humongous team where all the animals, plants, air, and water all work together. Each part of earth has a special role, just like players on a sports team. Preserving the environment is like being the PE teacher making sure every player does their best for their team, this is exactly like people saving out world. 🐶☘️🌊💨

      Biodiversity is like having different positions in a game like football. Every species whether it’s big or small  has a job in keeping everything in balance. It’s not just about saving cute and beloved animals, it’s about making sure our earth stays strong and healthy. ❤️‍🩹

      Our health is connected to the environment too. Clean air is like our MVP (also known as Most Valuable Player) because it helps us breathe well. Clean/Safe water is like our secret weapon, making sure we stay strong and hydrated. By taking care of the environment, we’re basically cheering for our team’s success and our own well being. 🫧

      Now let’s talk about climate change. It’s like playing a game with rules that are getting trickier and trickier. Our actions, like using too much energy or cutting down too many trees can make the game harder. But if we play smart and use our resources wisely, it’s like giving earth a strategy to win.🫡

      Resource conservation is a bit like managing our teams equipment. We want to make sure we have enough for everyone and for the future. It’s not just about using things; it’s about using them in a way that keeps our team strong for a long time. 💪

      Remember, being a part of Team Earth is not just about saving the environment – it’s about making sure everyone gets a fair chance to enjoy it. We’re all players on this team, and by taking care of our environment, we’re showing teamwork and responsibility towards earth. So, let’s be Earth champions and play our part for a much greener, much healthier planet. 🏆

      TEAM EARTH! 🌎✨

    • #36817
      Jin
      Participant

      Hi Beth,

      Here is the mock exam I’ve written,

      This is about the locked room murder mystery, the locked room murder mystery takes place on a quite fancy luxurious cruise ship. The victim is a rich, wealthy businessman who is suddenly found dead in his own cabin also which has been locked from the inside. The ship is currently cruising in the centre of the ocean, and there is no possible way for the murderer to have left the room without being seen or heard. The supreme leader of all detective who is named, “the unmatched” is in charge of the investigation who also happens to be on the cruise ship as a passenger. The supreme, the best, the unmatched detective, Willy Wonka (I can’t think of any names but this came into my mind so I chose it), is enjoying his vacation and was having a fabulous time on the cruise ship when he is mysteriously approached by the captain of the cruise ship. The fierce captain tells him that there has been a murder on board and asks for his help in solving the case of the unknown murder on deck. Wonka agrees to help and begins to investigate the crime scene everyone is terrified of. Wonks discovers something scary, he found out that the victim, Dr Joseph, was stabbed to death with a letter opener. The cabin door was locked from the inside, but there are no signs of forced entry. Wonka comes up with a idea, he interviews all the passengers and crew members one by one who were near Dr Joseph’s cabin at the time of the murder. He discovers that several people had motives for killing Dr Joseph, including his very keen business partner, his ex-wife, also a disgruntled employee. However, none of them have a solid alibi for the time of the murder. John begins to piece together the clues and realizes that the killer must have used a super duper top secret passage to enter and exit the cabin which means someone must of helps him. He discovers the passage and confronts the killer, who turns out to be the victim’s business partner. The partner had been embezzling money from the company and feared that Dr Joseph was about to discover his scheme. Finally, the killer is arrested, and the passengers and crew members breathe their biggest sigh of relief. Wonka returns to his vacation, but he can’t shake off the feeling that there is more to the case than meets the eye. He discovers that the victim’s ex-wife was also involved in the murder and had helped the killer enter the cabin. Here’s a summary of what happened, In this locked room murder mystery, the villain is the victim’s business partner, who is motivated by greed and fear. The story is with multiple suspects and red herrings. The detective uses his skills and intuition to solve the case and bring the killer to true justice.

    • #36630
      Jin
      Participant

      Dear Beth

      Here is my homework,

      Little Women is a novel that explores universal themes of family, love, and self improvement. Little Women’s universality is due to a variety of aspects. Little Women is a story about the love between the 4 sisters, which is a relatable and a craving theme for lots readers who read Little Women. The novel investigates the conflicts between familial duty and growth, especially for the women in the 19th century’s. This theme is still connected in the modern day world, as many people struggle to balance their own goals with their leadership to their families. Little Women questions the sustainability of gender stereotypes for both male and female. Jo is the protagonist, frustrates classic gender expectations by wanting to earn a living and rejecting social norms. Little Women underlines the importance of being honest and true to someone. Little Women is universal and timeless and many people struggle to find their own identity/gender and place in this world. Although the fact that the characters in Little Women come from a very different time and places than many other readers, the themes of little women and messages are still important to this day. The universality of this book lies in its ability to investigate timeless themes with readers and all their backgrounds, story’s and experiences.

    • #36300
      Jin
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Thank you for the lesson,

      Here is my homework,

      I would like to hear Marmees perspective, Marmee is quite the complex character in the little women with her own preferences , fears, and exasperation. Seeing this story from Marmees perspective would make or have readers to understand her motivations and feeling deeper. Marmee is a character who always continues and keeps persisting and who challenges many of the social standards of her time. Seeing this story from her perspective would not just have readers understand her motivations deeper but highlight the ways in which she pushes against these standards and the impact this has on her family and community. Marmee has some close relationships with every each of her daughters, as well as with her husband and other people or members in the community. Seeing the story from her perspective would provide a more distinctive view of these relationships she has to them and the challenges they face.
      Generally Speaking, seeing the story from Marmee’s perspective would add deeper depth and complexity to the novel, which would offer new insights into the characters and events in the book we read.

    • #36299
      Jin
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Thanks for the lesson,

      Heres my homework,

      My spirits revived a little as I thought about the possibility of tricking the reader in the style of Christie. I hardly listened to the next words said Poirot. Christie is known for her ability to hide plot secrets in sight, this makes the reader feel like they have a good and fair chance to solve the mystery by themselves. She also wrote few forward thinking criminals who overlook permanently remove the threat of Poirot. As I pondered the idea of a Christie styled twist, I was thinking about the book “Little Women” that I had read recently. Although it wasn’t much of a mystery novel, it had a twist that I did not expect to happen. I wondered if I could incorporate a some similar twist into my own piece of writing. As I examine the likelihood, I realised that I could use different chronicle viewpoints to set up the expectation of an inverted mystery, as it looks like we are being shown the killer from as early in chapter 2 and the reader may begin to think that this story is going to be a cat and a mouse variety. For this purpose, I began to plot out my own story or writing, hoping to create a twist that would surprise and delight the readers in the exact or even better way that Christies stories had surprised me.

    • #35947
      Jin
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      here is my homework,

      thanks for the lesson,

      Once upon a time, there was a little women named Adeline. She dreamed of becoming a famous writer. She was born in London, 1882. The reason why she wanted to be a writer is because of her family, her family is a family of writers and intellectuals. Adeline had faced many challenges in her life such as sexual abuse (shaming someone because of their gender) by her older stepbrothers named George Duckworth and Gerald Duckworth. Despite all these hard times, Adeline later on became or known as Virginia Woolf and she went on to be one of the most successful female writers in thr United Kingdom. Her works like Mrs Dalloway, Orlando and to the lighthouse have become the exemplar for English Literature.

    • #35839
      Jin
      Participant

      Hi Beth,

      Here is my Homework,

      My homework is also on top so I’ll post it again in case you didn’t see it

      Thank you for the lesson

      Robert Westall portrays the children in the machine gunners, innocent and being affected from the war. They are engrossed of the machine gun and war related stuff (such as fighting), but they also have to go through the fear of they town being bombed. Another one is about the town of Garmouth where in the book, it is portrayed as the place that has been changed ever since the war happened. A lot has been destroyed like playgrounds for little kids to play in.

      This shows that war can be affected for those who are not involved in fighting and shows the damages of the innocent civilians life.

    • #35765
      Jin
      Participant

      Hi Beth,

      Here is my Homework,

      I know it’s a bit early and you haven’t put it on yet but I know what it is,

      Thank you for the lesson

      Robert Westall portrays the children in the machine gunners, innocent and being affected from the war. They are engrossed of the machine gun and war related stuff (such as fighting), but they also have to go through the fear of they town being bombed. Another one is about the town of Garmouth where in the book, it is portrayed as the place that has been changed ever since the war happened. A lot has been destroyed like playgrounds for little kids to play in.

      This shows that war can be affected for those who are not involved in fighting and shows the damages of the innocent civilians life.

    • #35688
      Jin
      Participant

      Sorry i pressed on the wrong file,

      here it is

      I picked Chas McGill, he is a very smart 14 year old that lives in the north-east England and goes to a local high school. Chas McGill likes to collect war related stuff and is obsessed with the idea of capturing a German machine gun. Chas is a risk taker and is willing to to take precarious action to make his dreams come true. Chas’s role in the machine gunners is to drive the plot forwarde and provide a sense of excitement for the person who is reading it.

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