@ericl
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I would take the Micky out of economics and inflation because it’s getting way out of hand in 2024 you buy a loaf of bread for example and then 1 year later you go buy another loaf of bread and you see it’s gone up in price buy 20% and you here a little dumb phrase like it’s not getting smaller your getting bigger and economics is just terrible you don’t know who to trust to run the country and make the write decisions it’s a very important role so you can’t trust any stranger in the modern world
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My character Will be a young pretty lady she is 19 years and called Victoria
“NO IM NOT GOING TO GET MARRIED I HAVE A VERY HAPPY LIFE AND I DONT NEED A STUPID HUSBAND THAT JUST DOES NOTHING IM FAIRLY RICH SO THERES NO POINT HAVING THIS DISCUSSION WITH ME MOTHER ! I’m doing what’s best for you victoria if you don’t listen your going to regret every moment of your life! I KNOW WHAT IM DOING SO SHUT UP ! Victoria’s thoughts why wont my mother just respect what I’m want she just this sassy nagger that’s on my case all the time it’s so annoying.Mothers thoughts Why wont my daughter victoria just listen to my good proposal it’s not like she has anything to lose by marrying . Victorias thoughts My Mothers just thinking about why she shines she is the best in the world and everyone’s below her but she’s wrong tho she just think Whereall peasants and should listen to her .
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I fell like Mr Bennetis is the most amusing character because it’s kind of like he always get overthrown by his wife.Its kind of silly and funny how you think of a time period like that Mr Bennetis would be in charge of the house not Mrs Bennetis because the man is being held back . Mrs Bennetis also is like telling her children what to do and Mr Bennetis would not dare say a word but a stereotypical Victorian house hold it the 1800s ,it would not seem to be very normal in he 1800s Mrs Bennetis is very controlsive about what happened in the house like you can’t do that you can’t go do that and tells Mrs Bennetis off for stupid reasons .
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Yes because Tim diamond and nick are both funny characters and it would be interesting to see them solve another mystery like 2 Freinds going to there office and reporting the same person but saying there where in diffrent places since Timon is saying John when missing at the park but leo is saying he was last Sean at a zoo it would be very interesting to see the author write about it and how they get closer to solving the mystery and there being sone sort of plot twist and but eventually it’s all good and they find where John is and the story is over also Tim diamond being the older brother os funny becuase he is not as smart as nick nick being young and smarter kind of overshadows Tim diamond.
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Nick and Tim diamond are not your usual detectives because Tim diamond always tries to lighten the mood same as nick tim diamond is like the main detective and nick is his helper ,Tim diamond should be in a book for the worlds worst detective because he sucks at his job but it’s like a good type of I suck at my job overall I think Tim diamond are not the type of detectives you think they are because you think of a detective to be serious tim diamond and nick make it sound like a completely different story.The Falcons Masteaser is also a parody of a movie from the 1940 s they changed the title to somthing stupid to make the movie sound dumb becuase malteaser is a choclate and a falcon owning a malteaser is pretty funny.
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DRACULA IS MUDURED BY JONATHAN HARKER AND QUINCEY MORRIS HOW HE DIED IS SHOCKING
As he finisheds loading up some boxes he walks on the soil of transalvania at night with the moon peaking for the final time but little does he know he is about to be mudured in a way humans couldn’t even imagine we dont hare much information yet about this disgusting murder yet but it seemed like Jonathan Harker and Quincey morris had a planed this moment for many many many years and Jonathan harker seemed like a trust worthy material in the begging 2 lessons learnt in this paragraph 1 don’t trust strangers some wolves could be disguised in a sheep’s clothes and 2 good always beat the evil so like Count Dracula was an evil disgusting horrifying human being and jonathan harker was good like a nice man from every book from good be evil Count Dracula vs Jonathan harker it seams like Count Dracula would wit every time but in the end Jonathan harker takes the cake
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DRACULA IS MUDURED BY JONATHAN HARKER AND QUINCEY MORRIS HOW HE DIED IS SHOCKING
As he finisheds loading up some boxes he walks on the soil of transalvania at night with the moon peaking for the final time but little does he know he is about to be mudured in a way humans couldn’t even imagine we dont hare much information yet about this disgusting murder yet but it seemed like Jonathan Harker and Quincey morris had a planed this moment for many many many years and Jonathan harker seemed like a trust worthy material in the begging 2 lessons learnt in this paragraph 1 don’t trust strangers some wolves could be disguised in a sheep’s clothes and 2 good always beat the evil so like Count Dracula was an evil disgusting horrifying human being and jonathan harker was good like a nice man from every book from good be evil Count Dracula vs Jonathan harker it seams like Count Dracula would wit every time but in the end Jonathan harker takes the cake
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Dracula is a mysterious fake creature because the writer did this at th turn of the century on purpous (it’s my prediction). He did this because he wanted to scare people into believing this targeting the little kids and early teenagers because he wouldn’t expect 30 year old adults to believe that sort of stuff .dracula is an fictional creature because in real life have we ever seen a mysterious blood sucking animal on earth no because it’s all just a theory.
<b>Dracula is an evil presence because there is no scientific stuff to say that blood sucking stuff is real like Dracula and even if it was true we would see vampires not everyday but like every moth you would see 2-3 vampires so that’s why Dracula and vampires are not real.</b>
i forgot to tell you that I’m doing the secand question sorry .
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Why humans thought that vampires would take over
Firstly humans did not have many cures to diseases so if these mosteroue creators started roaming around humans would be terrified. Secondly it was the turn of the century witch meant a new everything new technology like fridges and clocks and watches but if new humans species came humans would be scared for there life.Thirdly humans like not want o look like those mosterous creatures because they would think things like ahhh I don’t want to look like that I don’t want to drink a different humans blood so humans would be terrified.Vampires also have many super crazy abilities so if a vampire came up to human they human would run but then the vampire would turn into a bay to fly but then the human finds a rock wall and then h morphes into a lizard out of nowhere.
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Hope you get better
Why humans thought that vampires would take over
Firstly humans did not have many cures to diseases so if these mosteroue creators started roaming around humans would be terrified. Secondly it was the turn of the century witch meant a new everything new technology like fridges and clocks and watches but if new humans species came humans would be scared for there life.Thirdly humans like not want o look like those mosterous creatures because they would think things like ahhh I don’t want to look like that I don’t want to drink a different humans blood so humans would be terrified.Vampires also have many super crazy abilities so if a vampire came up to human they human would run but then the vampire would turn into a bay to fly but then the human finds a rock wall and then h morphes into a lizard out of nowhere.
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this will be taking place at chapter 3 when the boy meets naledi and tiro
boy: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH there is black people here HELP ME SAVE ME
naledi and tiro: what we didn’t do anything ?
boys dad: why are you two doing in this white neighbourhood and why you touch my kid
tiro: WE DID NOT DO ANYTHING TO YOUR STUPID KID
naledi: whispers SHUT UP TIRO than sorry sir
black police: what are you doing
naledi we just wanted to walk to johanesburg
black police:ok you may go
naledi and tiro: thank you
police and dad have argument
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Dear diary
It is 1943 and im bored because i have no fun things to do and life sucks Im poor and my children are 250 kilometers away i have a 13 year old nadine and my youngest kid is sick and my boss wont let me go home and they treat me like a slave and i earn 1 pound and 5 pence every hour barley enough to provide for my family . when i asked my boss to go home to cape town she was so rude like in a sassy voice she was like okay but only an week and every day your pay will decrease.
Thats it for today bye
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My character is called Tomas. His job is just picking pocket. He looks very rich, but he is actually very poor.
Last Saturday, he just finds a new friend since he is also very friendly. The friend is called Sallyanne. She is nice and friendly too. She is rich but she is very bad at pick pocket so Tomas will teach her to pick pocket. He says you just need to pretend to want to be friend with that guy, then go in front of him then pick that guy’s pocket. The girl touches her pocket. She cannot find her phone. So, Tomas get her phone out and ask her if that is her phone. She learned how to pick pocket and they train each other. Then they start try to teamwork and start picking other people’s pocket. They find other fat and rich guy because if the fat guy finds out, they can run away easily. one of them talk to the fat guy and the other one picks the fat guy’s pocket. Sometimes if one of them that is picking pocket got find out, then the other one will say” Let me help you to chase that guy then they both run away.
A few year’s past, they both are neighbors and being rich living happily after ever.
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My idol is Dav Pilky because he makes a lot of good books like captain underpants and dog man. Dog man is a comic book but there is still some word I can learn from it. I also can learn some word that is not so good so when my brother say some thing bad to me, I now what is he talking about. I make this poem with some of his word.
Last summer vacation, I stayed in Canada with my brother and my parents.
I read the newspaper and it said that there is a ghost in the hotel. I showed them the newspaper, but they said that there is no ghost in the world. So, I keep reading the newspaper. We feel so bored, so we open the TV. The news also said that there is a ghost in the hotel. So, me and my brother want to check the hotel. We saw people carrying their things running away from the hotel. We asked one of them, but he said just do not go in. But we still go in to check. We go into the room with a guy. He asked our name and he is our neighbor.
At that night, we did not see anything, but a golden hair and the ghost’s hair is also gold in the news. We asked the lady who clean the room if she had seen anything, but she did not see anything, also. So, we planned. That night, we did not sleep, and we waited until someone came out beside our neighbor. The ghost looked at us and said” go home Eric, it is dangerous hear.” And next it said,” Alan take your family home and don’t come back.” And the ghost goes back to the exit. We ran after the ghost. But it disappeared. The only thing we have found is a golden hair again. So, we are very sure that yesterday’s ghost is the same one. We knew that the ghost knows us because it says our name and call us to go back home that night. We think that it is our neighbor because he asked our name yesterday. We asked the cleaning lady to open the door and we check the room. But we have seen nothing but a photo of our neighbor. The cleaning lady told us that they move to the 1653 room, so we have gone there. We saw the sword the ghosts had; it is made up of wood. We also found the ghosts head under the bed.
At last, our neighbor got sent to jail and the hotel keep on working. And we became a detective.
I think other people can also read his book because it is quite interesting.
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