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Edwin – homework #5
A haunted house adventure:
In a scary haunted house, there were GHOSTS!!!!!!!!!! BONES OF DEAD PEOPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!! A little boy went into this house even his father warned him not to go in, the boy decided to investigate. The house was called THE HOUSE OF DOOM!!! The boy went into the house up the creepy crumbling staircase. First he saw a ghost, luckily it was a statue. Next there was a real ghost, standing guard. It walked towards the boy, the boy ran and slammed the door to the other door. It was no use the ghost was transparent it flew through the door, luckily a table hit it. The ghost was dead, the boy found a knife and a gun, so he took it……to the next room. Now it was scary, there were Bones ghosts spiders dead humans! The boy sneaked to ghosts back and killed it one by one, and finally there was a ghost that turned dead and turn alive in 4 seconds. The was the FIRST one who saw it. It has sharp teeth red eyes blooding heads! However it did not see him, PHEW. The ghost later saw him the boy use the gun he took shooting lasers using knives, shooting at the ghost remember it can turn alive. The only way to defeat it was to use a laser shoot to blow up the entire house. That was what the boy did. At last it was a happy ending, the little boy went home without getting hurt! -
The Witch
In a little scary house, there was a witch called Doctor Von Malice. She looked like all kinds of ghosts. She wore black broken dresses and a black broken hat with a giant spider on it. The giant spider had its mouth wide open! Trying to eat something!
She was a very strong and evil witch. Sometimes, she saw a cute pretty baby in a restaurant, she would say ‘Incendioʼ! And then the baby became a snoozecumber. When the babyʼs parents saw the snoozecumber, they screamed! But the witch smiled and disappeared in the air.
She knew another strong spell, which is ‘Aguamentyʼ. It turned things into something stinky.
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Homework 3 – by Edwin
Once upon a time, there was a dandelion floating in the air. A ladybug lived on it! It was sitting on the stem of the dandelion as if a witch was sitting on a broom. The creature was very beautiful and cute, it was as small as a eraser. It thought the dandelion was its home! It lived for years and years.
The dandelion was its space ship. It took it up to tall trees, the food for the ladybug was tree leaves! So the storey became captain ladybug and its broom! The dandelion enjoyed staying with the ladybug, and the ladybug enjoyed staying with the dandelion too. They became very best friends!!! -
She saw a fire hawk, her wings being golden. The little fire hawk’s beak was golden. The eagle asked the fire hawk what was her name she answered she was called Blaze. They played everyday afternoon to the evening, they had a lot of fun playing like (hide and seek). They always had to find their food by themselves, or build their nests.
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Mr.Fox
My favourite part of the story was Mr. Fox was nearly caught by the three farmers. Mr. Fox felt
it was poor to live in a hole 🕳 . They always got their food 🥘 outside and he need to be careful from :BEAN BOUNCE and BOGGIS! One day Mr. Fox went out to find food. The farmers
got ready there positions for the wind not to blow to the hole.Mr. Fox 🦊 tried to smell but the wind was blowing to the other side. Soon BANG BANG BANG BANG MR.Fox ran back to the hole.
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Prequel to Esio Trot
A New Neighbour
Mr. Hoppy kept a tortoise at home to. But he did not like it much. So he gave it to the pet shop
owner to let somebody buy buy it. At home 🏠 🏡 Mr. Hoppy had a neighbour moving in. She was really beautiful. So Mr Hoppy always talked to her by the window. He was always waiting
for a chance to tell her his 💗 love.
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Title: Living with anti-evil ants
After grandma took the medicine, she became so small. She cannot come back home so she could only live with ants. Her family would not miss her because she is too annoying. But mother would misssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss her so much because she is her mother. Grandma was so happy living with the ants because she could go anywhere in the world, very slow. She was very careful because people step on them.
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