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Mrs West
76 Errington house
Norman road
SO78 4JI
I am writing on regards of the ‘inspirational figure’ and I regret to say, that getting Micheal Jackson, was both impossible and useless.Inspiration should be of their never giving up attitude, and what they do to the world.
So therefore I would nominate Matt Fraser(the fittest man alive 2022)to be our inspirational figure.For he is both cool as a cucumber, and his never giving up-attitude makes tears in my eyes.He started training, with home made dumbbell’s when he was 13, and going for the olympics.When he was 16 he asked the registration officer to sign him up.He was humiliated for his no-record journey, and cleared out.After crying to sleep, he worked hard.Day, and night.i simply love him.After using his house as desposit, for a olympic medal, he paid a journalist to interview him and he grew more famous.Struggling with his injury, he went on the 2019 bodybuilder tournament.winning one by one.He looked at the current 2019 world number 1.And thought to himself ‘you are not that much bigger than me, you are nit like this big superhero.ok.I can beat you.Went up there and came third.2020 he got third again.He should have been happy.but he was cutting the corners.
Cried all night, and went up there he said ‘i should have been happy with the score, went up there and got *******(swear word)third.But I knew it was a hard ***.I kept cutting corners I shouldn’t have.He kept training and won 2021,2022.Well done matt.His favourite quote ‘I can do what you are not willing to do today, so I can do tomorrow what you can’t.’Please take my suggestion as it would not only interest the children, it would also be <b>affordable,(it will take</b><u style=”font-weight: bold;”>1.5 million to get Micheal jackson.)</u>
sincerely all of the teachers
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How is time presented in the Edgar Allen Poe poem “A Dream Within a Dream”
Allen Pope uses enjambment to help the poem flow like O God! can I not grasp
Them with a tighter clasp?It is as if the poet is using all his breath to grasp the dream.The poet also describes as if the dream was a run through of his entire life.The poet also emphasises on the fact that time in In a night, or in a day,
In a vision, or in none.Time is presented as a precious and unique thing that we should all respect and treasure it.However,what he says can be awkward at times, whereas sometimes things can go by in a flash yet so unstoppable and indomitable as well. This is shown through the quotes, “if hope has flown away” and “while I weep– while I weep”. This oxymoron means that mankind is powerless when it comes to the ruling of time, and that time does not listen to what mankind wants.In conclusion the speaker presents time here as someone who desires to make others sad, and wipe out their dreams. Consuming, as if a menacing monster, eating away hope.
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How is time presented in the Edgar Allen Poe poem “A Dream Within a Dream”
Allen Pope uses enjambment to help the poem flow like O God! can I not grasp
Them with a tighter clasp?It is as if the poet is using all his breath to grasp the dream.The poet also describes as if the dream was a run through of his entire life.The poet also emphasises on the fact that time in In a night, or in a day,
In a vision, or in none.Time is presented as a precious and unique thing that we should all respect and hold.However what he says can be awkward at times, whereas sometimes things can go by in a flash yet so unstoppable and indomitable as well. This is shown through the quotes, “if hope has flown away” and “while I weep– while I weep”. This oxymoron means that mankind is powerless when it comes to the ruling of time, and that time does not listen to what mankind wants.In conclusion the speaker presents time here as someone who desires to make others sad, and wipe out their dreams. Consuming, as if a menacing monster, eating away hope.
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Celebrate the good things in life!
LIVING MATTERS!
We do not live for long, and we usually live in a world of loneliness and depression.What is the use of living when you cannot enjoy it?There is none.A survey in London has shown that 97percent of the people there live rough, and monotonous lives.Enjoy mundane moments such as having a cup of coffee with a friend, breathing the cool fresh air etc etc.Studies all around the world have shown that happiness is 30 percent of your family, 10 percent of your fate, and 60 percent of the choices you make!And happy people live longer, better lives than devastated ones.
SMALL THINGS MAKE BIG THINGS
Just holding a door or smiling at someone is likely to make their day, a story goes that if you help someone and do not look for repayment, then repayment will find you.And this is very true.By smiling or saying thank you at someone for helping you(holding doors, help you reach for the water at lunch time etc)will make you happy too.After all, (sources taken from abc news)”the happiest thing is not laughing by yourself, it is laughing with others.In conclusion, enjoy yourself, enjoy others, and have fun!
<b>HAPPINESS IS EVERYWHERE </b>
Studies from England and Northern Ireland have shown that you make approximately 50,000 decisions in your life(bbc news)and people have a 67 percent chance to choose the wrong, sad, ones.That really breaks my heart.but luckily, us humans as a whole are progressing about 0.075 percent of happy choices per day.My advice is ‘spread peace and love around the world’.That reminds of the old saying,’happiness always passes around.
<i>SO LONG FRIENDS!</i>
Believe me guys, when you close those eyes you will regret being so cruel to this world.But that would be too late, so do not regret and do all the nice things in this world and not in hell.<u>GOOD LUCK!</u>
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the picture one for number 2
Devastation crossed my entire body,Mason was dead.I shook my body as more and more bomb planes arose up the air.The nasty Germans!Who knew that this was the last time to see mum,to see dad?I never got a proper chance to say goodbye.I sobbed over their dead bodies.Cars were twisted into a monster like shape,and the silhouette of the trees that remain shone a image of a creepy beast.
I decided that today was my chance to join the army,I took my dads purse and walked slowly outside.For I didn’t want to join the army,I have a penpal in Germany and we are good freinds.I am tempted to spend my dads money for a trip to England and treat myself with some bread and cheese.You see,the people in my country have always dreamed of a land of peace,amd rumours have said that there wasn’t a single war in England for a hundred years!Imagine!I could go to school,and get a job.My lips mused even thinking about it.What joy,what agony that I could not see my family again.My mind was racing,Family?Or joy?
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section b 6
The day I met my father was 25th of December 2013,I was getting the train off Liverpool and my father texted me.He said he was willing to have some father son bonding time.Since I was three months old I have never seen my father before.I got off the train and I immediately recognised him,he was a big tall,brooding man,with slick hair.I thought my blood was connecting to my father.He was my clone,his fate was my fate and his destiny was mine.
He gave me a hug and he smelt of rich scented perfume.the type my mother used to describe she loved.And had the faint smell of brandy.He dragged me to a bar shop and clapped.
He was very boisterous and the waiter came.
’’boy!’’He cried,even though the waiters all looked at least eighty years of age.
’’I do not like do be clapped at’’ he sulked.
’’i should have bright my whistle’’he exclaimed,’’ I have a very good whistle that works perfectly for the ears of old waiter’s .
‘’You better leave’’,the waiter mumbled
’’yes,yes’’my father said’’Michael lets get the hell out of here!’’he cried’’micheal?micheal?!’’
And i was gone.
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Suspense is explored greatly through this extract because when ‘he’ told the narrator what would happen if the narrator went to any other room but the one he showed the narrator then something gruesome would happen.Suspense is created when ‘he’ does not tell the narrator what the gruesome thing is going to be.
The narrator also uses comparisons like as if he was in prison meaning that in there he did not feel free and couldn’t leave his room or he would be resulted in something gruesome, thus compared as a jail cell;when a prisoner escapes from his cell he gets punished.
The narrator also ‘start’ or jump at his own shadow, meaning he is alarmed and scared.He is getting cautious and afraid.The narrator’s knows that the dracuala is a vampire so he refers on nocturnal existence.And he is afraid of his own shadow.Creating an ominous and suspenseful mood.
In conclusion suspense is explored though out the extract and the author has created a sense of tension as well as suspense throughout this extract
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Suspense is explored greatly through this extract because when ‘he’ told the narrator what would happen if the narrator went to any other room but the one he showed the narrator then something gruesome would happen.Suspense is created when ‘he’ does not tell the narrator what the gruesome thing is going to be.
The narrator also uses comparisons like as if he was in prison meaning that in there he did not feel free and couldn’t leave his room or he would be resulted in something gruesome, thus compared as a jail cell;when a prisoner escapes from his cell he gets punished.
The narrator also ‘start’ or jump at his own shadow, meaning he is alarmed and scared.He is getting cautious and afraid.The narrator’s knows that the dracuala is a vampire so he refers on nocturnal existence.And he is afraid of his own shadow.Creating an ominous and suspenseful mood.
In conclusion suspense is explored though out the extract and the author has created a sense of tension as well as suspense throughout this extract
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