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Are violent video games linked to real-world violence?
Today I am going to talk about are violent video games linked to real-world violence, and I will tell it from two ways, one is that it would make the people think that it is okay to be a violence, and then they would be violence, but in the other hand there is many people who is afraid of it and they might even have a lot of sickness.
First, it will make people be a real violence. When they play that game for many times, they won’t be afraid of it and think that it is a good thing to do, so then they will start bulling others and do violent things, and when they succussed for once, they would be more violent, and when they done it for so many times they would really be a violent. And the others will be bullied even harder, so the people that where been bullied won’t feel good.
Secondly, it will let the person who is afraid of playing that violent game be more afraid. Imagine that every night you are dreaming about scary things, and if you don’t want to play it the “violent people” will force you to play it, or then they will make fun of you or even hit you. And that kind of bad cycle will go again and again, and at last you will have many sicknesses, and you’ll always feel unwell. And there is no one to help you so you will feel very lonely too, because the others are “violent peoples”
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Electronic will destroy our childhood
Imagine that everyone on the world is wearing glasses, and they are not that good to their family because they are always playing on the online games and looking at their phone.
Do you every wanted yourself to live in that kind of place?
First, looking at the electronic things will damage your eyes, then your whole live will just rely on the pair of glasses. But if it is lost or disappeared then you will be like a bat that could only hear sounds.
Secondly, your family-ship will be less, because all the people are all playing games or just staring at their phone very closely. And at last the whole family will be like a stranger that you don’t know.
So I strongly believe that electronic will destroy our childhood.
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Poem:
A huge restaurant
Full of people inside
I wanted to get some food
So asked the waiter
And bumped to the mirror
Diary:
Dear diary,
Today I went to a huge restaurant, there are lot of people there, so I found a small seat to sit. Then I looked at the menu and called the waiter, but no one answered so I stand up and went to a waiter that is walking to me and I went more forward to the waiter and at last I bumped on the mirror, the restaurant was very small, but they wanted to make it look bigger so then added on those many mirrors. At first I felt very ashamed of myself for doing the stupid thing the waiter told me that almost everyone that come to this restaurant will go on the wall cause it is so clean!
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A large city in the 1960s
In that time, on the road there were many people and less people on the bus and cars, because in that time the ones who can buy the car is the rich people. And the others could only just walk and there will always be overcrowded and even the others drive car, but they will still move slower. People running cause of that they might be late for work and the morning seemed very busy.
In the noon time it is much quieter, if theirs one person walking on the road you could even hear that person’s footstep very clearly. At that moment you can close your eyes and leave this busy town for a wile you could have your own time staying in peace and calm.
But when it is afternoon your daydream will be waked from a loud noise far from the road, and that mean the workers are coming back if you move quicker than them you won’t need to wait for a long time to home, but if you’re so unlucky that you are stuck in the huge crowd you will hear hundreds of voice talking and that is just like all the animals roaring. Some sounded thin and high, but some sounded low and a bit scary. To get out of this crowed is always a big problem!
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I am choosing the character in the book Holes, and he is called Stanley.
In school Stanley is very afraid of a boy called David, he is a small boy but is very sneaky, he likes to steal Stanley’s notebook. Every time he will tell the teacher but the teacher doesn’t care, because the teacher always think that David is so much smaller than Stanley so he thinks that he cannot do that kind of things and in the class time the teacher will also say many things that make Stanley sad. When I walked to school, I just really wanted a friend that can help me and let the bulling stop, then a smaller boy with a sneaky smile appeared in my eyes. It is David again! I hate him he always steals my things and is very naughty. When there is an adult, he will pretend to be very well behaved and in the other hand he makes fun with me with his friends. I really hope that there is someone that can stand on my side and help me! I love having class time, because then David cannot steal my things and I could relax myself too. Every time when I am been bullied, I felt very small even I am much taller and bigger than him. I knew that bad luck is just because my great great grandpa!
I am choosing the character in the book Holes, and he is called Stanley.
In school Stanley is very afraid of a boy called David, he is a small boy but is very sneaky, he likes to steal Stanley’s notebook. Every time he will tell the teacher but the teacher doesn’t care, because the teacher always think that David is so much smaller than Stanley so he thinks that he cannot do that kind of things and in the class time the teacher will also say many things that make Stanley sad. When I walked to school, I just really wanted a friend that can help me and let the bulling stop, then a smaller boy with a sneaky smile appeared in my eyes. It is David again! I hate him he always steals my things and is very naughty. When there is an adult, he will pretend to be very well behaved and in the other hand he makes fun with me with his friends. I really hope that there is someone that can stand on my side and help me! I love having class time, because then David cannot steal my things and I could relax myself too. Every time when I am been bullied, I felt very small even I am much taller and bigger than him. I knew that bad luck is just because my great great grandpa!
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I think if War Horse is been told by a human, then the reader will know more clearly about what had happened in the war.
First, if it was told by human it will talk more about what had happened with the people. For example, if the human want to about the wires and the booms it will write more about what that human is thinking, and less about what the horse is thinking and the actions they are doing. And that will let us know more about what had happened more clearly but with less talking with the horse.
Also, we could know more message about how the world war one happened and what they are planning to attack or to defense the enemy. For example, in all the story we will know what was the horse and the people go and what will they want to do. And that will let us know more about what they are going to do, but not just knowing the horses are going to some were and just fight.
But, if the author just wrote about what the human perspective then the name of the book needs to change, or then it will be a title called War house but is all talking about what the human is thinking and just talk about a little bit of horse. Then it will make the reader really confused about this book.
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I think that it is useful to know that Morpurgo made the he made the choice he made within the book, and it changes the story for me.
First, I think that this book is about friendship and kindness that happens between everyone that takes care of Joey. For example, in chapter one Albert said to his mother “Look at him, mother, he’s wet through the skin. I’ll have to rub him down.” This shows how Albert gave kindness to Joey and with a friendship that was being closer and closer, also it tells us that even they are very different species, but they still can have strong friendship or even better than the others.
Also, I think that this story is about death, and that the author even made the main character’s best friends been dead. For example, in chapter twenty-one when Emilie’s grandfather said to Albert “She was a sick child anyway, but now her new family taken from her, she no longer had anything to live for. She just faded away last year. She was only fifteen years old.” This tells us that not all story has a happy ending like the fairy tales, or the main characters best friends died.
Last, I think that this story is about promise of people who leave and been found again and living happily after. For example, in chapter seventeen when Albert talks to Joey “How devil did you get yourself stuck out there in no man’s land, you old silly? He said. That’s what everyone wants to know ever since the message came back that they’d be bring you here.” It shows that how Albert missed Joey and was very surprised that he’d came back, just like your best friend that you haven’t seen for a long time and then you suddenly meet the person.
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Elixir of life (want it or not)
I think that we should keep it. Don’t you ever think about death? But then the world had suddenly made thing that is elixir, a thing that can make no people die and all the people will live happily after, and that is just in front of you, you must take action. Making people’s life to live forever can let people be happier and don’t live with too many stresses, also when you life for ever you could explore more things and our economy and society will be better. For example, a scientist died but he/she did a lot of good research, but it was lost so it means that the hole research will need to start over, but if that scientist lives forever he/she could finish the research and tell it to the world.
I think that we should destroy it. If all the people live forever and many people will get a lot of illnesses. For example caner, you are always ill and very uncomfortable living in this world, you will want to die but you need to live forever so that illness will go with you forever. Also the population will decrease so much and with no decrease, but then cities and towns are all full then we need more space to live. But how can we make more space? Then many small countries need to live on the sea or even the sky and they might be afraid of going on an airplane, but they cannot die, or they are seasick, but they can’t find another place to life and people will all want to die. But my opponent may say that the government can let the people have no more babies. But do you want to live in a place where is full of old people and with no children playing on the grass? And in your life, there you will always have traffic jams. But my opponent may say that, but the government get let more people build roads, but then where would the others live? If the people all use elixir then the world will be very squished, SO, WE NEED TO DESTORY IT!!!!!
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I am prepared to die
One day changed my entire life. That day I was just going to see the doctor and let her check my body ( if it is healthy or not), but then that doctor said something to another doctor and he came and said to me in a sad voice that I am going to die soon. My heart suddenly broke, I ask the doctor if he can save my life but the answer, I got was so bad because I got a cancer so the doctor can’t help. That night I had a dream, it was when that day came and I am very weak and was just going to close my eyes, with my family members bursting with tears and me closing my eyes with a dream that I can’t open my eyes again. I suddenly woke up with fear, my feet were cold like ice and my face shocked white as a paper. I don’t want to face this kind of tragic, I still want to play and have fun with my friends, Why is it so unfair that everyone except for me was alive and me facing the death. But then I knew that I cannot be afraid of it, I just need to have super fun in these time and when I die I will be the happiest person who died.
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Dear grade five teachers,
My name is Claire, a grade five student. And I think that the government should grant $1million dollars to the poor people.
Buy some books and teachers to let the students learn, or then they couldn’t have a better life, but people are all equal.
Also, if we make them learn well, then even some intelligent will pop up and make our life better and better.
At last it can make that poor place be a place that many other countries people wanted to go, like making a sculpture and it can give more jobs to all the people who live in that place.
This is why that I think the $1million dollars to grant on.
Your sincerely,
Claire
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Lila was shocked with fear, under the truth there was still something, a pail white bone with red dimond on it. When she quickly packed it into her bag, suddenly a huge wind came, and the tornado was just in front of the cave. Lila ran with fear, but she was so afraid that her father would know it, so her legs shocked hardly, she wanted to run but her legs wabbled and wabbled, at last she couldn’t hold. She sat on the floor with her mouth wide open, because the tornado was coming!
Woosh! Woosh! The tornado was just like a big lion on the field, it was now in front of Lila. Suddenly a huge wind came and the plants around Lila shook hardly, and some even was blown away. And it came. Lila was blown up by the tornado, she thought that this was the day that she would end her life. She closed her eyes and waited for the death.
One minute two minute three minute…… she waited and waited, but nothing had happened, she was now in a place where there are huge plants growing there and saw a bad man that is running to here and going catch her. She ran and ran but the man was just still there running and running. Know she thought of an idea to play hide and seek to that man. She ran to some tall plants and climbed on them. The man lost the people who he needs to catch so run around and around.
It was soon night that people were still finding Lila, and Lila thought that she would just sleep on the plant and wait. But just then the plant grew smaller and smaller and Lila fell off. Then she heard the man’s voice with anger “I finally found you naughty girl!”
Lila didn’t think more than just run away, she run faster but the man was too. At last she was so tired and thought about that what kind of scary things will the man do with her. She suddenly thought about the pail bone that has a red and on it she remembered that there was a word “ooosh” so she thought that if she said that word something might happen, so she shouted out.
When she finished her head hurts a lot. Just then she heard her mom calling her and when she opened her eyes again she saw that she was still in her bed and realized that it was just a dream.
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Covid-19 pandemic
Beep! Beep! I was a little girl called Dora which was in the Covid-19 pandemic period and was really sick.
My head hearts and my arm were really hot, it was just like fire and I was very uncomfortable. And I hated when the nurse came, she always makes me get many shots and hanging bottles. It hearts a lot and every time it feels very tight and when I saw the blood, I will feel scared. And at many times I will cry.
With my eyes closed I felt like that everyday had been so long that I hope I could be better. Nothing ever happens, in the hospital I could only hear the adults talking but in mummering. I wanted to go back to school and see my friends, play with them and talk about what had happen in school. I wanted to have my old life back, but not just lying on the bed and doing nothing.
One night, when I was going to sleep, suddenly a nurse came with a serious looking, I knew that she was going to give me another shot again. But this time it was the worsts! I had five different needles on my hand, it was just crazy! That night I even didn’t sleep well, I woke up with two big black panda eyes and was very sleepy.
After a wile it was time for breakfast, when the nurse came to give me the food, I am very hungry, so I ate a lot. The warmth of the soup makes me happy. And the nurse happily said that I am not so sick so I could go to out and walk!
I am amazed about it and I thought how many days have, I didn’t breathe some fresh air. So off I went, it was amazing when I saw the plants and flowers and I am so astonished, the world was full of color and things that don’t know.
But happy times was always short, I came back to my room and was going to get other shots. Time passed by I felt like everyday was hard and tuff, but I believe that one day I will go out of this “cage” and discover the new world.
And that day finally came! When the nurse happily said that I am going to go out the hospital, I am so excited that I have no time to eat my breakfast but running out and discover the world! I finally reach the time to go out, although I have faced many challenges, but I survived from that. Until this day I still remembered it.
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Covid-19 pandemic
Beep! Beep! I was a little girl called Dora which was in the Covid-19 pandemic period and was really sick.
My head hearts and my arm were really hot, it was just like fire and I was very uncomfortable. And I hated when the nurse came, she always makes me get many shots and hanging bottles. It hearts a lot and every time it feels very tight and when I saw the blood, I will feel scared. And at many times I will cry.
With my eyes closed I felt like that everyday had been so long that I hope I could be better. Nothing ever happens, in the hospital I could only hear the adults talking but in mummering. I wanted to go back to school and see my friends, play with them and talk about what had happen in school. I wanted to have my old life back, but not just lying on the bed and doing nothing.
One night, when I was going to sleep, suddenly a nurse came with a serious looking, I knew that she was going to give me another shot again. But this time it was the worsts! I had five different needles on my hand, it was just crazy! That night I even didn’t sleep well, I woke up with two big black panda eyes and was very sleepy.
After a wile it was time for breakfast, when the nurse came to give me the food, I am very hungry, so I ate a lot. The warmth of the soup makes me happy. And the nurse happily said that I am not so sick so I could go to out and walk!
I am amazed about it and I thought how many days have, I didn’t breathe some fresh air. So off I went, it was amazing when I saw the plants and flowers and I am so astonished, the world was full of color and things that don’t know.
But happy times was always short, I came back to my room and was going to get other shots. Time passed by I felt like everyday was hard and tuff, but I believe that one day I will go out of this “cage” and discover the new world.
And that day finally came! When the nurse happily said that I am going to go out the hospital, I am so excited that I have no time to eat my breakfast but running out and discover the world! I finally reach the time to go out, although I have faced many challenges, but I survived from that. Until this day I still remembered it.
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