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Dear Ms. Kelly,
I think that the government grant could be spent on redoing the playground，foods and technologies.
Firstly, our playground was not fun at all, there’s only a football field, and we girls have nothing to play. Don’t you dislike our playground? The school could make the football field smaller and add a basketball court, a spiderweb and swings. All of us would explode if this really happened.
Second, technology is now a very important thing in our life. Almost every grownup have a iPhone. Many schools have computers for their students to use. Although some students will use the computers to play games and watch Youtube, but don’t you know the school could ban this? IT could also see what the students are doing.
Thirdly，the school could change the food for lunch. Lunch is the most important meal in the day and the school only provide some potatoes and one small slice pizza. The students who have PE class can not participate well and the teacher will be very mad.
So, please use the money for redoing the playground, lunch food and adding computers. Thank you.
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It was the day of the presentation of artist Mike, but his died body was found inside the box that contains the paintings. Everyone was horrified, they screamed and jump as high as kangaroos. Suddenly, a detective came and found out Mandy, Steve and Gregory was the three suspect. Mandy hate Mike because she was once got pushed down the mountain by Mike. Steve was put to prison by Mike, and Gregory’s wife was killed by Mike. The detective advice to search of evidence two by two, and promised to gather at the dinner table at 11pm. Gregory and Steve found a very thick rope hanging in the laundry, they thought it was the weapon that killed Mike. They also found a painting of Mike himself and there was a knife sticking out of his face. The detective and Mandy found green pigment on the floor from the laundry to the stage( where the presentation took place) and a certificate of Steve saying that he won first place for weightlifting. It was 11pm and the four people gathered at the dinner table. Steve said they found a thick rope in the laundry and a painting with a knife. Mandy said that it was her knife on Mike’s own self painting and she once wanted to kill Mike by poisoning him, but didn’t succeed. The detective said the trail of green pigment is probably made by Steve because he once got a certificate for weightlifting. Steve nodded and said I found his died body in the laundry this morning and took it to the stage but I only wanted to embarrass him. “Ding dong!” The door bell rang, the detective opened the door and an odd old man was standing there. Suddenly, he screamed soo loud that the whole may hear and ran away. Just when the detective was thinking what happened to the old man, Gregory came behind him and killed the detective. He was the one that killed Mike, he also killed the detective, Mandy and Steve so that he wouldn’t be captured. Mike once killed his wife and all of his friend, he was very mad and planed killed Mike today. Although no one suspect him, but they will all know at 12 o’clock, because all the evidence will point to him by the moonlight. Gregory ran away into the dark as if he was a cat.
—Candy
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Dear diary,
Today I went an unknown rainforest. When I went in, I could see some long legged spiders making their webs and birds singing some cheerful song. I couldn’t see them among all those leaves. I used my new camera to took pictures of all the amazing creatures in nature. The leaves under my foot are not crunchy at all, it is soft, wet and full of mud. Sometimes I could see an ape above my head and snakes scattering. I also found some black scorpion and a napping jaguar. Their black spotted fur looked very beautiful. He yawned and I ran away. There are many banana trees in the rainforest and I think it leaves is a good thing to escape the rain. At about 4 pm, the sky began to cry and I wore on my raincoat. The path was much slippery than I thought and I found out that I need to climb up a steep hill to reach the end of my destination. The rain made the stone wet and slippery. The mud was unstable too. After about 5 mins of thinking, I decided to use my strong rope to climb up. I tied the rope to a very strong tree and climb up, although it is quite hard but when I think of Nobel Prize, I came up as fast and safely I can and escape from the raining forest.
—Candy
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On one late Autumn afternoon, Lily and Ovan was hiking on a misty, green and tall mountain. The sun had gone to Antartica for holiday and small wind blew beside their ears. Suddenly, purple lightnings slashed through the sky and splinted a tree in half. Small pebble stones came down the sky hardly and Ovan’s and Lily’s face instantly became wet. They quickly got on their rain coats and ran even faster up the mountain. “Look there,” Ovan exclaimed, “there was a small house, let us go inside to escape from the rain. In the little house, they found a bed and decided to sleep until the rain end. After two hours of nap, Ovan got up and found out that Lily was gone. He went outside to find her but found nothing and went in again. Suddenly he saw a little opening on the floor and found out it was a door, so he opened it and went in. The place was dim but small lights shimmered behind the wood wall. The tunnel was long and damp, the floor was made also by wood, so it creaked when Ovan stepped on it. Lights flashed up and a voice spoke, “ I am George, and I captured Lily cause she once killed all of my family. She was also a monster that had already lived two thousand years. I had already killed her, so leave quickly before I will kill you too.” Ovan ran out as fast as a horse that had been scared. But suddenly, billions of sharp spines shot out as fast as light and killed Ovan too. “ Ha, ha, ha,” George laughed, “ you are a monster too, aren’t you. You were the one that tried to poison me. Now you were all died!”
—-Candy
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When I stepped inside the gate of the fair, I was amazed about this place. You could smell the scent of cotton candy and pop corn and hear the sound jazz music that floats in the air. It was as if I was in a rainbow world. All the lights shimmered in the night sky and the ferris wheel spend through the night, like people that sends hopes again and again. It was a warm October night, and small breeze blew besides my ear. Suddenly, a little gray mouse that held a small chunk of cheese scampered away quickly. I was scared and spilled my orange juice. People beside me chatted and laughed with their friends, and only I seemed to be alone. A hand patted my shoulder unexpectedly and I looked around. Behind me was Liya, my best friend, and there was two ice creams in her hands. She giggled and signaled me to come with her. Liya took me to a rollercoaster and we bought tickets to go on. After 20 mins of waiting, we went on the rollercoaster. When I looked down, all the places was in my eyes, the fair, the skyscraper, my home, the amusement park…
—-Candy
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