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at 03:49 #10840CalebParticipant
Why the Whales Came
Lesson 3
It was a chilly night out in the streets. I was walking back home when I heard a scream. I rushed to check what happened, but it was too late. A murder had been committed and the body was lying on the floor, or at least the remnants of what had been of the body just a few minutes ago. My face was pale and shaking when I dialled the police. My voice clearly showed it too.
The police asked me what happened and I explained the crime in a few sentences then I went to the scene again. The police showed up just a few moments later and said, where is the body? I said, here it is. And the murderer is just over there. A horse, of all things!,cried the police in surprise. Well, it was done in self-defence because the guy who is lying on the floor tried to cut the horse. I said. Case solved, I went home to a excellent dinner.
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at 13:19 #7347CalebParticipant
The Miraculous Journey of Edward Tulane
Lesson 2
KateDiCamillo makes the reader want to carry on reading because the adventures of Edward are with different people. His fate is upon the many people that picked him up. His will lies deep in his heart and his existence all starts with Pellegrina ordering a master craftsman to make him in France. Edward is just a toy, yet he has feelings. This shows us that even though your toys are non-living creatures, they still have feelings.
So, you shouldn’t hurt your toys and I hope that all of you will follow this advice.
Bye!
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at 13:39 #7270CalebParticipant
lesson 1
The Miraculous Journey of Edward Tulane by Caleb Che
Lesson 1
The new character is called Arnold Humdinger. He is a very good and nice pterodactyl that keeps guard at night. He likes eating maggots and worms. He has the longest wingspan ever as he is a Quetzalcoatlus and he also eats small insects and bird eggs. His wingspan can reach up to 33-36ft long. He can weigh up to 250kg(550lbs). He lived in plains and woodlands. I hope you enjoyed my introduction on Arnold.
Bye!
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at 03:28 #10839CalebParticipant
Why the Whales came
Lesson 3
I was stranded on the Island of Ice and was scared. I was clumsy when walking on the ice, heading for help. Soon, I found out that there were bobbits around. They were giant carnivorous ice worms, and would eat any unlucky ice inhabitant who happened to cross the path of it. Then I heard a gurgling sound. A bobbit was laughing at me because to him, I was pathetic on walking the ice slipping and sliding. Well, I turned to him and said: Mister Bobbit, do you know a help centre that I could get help from? I asked the bobbit. The bobbit said nothing. I went away, seeing my face was pale and shaking. But, soon I met ice penpigs who showed me the way to their spaceship. I gave them a signal that I was going, and they replied: ok, farewell, see you next time. Then I zoomed away in their spaceship. Suddenly, I went off control and lost communication with Earth. I cursed in fury. But, a portal appeared and I was sucked in back to reality. Then, I woke up to find it had been a dream, then I was glad.
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