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Lesson 5 exam:
Throughout the whole extract the author, Charles Dickens, was very successful in scoping the thoughts and feeling of Florence and presenting them clearly to the readers.
To help the readers sympathize on Florence and step into her shoes, the author used a big amount of figurative language. In the beginning paragraph of the extract, the author introduces Florence with listing a bunch or negative feelings that she is feeling now, giving the readers a clue on how she might think and feel later. After that, the author used a metaphor “left like the sole survivor on a lonely shore from the wreck of a great vessel.” to emphasize on her looniness, and the loss of hope. Just after that, Dickens used parallelism of “led without a thought, without a hope, without a purpose”. Through the words without though, hope, and purpose, the readers could see the emotion of disorients that Florence is feeling in the moment, and the urgency she is fending. In later paragraphs the author uses contrast of the blue sky, fresh air of a good day in contrasting of the gloomy feeling the Florence is having, again highlighting the dark feelings that she is having. Constantly presenting the exaggerated emotions that Florence is dealing with.
To show the exaggerated feelings of Florence, the author used punctuation marks like exaggeration and question marks. For example, using short bursts of dramatic phrases to represent her thoughts. Lines like “where to go? but where! and oh Di!” to show her agitation caused by extreme grief. Although quotations are used mainly to show Florence’s thoughts in this passage, there are still detail that shows her thoughts.
I am not finished…😢
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Scene: In a dark and gloomy alleyway two man stands under a flickering streetlamp
Coalson: where is the next target?
Snake: 62 Watson street, a tall guy with a flattop.
After engaged of few words, the two-man dress in dark rain cloaks scurried away I different directions.
Scene; in police office.
Officer 1: I do not understand.
Officer 1: Third death this week.
Officer 2: this time a tall guy with a flattop.
Officer1 : there has to be a place in common.
Officer 2: Yeah, no one will cereal kill with no reason…
Bang! Bang! Bang! (knock on door)
Officer3 runs in holding a stack of paper.
Officer3: the fourth victim appeared.
Together gasp of 1,2 officer.
Officer 1: is I he same way?
Officer #: No, this time is strangling to death, air pipes crushed.
Scene: in ally way.
Snake: eliminated?
Coalson: of course.
Snake: then who will be the 5 lucky guy.
Coalson: I presume lucky is not the right word.
Suddenly and car lamp flashed, two man faded into the shadows.
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After the innovation of space exploration came true-we-humans have tried to get furred and furder. But there is no money tree. Space exploration had already been proven to be too expensive to its cause. Every rocket cause millions and millions of dollars and they are only usable for I time. Even Elon Musk’s Falcon rockets crashed tens of times before they are able to perform to be reusable rockets. The ISS or international space station was made by 54 rocket lunches and it cause billions of dollars every year. And to it’s massive cause the discoveries that it brought us now is far less than a single mars rover. I Know the act of humans wanting to get furder and furder; to explore space life; to journey out of the galaxy. But those great leaps will not be able to succeed in a few decades, why do not we first know our backyard the ocean than exploring space whit a limited chance to succeed. We now even know more about mars than our own ocean, why take a risk to make rover causing millions of dollars than taking a ride in a sub to go to the challenger’s point at the depth of the Mariana trench. Maybe The answers of our question for extra torrential beings and the universe is not above us but belong us in the depth of the oceans.
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3. After the innovation of space exploration came true-we-humans has tried to get furred and furder. But there is no money tree. Space exploration had already been proven to be to expensive to its cause. Every rocket cause millions and millions of dollars and they are only usable for I time. Even Elon Musk’s Falcon rockets crashed tens of times before they are able to perform to be reusable rockets. The ISS or international space station was made by 54 rocket lunches and it cause billions of dollars every year. And to it’s massive cause the discoveries that it brought us now is far less than a single mars rover. I Know the act of humans wanting to get furder and furder; to explore space life; to journey out of the galaxy. But those great leaps will not be able to succeed in a few decades, why do not we first know our backyard the ocean than exploring space whit a limited chance to succeed. We now even know more about mars than our own ocean, why take a risk to make rover causing millions of dollars than taking a ride in a sub to go to the challenger’s point at the depth of the Mariana trench. Maybe The answers of our question for extra torrential beings and the universe is not above us but belong us in the depth of the oceans.
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Rolling or zusak
It was getting closer… and yes home…home sweet home…… snowflakes licked my lips as I dragged myself across the frozen lake… I could already make out the dim glow of the hearth through the frost windows…yes…nearly home… I wheezed, clutching tighter the bloody gash that I got from fighting with werewolves. My vision got blurry, and I tripped… I fell face forward into the snowbank. The harsh blizzard still tugged at my jacket trying to carry me away… With trammeling arms, I forced myself to sit up and started crawling to the dime glow. I didn’t know how long I took, I just remembered pushing myself forward slowly through the fog getting closer to the glow. As I crawled closer the light got brighter… and brighter, until I was looking up at the familiar roof of my cottage. It took my last remaining strength to pry open the door and stumble inside… Immediately, everything brightened, warmth started to slowly trickle into my fingertips, then my whole body… My eyes started to haze and my breathing started to tremble… the last thing that I remember was the front door closing behind me and I went limp…. -
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