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at 02:57 #10409Angela WuParticipant
My favourite part of the story was when bird man was helping the two kids when the whale was on the sand because i think now that the reader read this part they know that everyone had mistaken bird man as a bad guy but now they all realised that they were wrong about him.
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at 01:59 #10259Angela WuParticipant
On a dark stormy night, wait…have you ever heard of the ghost island before? The name already makes me fear. So, it all started like this. I was on a boat, ready for an amazing adventure when suddenly the boat STOPPED. [dung, dung, dung] The boat manager demanded: “All crewmates off the boat!!”… It seemed that we stopped at a foggy, spooky, all the scary words you can think of, I froze. I panicked for a minute then something came into my ear, I heard a sound. I thought and thought and something more horrible came into my MIND, THIS MIGHT BE THE ISLAND THAT WAS ON THE NEWS…GHOST ISLAND.
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at 02:50 #10108Angela WuParticipant
One summer afternoon, I heard the lovely birds humming. On the corner of the long street, a little kitty was tangled by her toy strings…The awesome thing about the kitty was that it was kinda camouflaged by the walls colour!!The sun was to bright that I had to go home without even going to the park…): When I got home my mum asked me what I did and I had to be honest about it, and by the ways MY MUM WAS GLAD!
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at 11:26 #9999Angela WuParticipant
Morpurgo write a important sentence which was *DO NOT GO NEAR BIRDMAN* and just that sentence maybe made us want to read more about the birdman to see what happens when you go near birdman or…
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at 03:04 #9849Angela WuParticipant
The part in long way home that I liked the best was when Mrs Tomas told Gorge that he had to move to a new foster home and when gorge got there because I liked how the author showed Gorges feelings and how he reacts to his new house.
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at 02:33 #9413Angela WuParticipant
My friend was going pee in the bushes when I stopped her, I suggested that she should take a long walk instead of making the flowers and plants die and so she is a little more sensible. When she came back she ignored every word I said because she was mad at me for telling her that she was not very sensible, after a while she immediately forced me to buy her a ice cream since I was being mean (Which I was not) but sadly this is the only option that will make her happy so I had to spend all my money…
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at 08:25 #9294Angela WuParticipant
I think it was a happy ending because the little boy got to meet his aunties uncle and his other family. I think at that time that little boy was very happy so yeah, I think it was a great ending…
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at 01:17 #9078Angela WuParticipant
A whole in my garden was very strange there was a lot of dirt and bugs which I hate. I was very very annoyed by all those bugs that nearly went onto my arms. At the end of the whole I was at another garden which is more amazing then my garden there were about 20 kinds of flowers, I pinched myself to see if I was daydreaming or was I really in this place…but guess what I was not daydreaming I was really here, this is so strange, am I in a different world or did I travel back in time? I walked around the garden and I saw a forbidden tombstone, it was so dirty. I accidentally knocked down a special flower pot and I had to compensation to the person that kept this flower pot. There was a little house, inside was decorated beautifully.
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at 04:37 #8970Angela WuParticipant
There was a pathway to a secret garden or I can say forest…it was very shallow with lot’s of smoke. I panicked a lot and btw’s did I mention that I was scared of darkness? Well anyway i heard something up a head my way it was like a ghost movement but then I thought, how in the world will there even be ghosts, ghosts dose not even exist?!? suddenly I heard someone it’s really someone whistling in the darkness. Well at least I took my teddy bear with me but without a notice, where is my lovely teddy bear?!? this place must be hunted…but then I saw a white shadow it was really a ghost and I had no idea that it can say HELLO?!? I didn’t want her or he to be mad and whatever scare me so I replied hello? But I had again no idea there was another ghost I can’t resist this so I ran away so far so far but I CANNOT BELIEVE IT, THE GHOST IS SO FAST, on my half way the two ghost cached up to me!!! The distant was so close. I was screaming half to death but the thing I didn’t realise is that the ghost are nice they won’t hart you, but I didn’t believe what my inside said so I kept on running.
When I got to a dead end I was so exhausted and it felt like that I was crowded by ghosts. But what I realize was that I wasn’t crowed by those white floating ghosts. There was a lot a suffering inside me but I still had that strength in me…I was stuck in this creepy forest, I felt very miserable. It looked like to me that I was very irresponsible, I was supposed to look after my home and I ended up here…
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at 03:19 #8969Angela WuParticipant
Yesterday I was very exhausted so I asked her if she can hug me, my mum felt interrupted and complained but anyway she did hug me. Sometime when people feel disturbed, they might get annoyed but my mum loves me, so my mum won’t get to annoyed
I particularly love to eat chocolate cookies so I asked my mum if she could buy me one for dessert and she said yes!!
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