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    • #37076
      VMWEdu
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    • #37108
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 1

      In today’s class we began our work on action stories, thinking today about what an action story is and how the class can use its conventions in their writing. We began by discussing what action stories include and what stories the class had read before studying different story elements and thinking about how they are shaped by genre. We looked at four tips for action story writing before the class invented their own spy characters, delving into how to make them compelling protagonists. They came up with some amazing gadgets they invented for their spies to use and finally wrote some short spy reports from their character’s perspective. Such amazing work today everyone, really well done for all your wonderful contributions. It was so great to meet you and I can’t wait to read your exhilarating action stories. See you next week 🙂

      Story elements video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Zr1xLtSMMLo

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      hmwrk

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    • #37138
      EmmaN
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      From Emma

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      • #37249
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Emma,

        Gorgeous work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 😀

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    • #37160
      Jerry N
      Participant

      Hi Beth,

      Thank you for the lesson! Here is my story.

      From,

      Jessie

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      • #37162
        Jerry N
        Participant

        I mean Jerry, sorry!

      • #37251
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Jerry,

        Fabulous work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 😀

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    • #37174
      efay
      Participant

      Dear Beth, Efay’s homework. Thanks.

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      • #37253
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Efay,

        Super work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 😀

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    • #37176
      charlotteW
      Participant

      Charlotte Wang’s home work for writing

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      • #37255
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Charlotte,

        Lovely work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 😀

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    • #37187
      Claire
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Here is my homework. Hope you enjoy it.

      Kind Regards,

      Chenxi

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      • #37257
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Chenxi,

        Nice work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 😀

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    • #37264
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 2

      In today’s lesson we completed our work on action stories, today looking at the four different types of action stories and digging into key elements such as conflict and fight scenes. We began with a look at an Anthony Horowitz spy story masterclass before thinking about lots of different types of action stories you could have. We then learned about the different types of action stories (person vs. person/ nature/ the powerful/ time) and the class planned some amazing stories based on this. Finally we discussed comics and why they fit the action genre so well and the class shared some incredible thoughts on Dog Man and on the way comics work in general. Wonderful work everyone, I can’t wait to read your comments! Remember to use the link below to help and see you next week 🙂

      Comic book website: https://www.bbc.co.uk/bitesize/articles/zbk47nb#zxfxxbk

      Spy story masterclass: https://www.bbc.co.uk/cbbc/joinin/bp-anthony-horowitz-spy-story-writing-masterclass

      Homework

      hmwrk

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    • #37321
      Claire
      Participant

      Dear Beth

      Here is my work.

      Regards

      Chenxi

       

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      • #37361
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Chenxi,

        Superb work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #37328
      EthanCh
      Participant

      Hi Beth, please see Ethan’s homework attached.

       

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      • #37363
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Ethan,

        Brilliant work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 😀

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    • #37332
      EmmaN
      Participant

      From Emma N

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      • #37365
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Emma,

        Nice work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #37334
      Oliver
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      please see attached Olive’s homework for week 2

      many thanks

      fang

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      • #37367
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Oliver,

        Amazing work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 😀

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        • #37379
          Beth
          Participant

          Sorry Oliver, I uploaded the wrong document, I’ve attached the right one to this post!

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    • #37337
      Jerry N
      Participant

      Hi Beth,

      Here is my homework,

      thank you!

      Jerry

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      • #37369
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Jerry,

        Incredible work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 😀

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        • #37381
          Beth
          Participant

          Hi Jerry, sorry I uploaded the wrong document, got a little confused! I’ve attached the right one to this post 🙂

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    • #37342
      efay
      Participant

      Dear Beth, Efay’s Lesson 2 homework, comic strips. Thank you.

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      • #37383
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Efay,

        Lovely work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 😀

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    • #37407
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 3

      In today’s class we did our first lesson on historical writing, thinking today about the Stone Age. We started by discussing our favourite parts of history before discussing the Stone Age and thinking about how to turn history into creative stories. The class watched some Horrible Histories and we then wrote some descriptive passages imagining the life of a caveman. The class then thought about how Stone Age people might speak before finally doing some character work. Such incredible work today class, you were all brilliantly passionate today and it was so much fun to work with you all on historical creative writing. Keep up the amazing ideas and see you next week 🙂

      Horrible Histories: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fDDlhCtIdQ4

      Homework

      hmwrk

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    • #37435
      Jerry N
      Participant

      Hi Beth,

      Here’s my homework. I really enjoyed writing it!

      Thank you,

      Jerry

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      • #37452
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Jerry,

        I’m so glad you enjoyed writing this!

        Super work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #37439
      efay
      Participant

      Dear Beth, Efay’s homework Lesson 3. Thanks.

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      • #37454
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Efay,

        Wonderful work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #37443
      Claire
      Participant

      Dear Beth

      This is Chenxi’s homework this week.

      Many thanks

      Chenxi

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      • #37456
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Chenxi,

        Amazing work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #37448
      EmmaN
      Participant

      From Emma1

    • #37449
      EmmaN
      Participant

      From Emma2

    • #37450
      EmmaN
      Participant

      From Emma3

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      • #37458
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Emma,

        Great work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #37487
      EthanCh
      Participant

      Hi Beth, please see my homework attached.

      Thank you!

      Ethan

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      • #37632
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Ethan,

        Great work, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #37489
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 4

      In today’s class we continued our work on historical writing, thinking today about modern history. We started by discussing WW2 and what the students knew about it before learning about the end of the war and the VE Day celebrations. We watched an interview with a man who was there at the time, discussed the bittersweet emotions people may have felt and the class wrote some amazing paragraphs imagining they were there. We then chose some historical events that the class would have wanted to be there for and thought about how to transform these into stories with some captivating characters to match. Incredible work today everyone, your historical knowledge is fab and you’ve combined it with your creativity beautifully. I can’t wait to read your stories! See you next week 🙂

      VE Day interview: https://www.bbc.co.uk/teach/class-clips-video/history-ks2-ve-day/z7xtmfr

      Characterisation video: https://www.bbc.co.uk/programmes/p0bnlq0z

      Homework

      hmwrk

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    • #37574
      EthanCh
      Participant

      Hi Beth, please see my home work attached.

      Thank you!

      Ethan

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      • #37636
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Ethan,

        Lovely work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #37580
      Jerry N
      Participant

      Hello Beth,

      Here’s my work. I decided to write it as a interview with Neil Armstrong.

      Many thanks

      Jerry😃😄

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      • #37638
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Jerry,

        Great idea!
        Wonderful work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #37583
      Claire
      Participant

      Dear Beth

      This is Chenxi’s homework.

      Many thanks

      Chenxi

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      • #37640
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Chenxi,

        Good work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #37589
      EmmaN
      Participant

      From Emma 4

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      • #37643
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Emma,

        Brilliant work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #37605
      charlotteW
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      This is Charlotte’s writing homework for writing lesson on Tuesday 12th December. Thank you.

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      • #37645
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Charlotte,

        Exciting work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #37659
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 5

      In today’s class we finished our Christmas course with a lesson on Christmas story writing, thinking about how to write about the holiday period in lots of different genres. We began by discussing what Christmas stories the class knew before watching a summary of A Christmas Carol and watching a section of The Grinch Who Stole Christmas. We spoke about what these stories had in common and what ingredients a Christmas story should have and the class used this to write some fantastic descriptive passages. We spoke about genre, the moral of the story and wrote a story together as a class before finishing with a Christmas-themed Stop the Bus. Incredible work today everyone, it was such a joy to see you all and to work with you over the past five weeks; you’ve been such excellent students and writers! Keep up the lovely work, see you all soon in our new January course 🙂

      Homework

      hmwrk

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    • #37730
      Jerry N
      Participant

      Hi Beth

      Here is my homework, thank you!

      Merry Christmas! 🎄🎉

      From Jerry😃

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      • #37758
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Jerry,

        Merry Christmas to you too!
        Super work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #37734
      charlotteW
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      This is Charlotte’s writing homework for last writing lesson, she wrote a story about a snowman back to life.

      Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

      Thank you and see you soon.

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      • #37760
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Charlotte,

        Merry Christmas and a happy New Year to you too!

        Stunning work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #37736
      Claire
      Participant

      Dear Beth

      This is Chenxi’s last homework. Thanks for the nice teaching.

      Merry Christmas and Happy New Year.

      See you next year.

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      • #37762
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Chenxi,

        Merry Christmas and happy New Year to you as well!

        Beautiful work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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