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Summary for Lesson 1
In our first writing lesson together, we focused on descriptive writing, thinking about the three fundamental building blocks: high level vocab, literary techniques and sensory language. The powerpoint with all of the resources is attached below, which should be used to help write the descriptive pieces assigned for homework. It also contains some really important and helpful links, the inspiration for the gorgeous work the class did in class describing various scenes and situations, and finally our discussions on sensory language, creating atmosphere, avoiding cliche and using unique and original literary techniques to grab the reader’s attention. The students were absolutely fantastic in today’s lesson, the students contributed some excellent ideas on writing, perspective and the use of techniques to pull the reader into a scene. Very good work everyone, well done and see you next week 🙂
Descriptive writing video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RSoRzTtwgP4
Homework
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Electronic will destroy our childhood
Imagine that everyone on the world is wearing glasses, and they are not that good to their family because they are always playing on the online games and looking at their phone.
Do you every wanted yourself to live in that kind of place?
First, looking at the electronic things will damage your eyes, then your whole live will just rely on the pair of glasses. But if it is lost or disappeared then you will be like a bat that could only hear sounds.
Secondly, your family-ship will be less, because all the people are all playing games or just staring at their phone very closely. And at last the whole family will be like a stranger that you don’t know.
So I strongly believe that electronic will destroy our childhood.
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Hey Claire- here is the link to submit to. If you re-upload the homework there, I can post your feedback for you! 🙂
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