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    • #43050
      VMWEdu
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    • #43096
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 1

      In today’s class we began our GCSE writing course focusing on the Orwell Prize and thinking about how to use this framework to work towards both creative and non-fiction writing following the themes of the competition. We looked today at the prompt ‘who’s in control’, learning about the different styles and forms the students could use and digging deep into concepts such as power and how to represent this in narrative form. We spoke about how to interpret these prompts super creatively, looked at examples of previous winners and the class did a little of their own thinking on the theme. Wonderful work everyone, well done for all your brilliant sparky ideas. See you next week 🙂

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      hmwrk

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    • #43114
      Amber
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Stunning lesson, thank you for! Uploaded HW did. In Yoga Speak writing am I. 😉

      Amber

      • #43115
        Amber
        Participant

        *Yoda

      • #43174
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Amber,

        Welcome you are!

        Incredible work on this, your feedback is up now. See you soon 😀

    • #43154
      Ray
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Thanks so much for the lesson.

      Please find below my homework.

      https://docs.google.com/document/d/1WhGdMij1jpoEZCYPp4DGfVajJZ_zaCaFTnM8mTNt6Fc/edit?usp=sharing

      Best,
      Ray

      • #43175
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Ray,

        You’re welcome!

        Fabulous work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 😀

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    • #43172
      SarahS
      Participant

      Hi Beth,
      I have attached my homework.

      Thank you for your time!

      Sarah

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      • #43179
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Sarah,

        Lovely work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 😀

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    • #43192

      Hi Beth,

      Thanks for the lesson.

      Here is my homework, thanks!

      Jessie

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    • #43193

      Hi Beth,

      Thanks for the lesson.

      Here is my homework, thanks!

      Jessie

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      • #43329
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Jessie,

        Fab work on this, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 😀

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    • #43207
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 2

      In today’s class we continued our work on the Orwell Prize, thinking this week about poetry. We read the advice of a previous winner and thought about one of the poems that won last year, analysing its use of language, imagery, structure and theme. The class watched a video that went over five important and uncommon tips for poetry writing and considered their own relationship to the genre. We read an interview between two prize winners on their use of theme and finally completed some free-writing on this year’s newly released prompt. Excellent work today everyone, particularly in your discussions on freedom- I can’t wait to read the poetry you come up with! Keep up the amazing work and see you next week 🙂

      Video from today: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZsfMk7KKiI4

      Homework

      hmwrk

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    • #43233
      Amber
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Thanks for the awesome lesson, HW uploaded 🙂

      Cheers!

      • #43331
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Amber,

        You’re welcome!
        Superb work this week, your feedback is up now 😀

    • #43246
      jaydenP
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      thank you for the amazing lesson!!!

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      • #43332
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Jayden,

        You’re welcome!
        Great work on this, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 😀

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    • #43260
      SarahS
      Participant

      Hi Beth,

      Sarah has attached her homework.

      Thank you for your time.

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      • #43334
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Sarah,

        Beautiful work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 😀

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    • #43264
      Lynn
      Participant

      Hii Beth,

      Thank you for the wonderful lessons, I rlly enjoyed them! Last week i had a whole week of exams at school and I’m very sorry that i couldn’t do my hw. I’ve attached it below, could you look at it if possible 🙂

      Kind regards,

      Lynn

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      • #43336
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Lynn,

        No worries at all, I hope your exams went well!

        Gorgeous work on these, I’ve attached the feedback for both below. See you soon 😀

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    • #43281

      Hi Beth,

      Here’s my homework, thanks

      Jessie

      • #43282

        sorry it didn’t upload:

         

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      • #43339
        Beth
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        Hi Jessie,

        Great work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 😀

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    • #43352
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 3

      In today’s class we considered the new 2025 Orwell Prize theme in detail, looking at the resources provided by the Orwell Prize and brainstorming our responses to the prompts they offer up. We spoke about the relationship between power and freedom in depth, with the class sharing in small groups their thoughts on freedom and its limitations. We then planned two pieces- one around the concept of power being as neutral as fire, the other around prompts given on the Orwell website, and they all shared beautifully the ideas they had been working on. Well done today everyone, fantastic ideas throughout. Keep it up and see you next week 🙂

      Homework

      hmwrk

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    • #43415
      Amber
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Thanks for the wonderful lesson – HW uploaded!

      Cheers!

      • #43460
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Amber,

        You’re so welcome!
        Amazing work on this, your feedback is up now 😀

      • #43461
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Amber,

        You’re so welcome!
        Fascinating work on this, your feedback is up now 😀

    • #43443
      Lynn
      Participant

      Hi Beth,

      Thank u for the amazing lesson! Have a nice day:)

      Lynn

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      • #43462
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Lynn,

        You’re very welcome! You too 🌸

        Delightful work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 😀

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    • #43507

      Hi Beth,

      Sorry for the late homework for last week, there was an error when uploading it.

      Thank you for the lesson,

      Jessie

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      • #43570
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Jessie,

        No worries!

        Gorgeous work on this, your feedback is below 😀

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    • #43509
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 4

      In today’s class we thought about form and content, looking at resources on drama and screenplays and linking this back to the theme of freedom. We began with three writing tips for the class to consider that are not often talked about before we looked at the Orwell Prize’s tips for choosing a form between drama, poetry, journalism and narrative. We read through the resources provided for drama and completed some challenges on form, atmosphere, content and style, using this to inspire our ideas and think about any key challenges the class may face. Finally they planned out some amazing stories inspired by prompts given by the Prize, using drama and short story as the form. Well done today everyone, really good work today. Keep it up and see you next week 🙂

      Homework link (scroll to the bottom of the page to where the guides to form are; you need to read all the ones except essays and journalism): https://www.orwellfoundation.com/the-orwell-youth-prize/for-young-writers/find-your-form/

      Challenges link we looked at today: https://www.orwellfoundation.com/the-orwell-youth-prize/for-young-writers/find-your-form/finding-a-form-a-resource-by-will-harris/

      Homework

      hmwrk

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    • #43531
      SarahS
      Participant

      Hi Beth

      I have attached the lesson 3 homework.

      Thank you

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      • #43726
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Sarah, sorry I only just saw this! Will mark ASAP and get it back to you 🙂

      • #43734
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Sarah,

        Delightful work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 😀

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    • #43648
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 5

      In today’s class we began our work on non-fiction in the Orwell Prize, learning about journalism. We began by reading the tips they give on the form, looking at the idea of taking narrative and making it universal, before we looked at Orwell’s own journalism and spoke about his musings on objective truth. We discussed what makes for good journalism, thinking about the role of a journalist, and then looked at the notion of finding original stories that are uncovered, to offer new perspectives and ideas on the world around us. Fantastic work today everyone, well done for all your in-depth points about narrative journalism. Keep up the great work and see you next week 🙂

      Homework

      hmwrk

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    • #43695
      Lynn
      Participant

      Hi Beth,

      Sorry for the lateness cuz i was traveling last week and just got back home. Thank you for the amazing lesson (i was able to make it in the hotel 🙂 and have a lovely rest of the week!

      lynn

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      • #43719
        Lynn
        Participant

        omg im so sorry, wrong class😭

        • #43809
          Beth
          Participant

          No worries! ☺️

    • #43729
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 6

      In today’s class we applied all our thoughts on journalism and thought about how to write captivating pieces that played on the reader’s imagination. We began by discussing journalism the class enjoyed, before thinking about the ways in which magazine articles have to be different from essays. We looked at a prompt from the Orwell Prize on the nature of truth and the class brainstormed some amazing ideas in response. We then learned some key tips for article writing and reflected on the importance of story-telling in articles, which the class then used to help them write the opening of a piece responding to the truth prompt. Really creative and vibrant work today everyone, very well done and I can’t wait to read your articles! See you next time 🙂

      Article vid: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H2scT_3KGvo

      Story-telling vid: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HAq0eRv2RL8

      Homework

      hmwrk

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    • #43758
      Amber
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Thank u for the awesome lesson, had so much fun this class! HW uploaded ✌︎︎

      • #43810
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Amber, I can’t see this in your drive, could you check it’s been uploaded properly?☺️

        • #43846
          Amber
          Participant

          OOps! sorry for any inconvenience, I moved my HW to another folder lol… It should be up now! <3 🙂

          • #43909
            Beth
            Participant

            Hi Amber, your feedback is up now. Excellent work! 😀

    • #43790
      SarahS
      Participant

      Hi Beth
      My HW is attached. Thank you for your time.

      Sarah Xx

       

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      • #43910
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Sarah,

        Fab work on this, your feedback is below 😀

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    • #43831
      Lynn
      Participant

      Hi Beth,

      Thank you for the amazing lesson! See you next time:)

      Kind regards,

      Lynn

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      • #43912
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Lynn,

        You’re welcome!
        Fab work on this, your feedback is below. See you soon 😀

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    • #43849

      Hi Beth,

      Here is my homework attached below.

      Thank you for the lesson,

      Jessie

       

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      • #43914
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Jessie,

        Lovely work on this, your feedback is below. See you soon 😀

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    • #43866
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 7

      In today’s class we looked at writing essays, reflecting on how essays can bridge the personal and political. We thought about how journalism and essays differed and looked at an example of a winner of the prize that reflected on nostalgia through the lens of Blackpool Tower. We then used this to create an essay opener reflecting on a sense of place inspired by the essay, which the students did beautifully. Finally the class linked this back to the concept of freedom, reading an Orwell piece on the subject and connecting this to their own work. Very well done today everyone, really creative and sophisticated reflections on nostalgia, childhood, loss etc. Keep up the great work- well done 🙂

      Homework articles: https://www.saturdayeveningpost.com/2017/12/fourfreedoms/

      Homework 

      hwmrk

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    • #43962
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 8

      In today’s class we began brainstorming our responses to this year’s prompt, working in groups to bounce ideas around about form, style and technique. We started by thinking deeply about the theme and then read a resource created by authors looking at ways to begin a piece of writing. We completed writing exercises such as free-writes and shared our initial ideas, helping one another to hone our topics and completing a task based on form and medium. Very good work everyone, I can’t wait to hear your presentations next week and hope you found today helpful creatively! Keep up the amazing ideas 🙂

      Homework

      hmwrk

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    • #44077
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 9

      In today’s class we began sharing our ideas for pieces for the Orwell Prize, beginning with some interesting writing tips (i.e., using as few words as possible, artistic incongruity, etc) to inspire the class. The students then took it in turns to present their ideas for what they were going to write to the rest of the class, answering my answers workshopping the initial idea and then each receiving a piece of advice to consider. Finally they looked at the resource regarding how to start writing and wrote the beginning of their pieces, in preparation for writing the full thing next week. Amazing work everyone, I was super impressed by your ideas and thought you came up with outstanding ideas for the things you wanted to write about. I can’t wait to see what next week brings- see you then! 🙂

      Writing tips: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5LxiYwMrwRg

      Homework

      hmwrk

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    • #44215
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 10

      In today’s class we completed our writing for the Orwell Prize in class as a mini mock exam. the class wrote their pieces using everything they had learned and researched to help them. Wonderful work today and for the past ten weeks everyone, I hope you all have lovely Christmases and look forward to seeing you all next course. Keep up the fantastic writing, creativity and teamwork and keep being the bright, sparky and original writers you all are. Congratulations everyone & see you soon 🙂

      Homework

      mwr

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    • #44217
      Lynn
      Participant

      Hi Beth,

      Thank you for this amazing course, I really enjoyed writing!

      There’s my mock and see you next time:)

      lynn

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      • #44332
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Lynn,

        You’re welcome!
        Fantastic work on your mock, your feedback is below 😀

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    • #44304
      Amber
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      HW uploaded! Thanks for the awesome course!

      • #44336
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Amber,

        You’re very welcome!
        Excellent work on your mock, I’ve uploaded your feedback. See you soon 😀

    • #44358

      Dear Beth,

      Thanks for the course, here is my mock 🙂

      Jessie

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