Roald Dahl 7-9A3

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    • #4964
      VMWEdu
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      The Twits

      Lesson 1  

      Lesson 2

      George’s Marvellous Medicine

      Lesson 3

      Lesson 4

      Esio Trot

      Lesson 5

      Lesson 6

      Matilda

      Lesson 7

      Lesson 8

      Fantastic Mr Fox

      Lesson 9

      Lesson 10

       

      VIPERS questions for each book:

      https://vmwedu.com/category/intensive-reading/

       

       

       

    • #4967
      VMWEdu
      Keymaster

      Summary for Lesson 1:

      What did we cover
      – Discussed how the book group will work
      – Introduced ourselves to each other
      – Discussed our initial thoughts on The Twits
      – Did a character study (using illustrations of the characters)
      – Worked through the questions for the first half of The Twits

      Class report
      It was wonderful to meet the new students today; they all were brilliantly enthusiastic and
      lively, which made for such a welcoming and warm environment, and a great start to our
      sessions together.
      Firstly, we discussed how the sessions will work (i.e. 2 lessons a week, 2 homeworks a week,
      a different book every week, preparing VIPERS answers before the lessons).
      We then went round to introduce ourselves; it was lovely to hear what the students favourite
      books were and see them being so warm to one another.
      After discussing our initial thoughts on The Twits, we did a character study using illustrations
      of the characters; we discussed what we could tell about them for the way they were
      presented. I was impressed by how attentive the students were; they noticed how details such
      as the characters’ expressions or the colours they wore tell the reader so much about what
      type of people they are.
      Next, we moved onto going through the VIPERS questions. I was delighted to see the
      students get stuck in with confidence, as it can be very daunting to share your ideas with
      people you have only just met. The answers they gave were intelligent and well supported.
      When we spent longer discussing some questions (such as ‘are Mr. and Mrs/ Twit a good
      match) it was great to hear the personal opinions of different students and see how well they
      could present their arguments.
      Overall, this was a hugely encouraging first session, and I am very excited to continue our
      work together and see how the students continue to grow in confidence and ability.
      With every new session, the work we do will become slightly more challenging; this will be a
      wonderful opportunity for the students to push themselves and discover a real joy in reading
      and discussing these marvellous books!

      Homework for Lesson1:

      Using The Twits as inspiration, write the first paragraph of a story titled ‘The Darlings’ in the style
      of Roald Dahl.
      Think about how you will introduce the characters of ‘the darlings’, and how you will capture the
      reader’s attention.
      OR
      Summarise the first half of the book in 4 sentences

    • #5044
      Tommy
      Participant

      Tommy wrote it on papaer. I took a picture of it.

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      • #5186
        Jessica
        Participant

        Great job, Tommy!

        You have very concisely got across what happens in the first half of the book and included some good detail.

        To improve, you could explain a bit more about what ‘bad things’ and ‘tricks’ are explored (i.e. the wormy spaghetti, the bird pie).

    • #5046
      Zelin
      Participant

      From the beginning to the half of this book it said two ugly stupid and disgusting  people doing silly things. And the middle to the end is  as person called Mr.twit use a very very very very striking thing to caught birds for eat. And his monkey needs to be up slide down for six hour a day. And the monkey didn’t let Mr.twit to caught birds so they go to buy gun. The monkey has made Mr.twit and Mrs.twit up slide down, because they are up slide down to long so they died

      • #5187
        Jessica
        Participant

        Wonderful work, Zelin!

        You have included many fantastic details about what happens and given a very clear overview of who the Twits are and what they do. The adjectives you use in your summary are particularly helpful, as they give the reader a more vivid understanding of the book.

        To improve, make sure you pay close attention to what the question is asking (i.e. this question was asking for a summary of the first half only).

    • #5057
      Angela
      Participant

      This book’s introduction is about how people are with beards to cover up their look.The main character of this book are called Mr.Twit and Mrs.Twit.They will have a bird pie day every Wednesday, he used some strange superglue and stuck it on the big dead tree in their garden to make birds get stuck on their for the whole night.They have been making their monkeys from the circuit suffering blood in the head for at least 6 hours a day.

      • #5058
        Angela
        Participant

        thanks   😉 😀

      • #5188
        Jessica
        Participant

        Brilliant work, Angela!

        You have given an excellent summary of the story. The details you include are wonderful as they help the reader to form a clear idea of what happens in The Twits.

        To improve, you could also mention some of the tricks which they played on each other (i.e. the wormy spaghetti or the shrinks).

    • #5065
      Kaitlyn
      Participant

      Kaitlyn

       

       

      • #5189
        Jessica
        Participant

        Fabulous work, Kaitlyn!

        This is a wonderful summary of the first half of the story. You have done a particularly good job of introducing the characters of the Twits and giving lots of great detail about them.

        To improve, you could give some examples of the tricks that they played on each other (i.e. the shrinks and the wormy spaghetti).

    • #5083
      EvanZ
      Participant

      Mr twit is a hairy old man . Mrs twit is a selfish old woman. They love to play bad jokes on each other. They have a monkey circus and a house with no windows.

      • #5190
        Jessica
        Participant

        Good work, Evan!

        This is a very clear and concise summary of the first half. You have included many important points and given the reader a solid overview of the first half.

        To improve, you could give a little more detail about the jokes they played on each other (i.e. the glass eye and wormy spaghetti).

    • #5084
      Charles
      Participant

      Firstly, the Book tells us there are two persons (Mr. Twit and Mrs. Twit).

      And then, Mr. Twit and Mrs. Twit try to make each other angry.

      And then, the Book started talking about Mr. Twit’s home and on every Wednesday Mr. Twit eats bird pie.

      Lastly, one-time Mr. Twit went to collect bird’s but there was no bird there was only four children then Mr. Twit said ok, children pie.

      • #5191
        Jessica
        Participant

        Wonderful work, Charles!

        This is a very clear and concise overview of the first half of The Twits. The layout of your work makes it very easy for the reader to follow, and you have done a great job of covering the main points.

        To improve, you could give some more details about how they make each other angry (i.e. by doing tricks such as ‘the glass eye’ trick).

    • #5099
      VMWEdu
      Keymaster

      Summary for Lesson2:

       

      Homework for Lesson 2:

      In one paragraph, explain what your favourite part of The Twits was and why

    • #5168
      Angela
      Participant

      sorry this one is wrong

    • #5169
      Angela
      Participant

      I like the books Twits because the thing about fighting about eachother’s idea is very funny and having what they should deserve this ending is very good.

      • #5192
        Jessica
        Participant

        Good job, Angela!

        You have explained why you like the book well. It is great that you give more than one reason and mention that you find it ‘funny’.

        To improve, you could give some examples from the text to demonstrate your point (i.e. mention what happens in one of their fights and how the story ends).

    • #5226
      Kaitlyn
      Participant

      I like the part that mr Twit said mrs Twit has shrink because mr Twit put a small bit of wood to mrs Twits walking stick it just looked like mrs Twit has shrinked mr Twit did the same thing to mrs Twits chair and put a little tiny bit of wood on the walking stick and chair every night he well do the same thing over and over again.

    • #5227
      EvanZ
      Participant

      I like the part 4 sticky little boys the best. It’s going to be so funny when mr twit saw the children on the tree rather then the bird.Mr twit wants to eat the children rather then the birds and it’s
      so humiliating looking at the children bottom’s.

    • #5282
      Zelin
      Participant

      My medicine is made of  toothbrush, sea water, paper (it must be very shredder),apple juice ( you need to put it into the pot then hit it when you Finnish doing the normal apple juice), hair of people. If you drink this medicine you will vomit for seven hour.

      • #5524
        Jessica
        Participant

        Nice work, Zelin!

        This is a very fun idea for a new medicine. You have thought of some very interesting ingredients and the effect of the medicine is very gruesome!

        To improve, you could add some information about how it is made (i.e. you mix the ingredients together and boil it).

    • #5283
      Tommy
      Participant

      Tommy’s homework of lesson 2.

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    • #5290
      Charles
      Participant

      I like the part that mrs twit and mr twit keep making pranks. Cause it is very very funny

    • #5291
      EvanZ
      Participant

      My medicine will be made out of soil watermelon seeds sea water worms potato chips cola sprite tea weed and animal poop. When you drink it you will be able to grow watermelon on your head.

      • #5523
        Jessica
        Participant

        Great work, Evan!

        This is a really fun idea for a new medicine. The ingredients you think of are very interesting and you have been creative in thinking about what it does.

        To improve, you could give some more detail about how it is made (i.e. you boil the ingredients and then distill it).

    • #5306
      Jessica
      Participant

      George’s Marvellous Medicine – Lesson 1 (report)

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    • #5378
      Kaitlyn
      Participant

      George made a marvellous medicine.

      George has a wicked old Nasty horrible grandma.

      George always go on to mischief.

      Georges mom is called Mrs Killy Kranky.

      Georges dad is called Mr Killy Kranky.

      • #5521
        Jessica
        Participant

        Great work, Kaitlyn!

        This is a really good summary of the first half of the story. You have introduced the characters very well.

        To improve, you could give more detail about what George does in this part of the book (i.e. he makes his marvelous medicine)

    • #5396
      Angela
      Participant

      The main character in this book is called George, Mr. Killy Kranky, Mrs. Kranky.

      George made a new medicine.

      George gave the new medicine to grandma.

      grandma grew a whole lot taller after sipping the medicine.

      that my homework UwU

      • #5522
        Jessica
        Participant

        Great work, Angela!

        You have summarised the first half of the book really well. You introduce the key characters very concisely and give a good overview of the action.

        To improve, you could add a little more detail about what happens (i.e. George puts anything he can find into the potion and gives it to grandma as revenge).

    • #5453
      Jessica
      Participant

      George’s Marvelous Medicine – Lesson 2 (report)

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    • #5554
      Angela
      Participant

      I like the book George’s Marvelous Medicine because it is very funny. My favorite part is when grandma gets smaller and smaller because she finally gets what she deserves– disappear from Earth!

      This is my homework for week 2 lesson 2 thanks! 😀

      • #5594
        Jessica
        Participant

        Great work, Angela!

        You have explained why you like the book really well and described your favourite section in good detail.

        To improve, you could also explain what about the book is very funny (i.e. the characters, what happens in the story).

    • #5626
      Charles
      Participant

      If I am making a Medicine I will put lots of chocolates in a coke and do you know why? They will not see it because they are all black and when some one take it that person will become very very fat.

    • #5627
      Charles
      Participant

      The favourite part that I like is good bye grandma, because grandma was so dumb. When you don’t know what drink it is you won’t drink it, but grandma just thinks it is tea and drinks it.

    • #5711
      Tommy
      Participant

      Tommy’s homework

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    • #5717
      Kaitlyn
      Participant

      I like the Part that  George’s grandma shrank into so small that you cant even see her because she is mean only cares about herself nasty scary and horrible.

    • #5722
      Angela
      Participant

      Mr.Hoppy and Mrs.Silver is the main character in this book.

      Alfie is Mrs.Silver’s tortoise and Mr.Hoppy hates it.

      Mr.Hoppy married Mrs.Silver by helping her make Alfie bigger and heavier.

      What does this mean? Alfie helped Mr.Hoppy marry his long-loved person!

      This is my homework for Esio Trot:)~Angela Xie

    • #5723
      Jessica
      Participant

      Esio Trot – Lesson 1 (report)

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    • #5778
      Kaitlyn
      Participant

      Mr hoppy has a secret love who is mrs silver

      mrs silver love a tortoise called Alfie

      Mr hoppy hates Alfie

      Mr hoppy is very smart

      Mrs silver wants Alfie to grow because Alfie is so small Alfie is just 13 ounces.

      • #5875
        Jessica
        Participant

        Great work, Kaitlyn!

        This is a really clear and concise summary of the first half. You have included many of the key points which is great.

        To improve, you could mention what Mr. Hoppy’s plan is too.

    • #5851
      Angela
      Participant

      I like the part when Mr.Hoppy gets Alfie and swaps it with a turtle with two more ounces because it is very exciting whether Mrs.Silver will find out that if Mr.Hoppy lied to him. anyways this is a good book!

      This is my homework for week 3 lesson 6, thanks!

      • #5876
        Jessica
        Participant

        Lovely work, Angela!

        You have picked a great part of the book and explained why you like it very well. You have also included some great details about what happens in this part.

        To improve, you could also mention how this section made you feel (i.e. nervous, curious, intrigued).

    • #5861
      Jessica
      Participant

      Esio Trot – Lesson 2 (report)

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    • #6033
      Kaitlyn
      Participant

      My favourite part about the book is when mr hoppy gave mrs silver the paper because it is very exciting to see if the paper actually works.

      • #6552
        Jessica
        Participant

        Good work, Kaitlyn!

        You have picked a wonderful part of the book as your favourite and explained why you like it so much really well.

        To improve, you could use a quote from the text to help support your statement.

    • #6104
      Jessica
      Participant

      Matilda – Lesson 1 (report)

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    • #6108
      Angela
      Participant

      a question is it that next week we will be starting Fantastic Mr. Fox?

      thanks 🙂

      • #6553
        Jessica
        Participant

        Hi Angela! Yes, we will be starting that book next week 🙂

    • #6110
      Angela
      Participant

      The main character in this book is called Matilda, Mr. Wormwood, Mrs. Wormwood, Mrs. Trunchbull, and Ms. Hunny.

      Matilda is a very smart girl.

      Matilda’s parents, who are Mr. and Mrs. Wormwood was very mean to her.

      Matilda played a few tricks on her dad but he still hasn’t learnt his lesson.

      This is the homework for Matilda’s first lesson

      😉

      • #6554
        Jessica
        Participant

        Great work, Angela!

        This is a wonderful summary of the first half. You have included lots of very important details and introduced the characters well.

        To improve, you could give some examples of what tricks she plays (i.e. the trick with the super glue).

    • #6360
      Charles
      Participant

      ET Lesson 1 Homework:

      Firstly, Mr Hoppy wants Mrs Silver to love humble doing something to save him. And then, one day Mrs Silver wants her turtle Alifa to grow faster.
      Then Mr Hoppy got a chance and he wanted to use the chance.
      LastLu, Mr Hoppy got a plan to do with Alifa .

    • #6362
      Charles
      Participant

      ET Lesson  2 Homework:

      The favorite part that I like is when Mrs. Silver got surprised about the turtle turning so big. Because Mrs. Silver was so dumb that there was no such magic in real world.

    • #6363
      Charles
      Participant

      Matilda Lesson 1 homework:
      <p style=”text-align: center;”>Firstly, on the first chapter the book tells us Matilda is smart.
      Then on the second chapter and the third chapter the book tells us Matilda’s dad does’t like to read books and Matilda is smart to let his dad put on a hat all day.
      And then: there is a ghost at Matilda’s home and Matilda is going to school and she is late.
      Lastly,when Matilda went to school his teacher is Mrs. Honney and also the principle of the school asks a student to eat a big cake.</p>

      • #6555
        Jessica
        Participant

        Brilliant work, Charles!

        This is an excellent summary of the first half of the book. You have covered many of the major plot points and included some great details about the characters.

        To improve, you could also mention the other important characters (i.e. Lavender and Miss. Trunchbull).

    • #6419
      Kaitlyn
      Participant

      Matilda is the main character in this book

      Lavender is Matilda’s best friend

      Miss trunchbull is very rude,stricked and careless

      mrs honey is a kind,loving and careful

      Matilda has powers!

      she is also soooooooo smart

      • #6556
        Jessica
        Participant

        Nice job, Kaitlyn!

        This is a great summary of the first half. You have done a brilliant job of introducing the characters and have given lots of great details about Matilda in particular.

        To improve, you could mention a few of the events that occur in the first half (i.e. the tricks Matilda plays).

    • #6491
      Jessica
      Participant

      Matilda – Lesson 2 (report)

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    • #6493
      Kaitlyn
      Participant

      One day Matilda was hiking and saw a bird fly all the way up the mountain she wished she could also fly so she tried 2 times failed and started hiking but when she went all the way to the top she tried to fly again but she tried 4 times it didn’t work she thinks she’d need a break so she took a five minutes break and tried again. It worked! But instead of flying down she teleported down the she went to travel all around the world not by plane but teleportation. THE END

      • #6557
        Jessica
        Participant

        Wonderful work, Kaitlyn!

        This is a brilliant idea for another trick Matilda might play. You have bee incredibly inventive and the ideas you have come up with are really exciting and fun.

        To improve, you could mention what she did differently that made it work the 5th time.

    • #6580
      Angela
      Participant

      Today was the day to test our grades, Matilda got all correct as usual, but this time was different, after she received the marked test paper there was a sparkle of light. Matilda thought it was nothing so she continued. Three years later, the found out that she had the power to see the answer in a very light pencil trace.

      ~END~

      • #6581
        Angela
        Participant

        this is my homework for lesson 8, thanks!

    • #6844
      Jessica
      Participant

      Fantastic Mr Fox – Lesson 1 (report)

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    • #6874
      Angela
      Participant

      Dear government,

      I hope you can understand how our farming materials get eaten by the Foxes, Badgers, Rabbits, Moles, and Weasels or whatever creature they are, they keep stealing our stuff, it has a few hundreds of our stuff being stolden by them. Like, chickens, goose, and much more. So I wish, as the right in a citizen in here, to get them killed.

      yours sincerely,                                                                                                                    Bean, Bunce, and Boggis

      • #6875
        Angela
        Participant

        This is my homework for Fantastic Mr. Fox’s first lesson, thanks!

      • #6890
        Jessica
        Participant

        Wonderful work, Angela!

        This is a fantastic letter of complaint. You clearly capture the farmers’ anger and have used an excellent formal tone in your writing. The details you include here are wonderful.

        To improve, you could suggest how you want the animals to be exterminated (i.e. I want them hunted down).

    • #7041
      Jessica
      Participant

      Fantastic Mr Fox – Lesson 2 (report)

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