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    • #33374
      VMWEdu
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    • #33410
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 1

      In today’s class we began with our introduction to the history course, thinking about how to approach history in a way that acknowledges bias, thinks carefully about the purpose of historical study and grapples with the nature of historical truth. We began with some blind source analysis, before digging into the history of colonisation of the US and speaking about the role of the historian in society. The class thought about the concept of the balance of evidence and how to think of sources like evidence in a court case. You all really impressed me today with the depth and intricacy of your ideas and how tuned in you were to big academic concepts- really brilliant work today everyone, I look forward to working together this summer! See you next week 🙂

      Homework

      hmwrk

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    • #33422
      jaydenP
      Participant

      Dear Beth, thank you for the amazing lesson.

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      • #33528
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Jayden,

        You’re welcome!

        Fab work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #33429
      Pierce
      Participant

      Homework: Week 1

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      • #33530
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Pierce,

        Fantastic work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #33431
      Amber
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      I have uploaded the homework to the drive. Thank you!

      Colonistion Map:

      • #33433
        Amber
        Participant

        *courtesy of Wikimedia (it’s supposed to be animated)

      • #33532
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Amber,

        Fab work this week, I’ve uploaded your feedback. See you soon 🙂

    • #33520
      Brian
      Participant

      Hi Beth, Sorry for this delayed homework. I just came back from school trip on Thursday, so missed all the lessons in this week.

      please see my homework attached.
      Thanks!

       

       

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      • #33533
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Brian,

        No worries at all!

        Good work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #33555
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 2

      In today’s class we continued our work on the history of the USA, learning today about the early days in the colonisation of America. We began with the class sharing their research, before watching a video talking about the founding of the first colonies. We discussed the example of Roanoak and what this tells us about the experience of colonisers and thought about the impact and role of religion in light of this. We analysed a source from a children’s textbook in 1688 and finally talked through a step-by-step source analysis worksheet and an essay structure example. Fantastic work today class, well done for your enthusiastic ideas and attention to detail throughout. It was wonderful to hear all your analysis, particularly when looking at the source. See you next week 🙂

      John Green video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o69TvQqyGdg

      Homework

      hmwrk

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    • #33563
      Amber
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Thank you for the flippandestidious lesson! 🙂 I have uploaded my homework.

      —————————–

      Just to cool down this week’s sometimes hotly debated colonial ideas…

       

      A frog said to a lamp-post that it looked stumpy.

       

      What did the lamp-post say to the frog?

       

      cr-oak!

       

      *terrible, I know, but still 😉

      • #33731
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Amber,

        Fab joke!

        Brilliant work this week, I’ve uploaded your feedback. See you soon 🙂

    • #33573
      jaydenP
      Participant

      Dear Beth, thank you for the Amazing lesson!!!

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      • #33734
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Jayden,

        You’re welcome!

        Lovely work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #33628
      Brian
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Please see the attached file below of Brian’s history homework.

       

      Kind regards,

       

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      • #33736
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Brian,

        nice work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #33689
      Eva
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Thank you for the amazing lesson!

      -Eva

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      • #33738
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Eva,

        You’re welcome!

        Wonderful work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #33699
      Brand
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Please see the attached file below of my history homework.

      Kind regards,

      Brand

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      • #33740
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Brandon,

        Terrific work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #33727
      Linxi
      Participant

      thanks for the lesson

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      • #33742
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Linxi,

        You’re welcome 🌷

        Great work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #33749
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 3

      In today’s class we zoomed in on the central historical event of the course: the Salem witch trials. We began today by thinking about what we think of when we think of witchcraft, and what factors in society appear to lead to these beliefs. We then learned about the history of 17th-century Salem, discussing what happened in the witch trials and how the events unfolded. We spoke about what kind of threat witchcraft represented to people at this time, learned from a courtroom source of the supposed symptoms and discussed what this tells us about gender, class and religion at the time. Wonderful and passionate work today everyone- your knowledge and inference skills were super impressive and it was great to hear all your arguments about the ways in which witchcraft reveals facts about historical understandings of the world. See you next week 🙂

      Salem trials video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NVd8kuufBhM&themeRefresh=1

      Homework

      hmwrk

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    • #33778
      Amber
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Thanks for the glimmerastic lesson🤩🤩🤩!

      I have uploaded my homework.

       

      Morose fact: 2 dogs were hung at Salem. How sad.

       

      • #33936
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Amber,

        That is a very morose fact!

        Brilliant work this week, I’ve uploaded your feedback. See you soon 🙂

         

    • #33809
      jaydenP
      Participant

      Dear Beth, thank you for the amazing lesson.

      I also uploaded statistics on the witch trials.

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      • #33937
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Jayden,

        Those statistics are such a great addition!

        Nice work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #33826
      Brian
      Participant

      Dear Beth

      Please see the homework attached below.

      Thank you for the great lesson and have a nice week! 🙂

      Kind regards,

      Brian Liu

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      • #33939
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Brian,

        You’re welcome, thank you 😀

        Lovely work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #33838
      Eva
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Thank you for the astounding lesson!

      -Eva

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      • #33941
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Eva,

        Brilliant work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See  you soon 🙂

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    • #33911
      Linxi
      Participant

      thanks for the lesson!

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      • #33945
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Linxi,

        You’re welcome!

        Some nice work this week, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #33927
      Brand
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Thank you the amazing lesson.

      Brandon

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      • #33947
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Brandon,

        You’re welcome!

        Excellent work this week, I’ve attached your  feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #33964
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 4

      In today’s class we worked on source analysis, building off the foundations we built last week when thinking about the Salem witch trials. We began with a discussion of what challenges Salem presents to the historian and what skills we need to analyse this period in history. We then thought about The Crucible, and what it can teach us about Salem when we read against the grain. The class then completed some excellent source analysis on two primary sources, thinking about purpose, author, content, tone, before we had some final discussions on types of sources that are helpful to the historian. Well done today everyone- you all shared some fantastic ideas that were really impressively detailed and well thought-out. Keep up the amazing work, good luck revising for your mini mock next week and remember the extension is optional, I want you to focus mainly on revision and then you can do some source analysis if you would like as an extension. See you then 🙂

      Links for sources:

      •https://lisahistory.net/pages/LUps.htm
      •https://salem.lib.virginia.edu/generic.html
      •https://www.danverslibrary.org/archive/annenberg-grant-report/

      Homework 

      hmwrk

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      • #34083
        Pierce
        Participant

        Hello!

        I’ve finally caught up, here’s the homework for the remaining lessons I’ve missed.

         

        Many thanks,

        Pierce

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        • #34184
          Beth
          Participant

          Hi Pierce,

          Great work on these – you’ve made some fab observations on the sources you chosen really focusing on the small details to build the bigger picture!

          I’ve attached your feedback for week 3 below, see you soon 🙂

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    • #33970
      Amber
      Participant

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      Dear Beth,

      I have uploaded the homework. Thank you for the specaliendriousicious lesson!😎😎

       

      Above: Sarah Good, victim of the Salem trials

      • #34052
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Amber,

        You’re welcome!
        Superb work this week, I’ve uploaded your feedback. See you soon 🙂

    • #34123
      jaydenP
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Thank you for the Fantastic lesson, my homework is attached below.

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      • #34180
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Jayden,

        Sorry for the delay on the marking here!
        Great work, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #34128
      Eva
      Participant

      Hi Beth!

      Thank you for the amazing lesson!

      -Eva

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      • #34182
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Eva,

        Apologies for the slightly late marking!

        Brilliant work, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #34138
      Linxi
      Participant

      Thanks for the lesson!!!

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      • #34471
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Linxi,

        You’re welcome!

        Super work on your mock, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #34140
      Linxi
      Participant

      the mock is the one above

    • #34141
      Amber
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Thank you for the stupendous lesson! I have uploaded my mock- thanks!

       

      🙂

      • #34473
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Amber,

        You’re welcome!

        Lovely work on your mock, I’ve uploaded your feedback. See you soon 🙂

    • #34144
      jaydenP
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Thank you for the astounding  final lesson.

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      • #34474
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Jayden,

        You’re very welcome!

        Good work on your mock, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #34148
      Brian
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Thank you for the great course!

      My mock document is attached below,

      Have a great week!

      Brian

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      • #34476
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Brian,

        Fab work on your mock, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #34152
      Tom
      Participant

      Hw

      • #34469
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Tom,

        There’s nothing attached here – if you upload your mock then I can mark it ASAP 😀

    • #34157
      Johnny
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Thank you for the dazzling course!

      Attached is my mock.

      Best wishes,

      Johnny

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      • #34478
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Johnny,

        you’re welcome, I’m so glad you enjoyed it!

        Gorgeous work on your mock, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #34165
      Brand
      Participant

      Dear Beth,

      Thank you for the amazing course!

      Attached is my mock test.

      Brandon

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      • #34480
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Brandon,

        You’re so welcome, I’m glad to hear you enjoyed the course!
        Fantastic work on your mock, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #34178
      Beth
      Participant

      Summary for Lesson 5

      In today’s class we completed our mock exam, bringing together all the skills and historical knowledge the class has amassed over the summer course and putting it into practice. The class chose between writing an essay or a source analysis and completed this with fantastic focus and determination. Really excellent work over this course everyone- it’s been a joy to hear all your fascinating ideas and thoughts about the way we think about history. I will get your mocks marked over this week so remember to check back here for feedback and I will hopefully see you all in the next course. Amazing work everyone- well done 🙂

      Homework

      hmwrk

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    • #34196
      Eva
      Participant

      Hi Beth!

      Thank you for the amazing lesson!

      Please find attached a late attempt at the mini mock. The second to last paragraph is definitely a bit rushed, because I was running out of time at that point, but I did write the conclusion before finishing the content so the essay is complete.

      Thanks again!

      -Eva

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      • #34482
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Eva,

        That’s okay, good job at getting it finished anyway!

        Fabulous work on your mock, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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    • #34312
      Pierce
      Participant

      Hello!

      I decided to have a bit of fun and wrote an extra section after time was up, it’s labelled within the subtitle of that section.

       

      Have a great summer,

      Pierce

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      • #34316
        Pierce
        Participant

        Oh, sorry about the bother but I don’t think you may have missed marking my lesson 4 homework. I uploaded it with the lesson 3 homework because I was slightly behind on the lessons. I had uploaded it as an image so maybe that’s why it was missed.

        Sorry about the inconvenience,

        Pierce

        • #34470
          Beth
          Participant

          Hi Pierce,

          I did see that and gave a brief feedback in the reply – it wasn’t a full piece of writing so I couldn’t mark it as one. If you write up your annotations into an essay I could have a look at it! 🙂

      • #34484
        Beth
        Participant

        Hi Pierce,

        Fabulous work on your mock, I’ve attached your feedback below. See you soon 🙂

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