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The most terrible wedding in history
It was a day for a wedding. What’s Giao will marry Giao o Giao. They have the wedding at the “liangzainiubi”cave because of the candy. What’s Giao and Giao o Giao went on the stage and prepared to be married. The saint said: “f**k s**t motherf*****r **** *********** ****!”
The bunch of bad words make the families angry. What’s Giao and Giao o Giao point a 🖕 at us. Harry take out the rpg and I take a m3e1a. We BiuBiu the saint and another saint comes out. We got thrown out the cave. But me and Harry change the liangzainiubitang into liangzainuclearbomb.
Saint says: “Giao Giao Giao Giao Giao(unknown language)?” They all replied: “No!” What’s Giao said: “let’s liangzainiubi!” “Liangzainiubi!”they all shouted.
Suddenly booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo…m.
Liangzainiubi cave was gone.
GIAO END
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I Lose Calven
In a really nice summer, I am playing my video game, so much so my Mum think I am hooked on them,maybe she is right I do spend a lot of time playing them.
“Sam will you feed Calvin” that is my Mum
And Calvin is my dog,I said “Just a minute Mum.” “ Ok but don’t forget, I need to go outside for a minute, you need to feed Calvin before I come back home!” This game is so difficult that I can’t even finish the first level. I use 1 hour to finish the game. When my mom come back she ask me “Sam do you feed Calvin.” “No! I am in big trouble.” I said “I am so sorry I am going to feed him now.” I think Calvin was starving now. But when I go out to the backyard OH MY GOD Calvin is gone I can’t find him everywhere. I went all the place to find Calvin,when we are ready to give up, I went to my grandparents house, and I hear a dog was barking to me I find Calvin. When I go home I know that I love game,but I love Calvin even more.
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Beautiful work, Samuel!
You have done a wonderful job of selecting your title and character’s names. You give the reader a very clear idea of what the story will be about and the repetition of Calven’s name is really effective.
To improve, you could try to use some other techniques that we have learned about (i.e. symbolism).
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