Roald Dahl 7-9A5

Wonderful work, Joycelyn!

This is a lovely start to ‘The Darlings’. You have introduced the setting and characters very well, and your illustration is beautiful.

To improve, you could tell us a little bit about them (i.e. what do they like, what don’t they like).

Great work, Lauren!

This is an excellent summary of the first half. You have introduced the Twits very well and covered some of the major plot points.

To improve, you could give some examples of the tricks they play on each other (i.e. the glass eye trick).

Good job, Tia!

This is a very clear and concise summary. You have done a great job at painting a picture of what the Twits are like and present your work in a very easy-to-read way.

To improve, you could give some examples of the tricks they play (i.e. the wormy spaghetti).

Nice work, Tia!

You have picked a fab part of the book as your favorite. You describe the scene really well and it is great that you mention how you find it ‘funny’.

To improve, you could use quotations from this part of the book to support your answer.