Some people say learning a musical instrument is a good thing to do when you are young .Do you agree with this statement ?Give your personal opinion ,backing up your points with examples.
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Some people say learning a musical instrument is a good thing to do when you are young .Do you agree with this statement ?Give your personal opinion ,backing up your points with examples.
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Learning a musical instrument is definitely a good thing to do when you’re young. As many people have said, children learn like sponges. Maybe some people don’t believe that at all but I disagree because I have my own proof and experience as I have started learning the piano when I was four, then the cello when I was eight. Learning an instrument helped me release stress a lot and also helped me in extracurricular lessons. Maybe it wouldn’t become very useful in the future but it benefits them as it is like a talent that never leaves and it is definitely something to be proud of.
Learning a musical instrument also benefits the brain which will help them in their studies (e.g. math and english). It also helps the physical aspects of the body, making sure that you are fit. Do you ever want to boost your memory? If yes, then learning a musical instrument will be very suitable for that, especially when you’re learning a string instrument. This helps as you would remember all the positions of the notes. Playing a musical instrument in the ensemble is good for your cooperation skills as well. You would begin to listen to others which will improve your self esteem without being too arrogant. Playing an instrument when you are young will also benefit your happiness when you’re older.
If you start off younger, I would give you a head start with most things in life and you would take in more from it. In my own opinion, learning a musical instrument when your younger is: beneficial, supportive and useful.
– Sisley
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